AppleJack is sick and tired of watching her sister get bullied left and right. She decides to hatch a plan to fix it by "raising a barn".
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Raise this barn... Raise this barn...
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4454230 it's funny, because I got the idea for this story while listening to that song, hence the name.
4454245 Raise this barn... I know! Applejack tortures small children!!!
4454251 So, first impressions. How is the story? Being that it is my first ever attempt I'm curious about what people think.
4454277 I really like it!
... Does Applejack beat the living shit out of Twilight?
Does Applejack open a can of Jack-fu? GETITGETITGETIT!!!
4454287 guess you will have to wait to find out. Also, yes I get it lol.
Haven't even started reading and I know where this is going
Keep this going!
this stuff
More plz!
Should be RAZE This Barn! With the ponies inside it.
And with fire. 
I love me some child abuse in the morning.
Pretty damn solid grimdark stuff you got here pally.
Good work!
4454835 thank you. I will try updating at a reasonable pace. I'm glad you are enjoying it.
AppleJack, embodiment of honesty. When Luna asks her "Did thou do this?"
"Why yes, yes ah did Princess."
<3 love it so far!
Applejack's all one word
you should say who's speaking in the beginning
think theres something else too but I'll follow non the less
4455251 Glad you are enjoying it.
4454230 together we can raise this barn …
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4455251 I would love if that was actually apart of it
Interesting, but it needs some proof reading. Some of the punctuation is in front of the apostrophes, but the fic is good. Some capitalization is also needed.
4455457 I'm trying to fix it up. Thank you for letting me know. Other than that, hope you enjoy the fic!
4455467
No problem!
Jack spartsons review: 7 out of 10 fic, not bad of a story, a bit of originality of applejack that i like,
Felt sorry for the cmc.
Mistakes and opinions to make your fic better:
1. If applejack becomes a villain than will the elements of harmony become useless?
2. Why does applejack have these thoughts amd where did they come from?
3. If applejack is dreaming about what she will do luna will discover this.
4. Why wasnt silver spoon or babs involved in the vision?
This fic has potental but make sure u fill up the plot holes.
Hashtag: join the creed
4455543 Thanks for the input, but you may have misread or misinterpreted some of the story. Babs Seed and Silver spoon weren't in the vision because only a piece of it was seen by Luna. Kinda like how in the Season four finale, Luna saw Tirek steal some pony's magic, but didn't see Discord's betrayal. I haven't put AppleJack dreaming in the story and the other two will be answered in due time. Her thoughts and feelings were caused by Trixie when she was little, check ch. 1.
Nice story.Keep going!!
4455543 1. At this point the elements are already useless
2. Because nobody is stopping it
3. Most likely
4. Because Diamond Tiara is the ring master of the organization
4460573. Thats whats so good about the story!
4460580 true, but I don't like how (in heart) Applejack is in the right
4460586 my grandpa always told me. The worlds greatests posions is revenge and blame.
4460600 your grandpa was a wise man. Expect an update between now and tomorrow.
4460586 In a way she is right, but she is also wrong. There are other ways to deal with a situation like this, but due to her past and her frustration, she doesn't see another way in her mind.
Keep it coming!
4460600 True story
Bit short....
Yes a bit short... Hmm sure go ahead.
The chapters are a bit short because initially, I only planed on making this a 4-5 ch. story. I' am making them longer though.
More chapters please
So, I know this has taken a VERY long time, but I will be creating new chapters shortly. I lost my inspiration awhile back and with college and work taking the majority of my free time, this hasn't been a priority. Get ready for more chapters soon.