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Voldine


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Thanks for adding your story to the Fallout Equestria Group! Feel free to PM me if you have any questions!

*peers at the thumbs downs* Not the first time I've wished that disliking something required a comment as to what you disliked about it so that the author would know where they might have lost a reader.

It can't be just the content. I mean, it's a Fallout mashup, with raider in the title. That right there should be a red flag that bad stuff happens on a good day for a raider. The story has the dark tag, meaning the bad stuff is of a particular flavor that may not be palatable for everyone...

Meh, you're gonna get downvotes no matter what. I'm convinced that some people downvote stories just for the fact that they're in a category they don't like.

Anyway

I didn't care for it overall, but that's just because I had different expectations as I came in. I was under the impression that it was a rape-themed clopfic, so I had expected rape-themed clop, instead of just suggestive sexual allusion... per se.

THAT SAID

It was okay. I didn't read the main story, because I found this first, and because I'm not familiar with the crossover. I'm sure it was fine for a side of a larger fic, but on its own, it just doesn't have much merit. It's too short to have any and nothing happens, conflict wise, for the protagonists.

I didn't hate reading it, it was quite good for what it was, but what it was, wasn't much. I didn't like it enough for an upvote, but people familiar with the crossover or the main fic might.

Are you going to post more chapters??

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