Pinkie's Playground

by Lil Brony

Chapter 4

Chapter 4

"That's right, Pinkie, stop." Discord said.

"Huh?" Pinkie was confused as she looked over to Discord.

Discord walked over to her and snapped his fingers, and soon everything Pinkie did with her magic disappeared along with her horn and wings.

"Awww! But atleast it was fun while it lasted. Thanks for the gift, Discord!" Pinkie Pie said, smiling.

"... no. It wasn't a gift, Pinkie." Discord explained his entire plan to Pinkie Pie, who's smile was slowly fading away.

"So... you're not really my friend? That gift was all a part of your plan...?" A tear was forming in Pinkie Pie's eye.

Discord picked up Pinkie and hugged her. "No, you are my friend Pinkie Pie. I never realized how important friends are to someone. While you were out causing chaos, I would normally be enjoying the entire thing, but I was feeling... guilty. Because I realized I was doing this to a friend, Pinkie Pie." This time, a tear was forming in Discord's eye.

"Awwwwww!" Pinkie Pie said as she squeezed Discord.

Twilight Sparkle slowly walked over to Discord. "It looks you could write a letter to Princess Celestia this time, Discord." Twilight Sparkle said with a smile.

"You know what, Twilight? I think I will..." Discord snapped his fingers and a peice of paper appeared in front of him. "Dear Princess Celestia..."

THE END

Comments

[GullibleCynic]

The chapters could have used a bit of fleshing out, but it was a fun little story. Would've been neat to see Pinkie stay an alicorn, but I guess that's just asking for trouble.

[Pyriel]

4349132 you don't say?

[Fire Spirit]

it was a nice story with sweet cute little chapters. i really dont like pinkie pie but this was a cute story for her.

[zabchan]

Wow that was over ridiculously fast. You had such a great setup! But twilight figuring it out so soon made the whole thing deflate like a popped balloon. It kind of feels like you got tired of writing it and rushed everything to an end. If you ever decide to revisit it, maybe you could make discord give her the powers without her knowing they were from him, then we can read about everyone scrambling to figure out the cause while pinkie runs amok! Then pinkies playtime could have more of a chance to make an even bigger mess, so that discord's eventual guilt appears more natural and less sudden.

[dah884]

as i read the part where Pinkie became an alicorn i couldn't help but think of Rarity's line when the same thing happened in "The Great Alicorn Hunt".

"GOD HAVE MERCY ON OUR SOULS!"

[PinkehPye]

MAKE A SEQUEL!!!!!!

[TerraZeal]

Oh Celestia, Pinkie becoming an Alicorn? I can just imagine what she would do with that power. The sun and moon would be cupcakes or marshmallows and it would rain chocolate milk every day.

[uis]

"You know what, Twilight? I think I will..." Discord snapped his fingers and a peice of paper appeared in front of him. "Dear Princess Celestia..."

reaD Cincess Prelestia