Remember to Floss....
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Colgate twirled the phone cord with her magic.
“Listen Berry, I need to talk to you about a lot of things. Things I can’t… shouldn’t tell you over the phone. You know my hours. Stop by as soon as possible… please.”
With her head on the table she hung on the phone. Her gut had mixed feelings. Berry Punch was her friend and at one point her mare friend. It was a beautiful relationship until Colgate found out about Berry’s drinking. Some days Berry would flirt with customers over the phone. Other days she would yell at Colgate and say terrible things. Things about Colgate being a bad dentist and how she enjoyed flossing at a perverted level. Despite the problems she still cared about Berry and was willing to give her another shot. She also had a stack of paperwork that was nearly the height of a small pony.
Colgate used her magic to place the paper in a neat stack. As she ran through her usually closing duties her thoughts focused in on one thing.
Fleur. 4:30. Mouth.
Fleur’s mouth had an intoxicating effect on the mare. Of course she knew that her obsession would more than likely seem weird, however; Colgate did not care. The lust of a pony’s mouth was no different to her than the lust of a pony’s flank.
What’s wrong with liking her mouth? Normal. That’s normal? Yes. Other ponies would be admiring her eyes and her mane and… it’s no different. I am perfectly fine. I’m normal.
Colgate continued to justify herself to herself while unknowingly sprucing up her office for Fleur. The table in the waiting room was wiped clean and held the latest magazines. Any dead, dying, or bland looking plants were replaced by fresh flowers that were blooming and vibrant. Colgate’s personal dental tools were receiving a sanitizing bath in boiling water. A small stick of incense was lit and filled the office with the sweet vanilla aroma. Everything was made to be perfect like Fleur’s mouth. After a few minutes Colgate heard a knock at her door.
I told her 4:30! She shouldn't be here now… I’m not ready!
Colgate rushed over and stood before the door. She took in a deep breath and exhaled. A happy grin found its way on her face as she opened the door. The grin then fell and she found herself confused.
“Berry?”
The plum color mare smirked.
“Well you did say as soon as possible. Considering everything you look good.”
“What do you mean I look good? What the buck are you doing here Berry?”
Berry smirked as she brushed past Colgate. She maneuvered around like a purring cat until she found what she was looking for. Colgate heard Berry sigh as she found the stack of paperwork.
“Jeez Colgate. See what happens when you ditch your mare friend? I could be drunk off my flank and have Derpy’s eyes and still finish more paperwork than you!”
Colgate walked around Berry and started to push her out the office. Berry blushed.
“Back less than five minutes and you can’t keep your hooves off me. Most employees would charge for sexual harassment…lucky for you I always enjoyed your hooves on training.”
“Damn it Berry! Not Now! I can’t have you hear when she- “
Berry twirled around until her head was now pushing back against Colgate’s. Berry raised a brow.
“She? Who is she?”
The dentist pony stopped pushing Berry and fell back on her haunches. She nervously shuffled her hooves. Berry Scoffed.
“You already have another mare friend!? Well buck me Colgate! I know it’s been a few months but damn it I didn’t think you would just go and buck the next pony who smiles at you. Fine I’ll leave since I’m always a problem!”
Berry started to storm towards the door. Colgate screamed after her.
“Berry don’t go! Please!”
The plum pony turned to face her friend. Colgate was still sitting and she looked scared.
“Look she isn’t my mare friend. She is Fleur De Lis. The most attractive supermodel on the bucking planet. I’m nervous. It’s not because she has the best damn flank I have ever seen. It’s not because she has a perfect mane and hooves. It’s… Well… I am in love with her mouth.”
The silence that followed was deafening. Both ponies stared at each other for a minute long eternity. Berry had known Colgate longer than most ponies. The only skeleton Colgate had in her closet was that she had a rather strong fetish for ponies’ mouths. Berry never understood it. Maybe it was because she was an overly passionate dentist. Maybe it was because she was really just kind of creepy. Berry didn’t know but, what she did know was that Colgate was trying to score… a mouth. Berry burst into laughter and began to roll on the floor.
“I’m serious Berry! I have never been so attracted to something in my life. I nearly fainted on top of her when working. It was perfect. I even thought blasphemous things. Berry! Seriously listen to me!”
Berry pointed a hoof at her.
“Colgate! You are the best! Bucking weirder than manticore sex but that’s ok! You know I was honestly jealous and angry too. I probably still am but by Celestia’s sunny plot I am going to help you score some super model mouth. Oh buck just saying it sounds funny!”
Colgate lowered her head. While she always justified her mouth fetish she was still sensitive about it. Berry noticed her friends gloomy face.
“Oh cheer up will you! You aren’t that weird! I hear Twilight has sex with her books! Don’t’ believe me? Just ask Spike! I heard that Rainbow has a blow up doll of Spitfire in one of the clouds above Ponyville. Trust me Colgate. You aren’t the only pony with some weird kinky fetish. In any case I’ve got your back only because I have to see where this goes.”
Colgate stood and walked to her friend. She hugged Berry tight.
“Thanks Berry. It means a lot to me.”
“No problem. Now when is she supposed to be here?”
“In ten minutes.”
“Perfect.”
Fleur made her way to the dental office from Rarity’s shop. She had seen Rarity’s work and knew that if any pony could help her start a fashion company it was Rarity. Deep down Fleur did not care at all for creating designs. She knew that was not her strong suit and figured having Rarity on her team would fix everything. It would provide Fleur’s new company the edge it would need to crush the competition and give Rarity everything she could ever want. The designer would never have to worry about impressing the high lords of fashion as she would become one. Fleur was happy that Rarity accepted the offer so quickly because it only left her with two more ponies to convince. If her visit to Ponyville goes as she planned she will leave with a new company and whiter teeth.
She approached the door to the office and raised her hoof. Before any knocking could commence the door opened and Fleur was greeted by Berry.
“Miss Fleur welcome! Please come in we have been expecting you!”
Fleur walked past Berry and looked around the office in confusion. Everything had been cleaned, rearranged, or altered in some way. While the new look was nice, the rapid change confused Fleur. Had Colgate gone out of her way for a simple dental appointment What was with the sudden presence of Berry? Fleur looked to Berry and politely nodded at her.
“I do not believe we have met miss-“
“Berry Punch! It’s a pleasure to meet you Miss Fleur. I’m sure Colgate is as honored to have you here as I am. I am her assistant. Whether it is paperwork or dental work I am here to help her.”
“Pleasure to meet you Berry. Colgate made no mention of an assistant. It is nice to know she does not drown herself in her work alone.”
Berry eyed Fleur from head to hoof and liked what she saw. Most ponies had seen the mare in magazines or the news. Berry enjoyed watching her up close. She directed Fleur to one of the comfortable cushions available in the waiting lounge. Fleur followed along even more confused. She thought she was coming after they had closed. She wondered why exactly she had to wait and what Colgate was doing.
“So Fleur may I grab you something? Water or a magazine?”
“No thank you Berry. Not to sound rude but, why am I waiting? Colgate led me to believe that I was to be the only pony she was meeting after the office closed.”
Berry smirked.
“Don’t you worry Fleur! Colgate is just getting ready. To be honest I think she is a little nervous around you.”
Fleur cocked her head to the side. Her curiosity peaked.
“Why would she be nervous?”
Berry invited herself onto the cushion next to Fleur. She spoke like a filly spilling gossip while showing off a devious smile.
“Well you are Fleur De Lis! You are the mare of mares! You are no mere supermodel! No, you are the closest thing to a goddess without actually being a goddess.”
Fleur blushed at that. The blush intensified as Berry leaned in closer to her and continued to shower her in compliments.
“What I mean by that is, that you are not looked at in the same manner as a pony would look at Celestia or Luna. Like Celestia you have a coat as bright as the cleanest snow in the north. You share the same jaw dropping figure that Luna has. You mane is smooth and flows in the wind with a natural beauty. When most ponies look at you they see some of the best features that a pony can have. The only other ponies to have those feature are deities. Most ponies have respect though. They don’t look at Celestia or Luna as sex symbols. They look to them as ponies today look at the nude sculptures from ancient Preek culture. Sure those sculptures are naked mares and stallions but, we look at them as art and not for sexual pleasure. You?”
Berry leaned in even closer. So close that Fleur could feel her breath on her neck.
“You aren’t a goddess. You are just the finest specimen of pony ever to grace this world. So most ponies look at you in the exact opposite way. They want you. Mares, stallions, and everything in between can’t resist the perfection that is Fleur De Lis.”
Fleur cautiously turned her head to look at the ponies who was mere inches away. Berry was watching her with the most lustful look she had seen and that was saying something. Fleur felt dirty just receiving that stare. She bit her lip then chuckled like a scared filly.
“Uh. T-thank you? I think?”
Berry bit her own lip but in a seductive manner.
“You are welcome.”
Fleur shuffled awkwardly to add a few inches between them. Berry just turned and immediately closed their distance. Fleur fell on her back and Berry stood on top of her with all four legs trapping Fleur right under the mare’s lustful gaze. Fleur smiled nervously.
“So um… Colgate?”
Berry lowered her head. Fleur thought that she was going to attempt to kiss her. Instead berry stopped exactly one inch away from doing so. Strangely enough it was then that Fleur noticed that Berry actually smelled like Berries.
“Oh Fleur don’t worry. Colgate is just nervous because you are a celebrity. She doesn’t want to do to you want some ponies do… She just wants to impress you so terribly bad. So, bad… so…”
“B-berry?”
“So…bad. Just… so naughty…”
Berries eyes were closed now and she was daydreaming right over Fleur. The model felt so scared as she watched the plum pony lick her lips with her eyes shut. Fleur had some idea of what she was daydreaming about.
“BERRY WHAT THE BUCK?! GET OFF OF HER!”
Berry jumped up and fell backwards as dental instruments whizzed past her head. Colgate’s horn glowed with magic. Several different tools levitated around her. One by one they flew at Berry who struggled to dodge them.
“Colgate! Watch-“
“OUT!!! GET OUT BEFORE I TEAR YOU BUCKING TEETH OUT AND SHOVE THEM UP YOUR PLOT!”
Berry galloped out the door as fast as possible. Colgate slammed it shut using her magic and hurried over to Fleur. She help the pony up off the floor.
“Fleur I am so sorry. I can’t even believe what happened. I am such a stupid pony. If you want to leave I’ll understand. Are you hurt? Did she do anything? This is what I get for trying to give her, her job back. Buck me.”
Fleur shook her head and was still flustered from Berry’s antics. She took a chance to regulate her breathing.
“I am fine Colgate. A little shaken by such… bluntness… but fine.”
Colgate walked the pony into her room and sat her down in the chair. She pulled out Fleur’s files and placed them on a table next to her.
“I will get to work ASAP! Then we will see about the condition of your teeth. Just let me grab some other tools. I have some that should be sterilized now.”
Fleur nodded and Colgate exited the room. She cautiously approached the front door and cracked it open just enough. Berry was still their smiling. Colgate looked for any watching ponies and then gave Berry a kiss on the cheek before closing the door. Berry blushed and grinned widely.
“Good luck buddy…”
The Chair (again):
Fleur’s heart rate and mind had settled…mostly. Berry had changed her view on ponies. She knew many ponies had desired her. It was part of being a super model. Her job was to be beautiful and she was damn near perfect at her job. What troubled her was what Berry had said. Did every pony desire like she was some kind of goddess? Did they all view her as the unofficial princess that was buck-able? Fleur tilted her head to watch Colgate enter the room again. The dentist pony smiled and sat next to Fleur. She placed her hooves on the chair and began to lower it into position. As the chair slowly adjusted Fleur spoke.
“Colgate? Are… are you nervous around me?”
Colgate was taken aback by the question. She took a moment to think.
“I suppose I am just a little nervous. I try to treat all my clients the same but, you are… well… you.”
“But why does that make you nervous? Am I intimidating? Haven’t you worked on some of the princesses before?”
“Well yes I have but…”
Fleur sighed and crossed her fore legs in a stressed manner. This worried Colgate. She wondered if she had said something to anger the super model. Carefully Colgate placed a hoof on Fleur’s shoulder.
“Listen Fleur, I didn’t mean to upse-“
“Colgate are you nervous because you find me attractive?”
She retracted her hoof and her eyes grew wide. Her attempts to answer Fleur failed. All the came out of her mouth was a nervous stutter. Colgate was scared.
Oh sweet Celestia… Berry what did you tell her?
Fleur was nearly flat as the chair had reached its position. She turned over to face Colgate as if the chair had been a bed. Her face held the same stressed and stern look. She raised an eyebrow.
“Answer me Colgate.”
Colgate’s face heated up.
This is already awkward… should I just tell her? ‘Oh Fleur you make me nervous because you have a mouth more worthy of worship than all the princesses put together!!!’ Damn it! Colgate are you a bucking idiot?!
“Fleur, you are a very pretty mare. I know for a fact that some ponies melt on the inside when they see you in a magazine or walking down the street. That being said… I am nervous around you because…”
I want to clean your mouth! Floss, rinse, and scape! I want to have Twilight shrink me so I can build a bucking house out of one of your molars and live in that oral heaven you have concealed from me! You’ll never have to fret about your oral health because I’ll handle any oral things you need!!!
“…you are a celebrity. While it’s true that I have done work on the princesses, they are actually down to earth ponies. Even when Luna nearly blew out my eardrums she still managed to seem like a normal pony. You however, I have never met. I don’t know what kind of pony you are. If you aren’t happy with my professional opinion or with the way my office looks, are you going to spread rumors to other Canterlot elite? I don’t mean any disrespect but, you have the power to ruin me if you wanted to.”
Fleur’s stressed look became one of sadness. She looked at Colgate with eyes that put a wide eyed Sweetie Belle to shame.
“Y-you really think I would do that? Ruin your life b-because I didn’t like the way your office looked?”
Oh no please don’t cry. Fleur don’t cry. You might get a salty tear on one of your teeth…and… wow I’m bucked up…
Fleur placed a hoof on Colgate’s shoulder. Her eyes held tears yet burned with beautiful determination.
“Colgate you are right I could destroy you. I could ruin every damn pony who crosses me and that’s the problem. I don’t want you to be nervous. I would never go out of my way to ruin you unless you did something terrible.”
I could do a few terrible things to your mouth…
“I am going to fix this and I would like your help. You’ve been honest with me and you have not tried to… do whatever Miss Berry had planned to do to me… so I would like for you to show me around Ponyville. Introduce me to ponies and help me quell this nervousness that ponies have. For your help I promise that I will do exactly the opposite of what you are nervous about. I will plaster you name around Canterlot as my personal Dentist. You’ll be in the first issue of my magazine and I will even have Rarity design some dresses for you.”
It’s like a date but not a date! Wait that sucks… ugh. Crap!
“Wow I- I’d be honored to Fleur but what about my other appointments? I can’t just cancel on-“
Fleur raised her hoof to silence her.
Damn even the bottom of her hooves are perfect… so clean… so…
“You can and you will. I assure you that when I am done promoting you, you will have more clients than you can handle. I just need you for a few days alright?”
Oh dear Celestia she needs me… I need you too…
Fleur sat back into the proper position and smiled.
“Now Colgate hurry. Get in my mouth and do you thing! We have a town to explore!”
Upon hearing those words Colgate felt heat all over her body. The mare with the perfect mouth just invited her to do her thing in her mouth. Suddenly any and all nervousness left her body and was replaced by sinful and lustful thoughts. She smiled as she turned around in her chair to grab her tools.
Oh I’ll do my thing baby… when I’m done I’m gonna have you in my hooves.
She spun around to face Fleur, her dentist’s mask hid the seductive smile she held.
“Alrighty Fleur open up for me.”
Fleur opened her mouth and looked happy. Colgate stared at the heaven before her.
“Let’s do this.”
Nearly half an hour passed. Colgate’s brow held small beads of sweat and her breathing consisted of deep breathes. Fleur had questioned her if she was ok because it seemed as if the dentist was going to pass out.
I’m just passionate baby… no need to worry. Stress isn’t good for your mouth…
Colgate was finishing up and began to floss Fleur’s mouth. She used her magic to floss as it was the most efficient way. She also did this because Colgate knew what she could do with her floss. Most ponies scheduled regular cleanings because of Colgate’s “floss therapy”. Her flossing gave ponies pleasure in ways they never thought they could get it.
The green string gently made its ways around each of Fleur’s teeth. It passed in between each tooth until the floss was around every single one of them. Colgate smiled.
Get ready Fleur… you’re about to be mine…
Suddenly the floss began to vibrate and move. The string became like a snake that constantly curled around every tooth. The micro vibrations broke up any plaque that Colgate may have missed. Fleur’s eyes grew wide at the sudden feeling then became half lidded with pleasure.
That’s right… Just relaxed and let my little snake work around in your mouth…
The floss began to work up and down on the teeth as well. It pushed ever so slightly on the gums. Hard enough to massage them but, not hard enough to cause any bleeding. Fleur let out the smallest groan of pleasure. Upon realizing what she had done her cheeks burned red and her wide eyes glanced in every direction but Colgate’s.
Well, well, well… some pony likes it when I clean her mouth.
Colgate thought to herself for a moment. She wondered if she could try more with Fleur. The model did seemingly enjoy the magic happening in her mouth. Colgate bit her lip and smiled. The floss began to vibrate a little more. In response Fleur simply closed her eyes. This caused Colgate to smile. Flossing was dirty work that she made enjoyable.
Lucky for you Fleur… I’m a dirty pony…
The floss-er-bation continued for longer than it should have but neither pony complained. Colgate finished by slowly pulling the floss out. The entire string left the same way it came in. It winded out around each tooth until it came out. Fleur exhaled with her eyes shut. While her eyes were closed Colgate leaned in close and whispered.
“Miss Fleur I’m finished.”
Fleur kept her eyes shut and moan again.
“Yes I know but… Why?”
Colgate smirked. She had not expected Fleur to enjoy her flossing so much. It gave the dentist control over the situation. She didn’t speak and gave the model a few moments to realize that she had said. Fleur’s eyes shot open and she jerked out of the chair as fast as Pinkie Pie. She nearly tripped and took a few moments to regain her footing. She still fell to the floor. Colgate walked around to help her up.
“Your legs are probably asleep right? Happens from time to time.”
Fleur didn’t meet her eyes.
“C-Colgate I am sorry that was… I-“
Colgate assisted her back up. When Fleur was standing Colgate had to look up a little. The model was nearly Luna’s height.
“Don’t worry about it Fleur. You just experienced my flossing. I do my best to have every pony leave feeling as if they left Lotus and Aloe’s spa… so you liked it?”
Fleur blushed and cleared her throat.
“Oh uh yes… I certainly do feel… Yes.”
“Good. I always remember to floss my ponies good before they leave because most ponies don’t floss. Now just give me a minute to put away some papers and I’ll take you to the some of the shops around Ponyville. We can talk about your teeth and what not on the way.”
Colgate left the room triumphant while Fleur stood awkwardly and shook her head. She had never felt something so… good? Perhaps that was not the right word. Whatever word she was looking for she knew she wouldn’t find. What word could properly describe feeling satisfied from your dentist? How could one describe that pleasure? It was not the same pleasure a pony gets from visiting the spa. No it was something more intimate…taboo even. The thought made her nervous. The fact that she was now nervous of the very pony that was nervous of her only increased the silent panicking in her head. Many thoughts raced through her mind but one was more prevalent than the others.
Did I just get off to being flossed?
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4526897 Don't rush it Nyx... things will definitely get more oral....later on...
Fleur doesnt even realize what kind of deviant she is dealing with...
4526966 as disturbing as that sounds I am laughing my ass off!
Yeah he probably does... The sick bastard...
Hot, kinky, pony flossing orgasms.
I would have never guessed that I would ever find reason to put these words together in my life, ever.
4528763 lol I'm glad you liked it...
More to come later!
4533799 first off nice avatar...clock work reference?
Secondly... I never thought I'd be writing pony fiction...much less flossterbation
4533890
Yeah, I drew it for a scene in my first story, and I liked the way it came out so much I just made it my avatar.
4533957 great job!
Does that scene resemble... Certain scenes from clockwork?
4533969
But no, the gist of the story is that Applebloom steals some more stuff from Zecora's hut and gives it to the other CMC, but this potion makes them trip balls. They all start hallucinating that they're in various movies, and the Clockwork Orange part is just a quick recreation of the opening seen.
Certain scenes? There are so many, most involving some form of rape, ultraviolence or Beethoven.
4533983 that sounds bucking awesome! Nothing like fillies tripping their shit!
I'll be sure to check it out!
4534032
That'd be awesome. It's this one. Let me know what you think.
(Sorry for spamming my story on your story, but I guess it just kind of came up.
)
Okay, that... I don't even.... I never thought that flossing could sound hot.
This? The weird stuff? The stuff that demonstrates your creativity? This is one of the reasons why I follow you.
4543480 Thanks man!
I've been giving weird stuff a shot. Soon I will be getting back into the dark epic and sad stuff.
"Floss-er-bation" just became my favourite word