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Draknir


Part-time employed College Student Brony.

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The MGH, the Multiverse Guardian Hub, is the largest organization in existence simply because it encompasses all of existence.

Its members are made up of beings from different Universes that help make sure things run smoothly in the Universes under their care.

This is a story involving the adventures of one squad within the Pony Division of the Hub as they train their newest member and make sure the Universes in their Cluster are the way they're supposed to be.

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 10 )

This is actually very, very fun to read and enjoyable. I like it. Almost wish it was animated, to be honest.

So... I actually find this entire thing quite interesting but I do have a few questions on the procedural aspects of the Team, mainly, can other Alicorns be recruited or is it just PC-001? Also does it have to be Earth Pony, Unicorn, Pegasus and ? Or could it be... Bat pony, Zebra, Changeling and ? Or with a Griffin or Minotaur swapped in? And do the different... branches? Say MLP and Star Trek, ever meet each other? Sorry if this is annoying but I really do find this an interesting concept.:twilightsmile:

4381247 Most of that will be explained in future chapters, but no. None of the branches ever meet.

“Not possible. Discord and Eris are different versions of the same being. No Universe has two of them,”

I've seen some where she was his daughter, and a few where Draconequus where an actual species, not just one being, just saying.

Normally, I don't read incomplete stories, but this sounded...interesting, to say the least. Kind of like a pony version of the Jedi Council, in an odd, roundabout way.
Also, it reminds me about 12% of a novel I'm writing. I'm not saying anyone's copying anyone, I'm just saying it's an odd coincidence.

REALLY GOD DAM IT, A ROOSTER TEETH reference REALLY!!!

Comment posted by Commander Darklight deleted Mar 2nd, 2016

6962817 So, the only reason I am deleting your comment is the language you chose to use. It has nothing to do with your concerns. In fact, as you can see I have been very hesitant to do so. Now, as for Pinkie being controlling, yeah I can see it. Just, wouldn't you get frustrated if you're trying talk about something and the conversation constantly gets derailed?

Also, I have to admit that even I'm no longer a fan of the reference you talked about in your first comment. However, I must point out that it is not a Rooster Teeth reference. Its an Achievement Hunter one. Totally different.

6992722 ah yes that's right sorry got the two mixed up and its more the times that pinkie needs to talk it when she just buts in randomly and she is still very rude in the way she does it

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