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This anthology is in continuity with, but not a sequel to, Equestria's New Nightmare. Reading that mature story is encouraged for the worldbuilding, but not necessary.

What do you fear? Is it clowns? Spiders? Bats? Balloons? Children? Doctors?

Everypony fears something and has the occasional nightmare. Some ponies have a fear so deep that they can never get over it. Few dreams are outright horrible, and some seem silly to others that might observe them. Let us take a walk in pony dreams, and observe some of the life that influences the dreamer.

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5499646

Oh...um...:twilightblush: heh. Oops?

Added an ellipses to help differentiate them after thinking for a few minutes. So sorry about that.

5499663 no big deal, this is the third story of mine which i've later found had the same title as other works.

"Oh no," Big Mac screamed. "I can't be pregnant; I'm trans!"

Big Mac woke up. "Oh, what a nightmare that was. There's nothing worse than thinking about your original sex when you're trans! Good thing it's only a few days until The Surgery."

Applejack walked into the room. "Hello, Big Mac. You are trans. Good luck with The Surgery!"

"Thanks."

THE END

Just finished reading, it's an okay one-shot but the fic itself is short and the story is nothing more than Big Mac being transgender. That's it.

5506097

Clarification: This is the evaluator response to the story's submission to the FiMFiction LGBT group.

5506096

Harsh, but thanks for pointing out that I layed it on a little thick. Your first 'trans' should be 'straight' though.

5506097

I will admit that I wrote this more to see if I could get myself into the head of someone coming from the opposite direction. Judging by the snarky comment above yours, I can't simply invert my own fears and improbable desires and come off as a believeable situation. Apparently my familial comfort and reassurance snippet at the end comes off as flat rather than sweet. If my muse strikes again; I'll write another chapter. I'll resubmit if I can get it to five chapters that are more than just 'guess who wasn't born male.':twilightsmile:

Thank you for your time, Lady Froey.

5506105 Thank you for the clarification as well.

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