Epilogue
One year later
Rainbow Dash and Soarin were in the hospital waiting area. Dash was pacing back in forth.
"Dash, can you calm down", asked Soarin
"CALM DOWN?!", yelled Dash "MY BROTHER IS ABOUT TO HAVE A FOAL AND YOUR TELLING ME TO CALM DOWN!"
"Well I...",
"WOO HOO", cheered Sprocket
He ran out of the room to hug Dash and Soarin
"How'd it go Sprock?", asked Dash
"Why don't you go see for yourself?"
Dash and Soarin walked in the room and saw Lightning Dust holding a white pegasus foal with a red, orange, and yellow mane.
"It's a filly", announced Dust
"She's beautiful", said Soarin
"So did you guys decide to call her?", asked Dash
"Well we thought we could name her after you Dashie", explained Sprocket
"Your naming her Rainbow Dash?", asked Dash
"Close, Sunrise Dash", explained Dust
"It's perfect", said Dash nuzzling Sunrise Dash
"Oh and there's more", said Sprocket
"What is there twins?", asked Dash
"No. Dash, we were wondering if you would like to be Sunrise's god mother", asked Sprocket
"That'd be awesome", replied Dash hugging them "Can I hold her?"
"Sure", replied Dust handing her the foal
"Hi Sunrise Dash, Im your favorite Auntie Rainbow Dash. And I love you, my brother, and my sister-in-law very much", said Dash with tears in her eyes
THE END
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did you forgot to put this story to complete since it is the end now and did you do that already and i liked it
4422797 Sorry, forgot again LOL
4422831 ok and that ok lol
Meh, The conflicts were resolved a tad too quickly, and it was pretty short in general, but it was an okay read. At least it wasn't Utterly Ridiculous like some of the other fictions I've read. I'd give it a solid 3 outta 5.
Interesting Story. I think you did a great job, I just wished you added in some more background detail.
Awesome story. It just needs a lot more detail.