• Member Since 25th Aug, 2013
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The Hunter


Just a Swedish brony who likes reading and writing.

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Rainbow Dash has promised to help Scootaloo with her flying, but will Rainbow Dash's emotions be in the way?

At the same time at the Wonderbolt HQ somepony was having a hard time with his own feelings.




I am not really happy with the first chapter and a revision is planned.

Chapters (11)
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Comments ( 48 )

Great Job with this story. I am glad the characters have grown up a bit and now are starting families. I can't wait to see how scootalo will help or hurt the growing romance. Best of luck writing.

Nice Chapter. Keep it up.

This was a good chapter overall, but I feel like you could have done better to make it flow more smoothly and also fix some gramatical errors in the story.

Um... what just happened?

~Twi

Interesting twist. I do admit it is nice seeing the main six starting to have families of their own. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Where's chapter 5?

Huh... didn't expect a Flashlight to be in here. Lucky for you I'm a Flashlight fan.

4235479 I clicked publish instead of edit. Silly me. :pinkiehappy:
Chapter 5 is on the way.

4236081 Yeah me too! It's a shame that people hate it. :fluttershysad:

4238631 I think it's slowly being accepted

4260284 What does it mean to be a fan of "flashlight"??

Nice chapter. I really liked how pinkie was spazming out like that. I can't wait of the next chapter. Best of luck.

Bas

My bet is discord

4279028 Maybe...Maybe not. Who knows? Wait i do! :derpytongue2:

Nice chapter. I can't wait for the next one. I have an idea who is the mysterious pony though.

I love it so far it's really great and I can't wait for more you did an awesome job :twilightsmile: is it alright if I ask what your first language is?

Nice chapter. I liked how you got Flash and Soarin Drunk at the bar. And soon they are going to get in trouble.

Cool chapter! Soarin drunk priceless!:rainbowlaugh:

Maybe you should change the childs name too Starburst and change the gender to female. I don't know if you notice but Starburst is becoming the most used OC for Flashlight lately. Check this link... Next Generation.

4560618 Yeah i was thinking of that. Maybe i will. I shall think about it. I really like Kilala97's Next gen!

4560712 I got more ideas if you want to hear them. I'll just PM them to you if you want.

I like that name for Twilight's son. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm sad Soarin got Suspended, but I understand why. Good luck with future chapters.

Notice!!:pinkiehappy:
Cliff hanger!:pinkiegasp:

If ya want I can help ya with yer editin so u can start off better with ur fan fic. But even though it's ok fer yer first

Great chapter. I'm mad about the cliff hanger but I understand why you did it. Good luck with the next chapter. I hope it is going to be good.

Nice chapter. I think you did a great job.

5246572 The next chapter is on it's way. I don't really know when it will finished.

ok this story is going in my fave list
(cute) check
(almost all my favored ships) check!
(and good righting) check and double check!!!!

silver spoon marefrend blank flank what!?!?!?!?!?!???!?!

Comment posted by Mr mustash deleted Dec 29th, 2014

Well that was nice good job on being creative on the reaction
the chapter was a little short but it was still a good read

Well that was sudden. :derpyderp1:

Nice. It looks like there is going to be a wedding in the future. Great chapter. Thanks for the update.

4236081 Lol! :rainbowlaugh:

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I happy to see another Flashlighter, though! :yay:
(I am one too. :pinkiesmile:)

~Dashie14~

4238631 Idk why people hate it so much! :rainbowhuh: Flashlight is so cute to me! :rainbowkiss:

~Dashie14~

Spitfire leaned to Rainbow Dash. "Soarin' has a big crush on you!"

Wha- beh- guh- NO, SPITFIRE! YOU DON'T DO THAT! YOU NEED TO LET HIM TELL HER HIMSELF!

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