When a human in Equestria attempts suicide, the ponies who shunned him are forced to care for him in Ponyville Hospital.
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....... Anyway I am the first to comment YAY!
5258331 I'll get you a glass of water. You look like you're dying of first.
5258340
Whelp hope he's not dead
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Well. . . That happened. It's obviously Discord's doing, but beyond that, I got no clue.
So Fluttershy's put him in a coma...
5258360 It's temporary, but Jason's taking a little...break from reality.
Honestly don't blame Fluttershy for sedating him.
5258364 I said HUSH NOW QUIET NOW
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Won't THAT be interesting?
Well, if it's enough for a bear, it's going to be a while before he wakes up. Someone get that cloak off him. It's totally Discording him. Damn Discord. Told Jason not to trust that jerk.
changelings? :3
5258399 I was going to until you started pestering me. Now I'm gonna rearrange the entire plot from here on out to exclude them. Out of spite. Because I'm a bad person.
So, did the cloak give Jason the push to put him over the edge?
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5258340 Oh, you're so punny. Still, either Jason is in for some happy fun time sleep, or is gonna start puking everywhere. Heck, maybe even both.
Remember what happens if you use too much tranquilizer kids
he's obviously out of it yes, but I'm really stuck on why? Just tired and hungry? or is it because of the almost-non-consensual bj pinkie tried to give him? Should he really be that messed up? : /
I'm also surprised that flutters is willing to be in the same room as him. she did as good a job avoiding him for years like pinkie did. why the sudden change in heart (even if ever so slightly)?
PS - oh yeah, dangerously sedated human at the mercy of scary, nasty and potentially horny ponies. I LOVE where this is going >:)
PPS - since you changed the previous chapter, what's his decision about the zebras now? Is he still going, or is he gunna stay at zecoras for a while, or stay in ponyville, or get laid, or just plop down dead for a couple chapters due to sedative overdose? I'm actually okay with nearly all of those options! :D
5257541 considering the situation that the characters were in, how stressed out they were, and pinkie's incessant need to be liked and everyone be happy: the old version of the chapter actually made sense. And the potential aftermath of that chapter would have created some glorious drama for the fic... and now that can't happen because too many people thought "Oh, is that clop? with no lead up? This whole fic is shit then." without considering that things like that actually happen.
5258523 Chronic stress, prolonged starvation, and severe depression have taken a toll on his mind. He's probably been on the edge of psychosis for a long time, with minor symptoms acting up occassionally. Symptoms like suicidal thoughts or actions, irrational behavior, paranoia, violent outbursts, and insomnia.
This last extremely stressful situation was the straw that broke the camel's back. Jason has fallen into a full psychotic break. His recovery depends on what happens RIGHT NOW.
Also, Fluttershy sees him as a hurt/sick animal right now. He very obviously can't take care of himself, and has triggered Fluttershy's maternal instincts. He screamed at her and she took it in stride.
She can deal with him because she doesn't see him as a person.
5258554 Personally, I would've preferred it. I had high hopes for that plotline.
Alas, I must try to keep the Bourgeoisie content.
Well guess we can add Fluttershy to the list of ponies who have nearly murdered Jason. Hope you don't start making like 5 chapters about Jason tripping out. At this point I'd rather it just skips to him waking up and being a potentially different character in many aspects with no explanation. Let our imagination fill in the gap, there's way too much build-up already. If you were building up to anything interesting like with the ponies don't gag chapter, it would still be amusing, but Jason has been becoming a villain for like 15 chapters. If it's gonna happen just do it already.
I'm no expert or anything, but a tranq dose that large should have killed him...
OP is acting like a bundle of sticks.
An accidental application of horse tranquilizer caused by the horse knocking the needle killed a vet who was a friend of my family, and I can say unequivocally as a former game keeper and current horse owner that your average horse weigh less than your average bear. IF the poor sod survives he's going to be paralyzed for days.
WTF?!?! IS HE ALL OF A SUDDEN JEFF THE KILLER?!
Also, side note:
Viewers: WE WANT SOMETHING GOOD TO HAPPEN TO JASON.
Vlad: HERE TAKE IT.
Viewers: OMG CLOP THIS STORY BE SHIT.
Me: -_-
5258638 Yes, and it very nearly did. Fluttershy is...special. She doesn't like to knock her critters out, so she gives them half-doses to "relax them."
Think a cat coming home from the vet after surgery. Clumsy, slow, and tripping massive balls.
And HOLY FUCKSTICK ZAMAIRIAC IS READING MY STORY.
Oh Flutterdunce
5258691 His hair was brown/black, now it's solid black.
His skin was tan, now it's grey.
His eyes were green, now they're grey.
He's been discorded.
5258718 Oh God, he can never catch a break. Now he's turning into Nolan Stross.
5258638
Not necesarily, first lets take in consideration the fisiology and mental state/health Jason has.
The malnourished state he looks like could be just the contrast of the coat itself along his body, meaning that he might not that thin/skinny.
His deteriorated state of mental sanity clearly developed a hypersense of awareness and because of what he's been through he will adrenaline and testosterone (adrenaline counterattacks quimicaly speaking the reactions of tranquilizers)
Another good point is that we don't know for how long he's been in that state, the more adrenaline (among other hormones) might fight back a decent chunk of the tranqs.
And the final point is Discord, 'nough said?
5258752 His hair's a bit too long. He's a wild-man: He has crazy hair and scruff.fbcdn-photos-a-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-xpa1/v/t1.0-0/544939_1501307893463471_1583706367884338932_n.jpg?oh=6ca4a69488b67bef063c7ee8a8cbcf3e&oe=54D3C2AC&__gda__=1424499857_7190853c2dc00e29d1f6cb31a42ac944
Just to refresh my memory, since this had such a long break in between chapters, but Spike is not talking to Twilight because he learned of how she turned away Jason, right?
5258786 correct.
its the cloak, he has to get rid of the cloak. its doing more to him than just protecting his modesty, I think its messing with his mind.
5258784 He's recovering from malnourishment, now that he has access to AJ's orchard. He's better than he WAS, but you can still count his ribs.
Jason Wright is suffering from a quite severe mental breakdown.
After all those years of a harsh life, his suicide attempt, the harrasment he went through, the starvation he survived, his broken hopes of living in peace with the Equestrians and most importantly Celestia's choice of not letting him end his own senseless suffering has finally taken a toll on his mind and it snapped.
Right now he doesn't know where he is, if what he's seeing is a dream or reality, his unbalanced emotions will most likely cloud his judgement (sorry if I pronounced that word wrong), his ill state of mind will make him very volatile and hostile with those that touch him and most importantly is the fact that he already has a HUGE grudge agaisnt Twilight and company (more on Celestia than the rest though)
The most likely course of action (regarding these events) is that
a) He can't recover from his ill mental state and be sent to an asylum till he dies of old age
b) He (somehow) manages to recover from his (most likely) coma made by tranquilizers and leaves Equestria to go to the Zebra territory (or Zebrica, whichever you prefer)
c) He dies and finally gets some rest from those racist Equestrians that never understood Jason Wright
5258857 d) He recovers, but is never the same again. Something in him is lost, whether it be morality, sympathy, or humanity, and he allows himself to be twisted into a monster.
Just an idea.
Actually if you compare the size of these ponys to the in universe Harry the Bear, he wouldn't be all that large. Maybe slightly taller than a person. The bears that hang around Ponyville are pretty small and definatly not grizzly size. Which means the dose of tranq to put one down would be smaller. Probably enough for a human to survive.
5258399 You've ruined it for us! Burn the heathen!
Note to self: never eat a sandwich made by Fluttershy.
Uhh, so no clop, then? That's cool too, I guess. And I kinda like the new version more.
I'd just like it said that the only reason I was confused with the old one was because it was just so jarring (which has been said as nauseum, I'm sure.) and didn't quite fit with everything I'd read up until then.
To simplify: it's like if I went to the sugarcube corner for a cupcake everyday, because they're awesome, only one day instead of a cupcake they give me icecream. Which is cool, 'cause icecream is also awesome. But it wasn't what I came for or expecting.
Anyways, looking good and hope to see more soon!
5258785 Smexy.
5258879 well thanks for spoiling it!
Oh god damn it, ponies and their well-intentioned but irresponsible attempts to make amends. First Pinkie wants to give him comfort sex without his consent, and now Fluttershy tries to calm him down and ends up poisoning him. This is gonna be a trend because of bad communication, isn't it?
5259012 I never said that would happen. It could be anything from a lethal dose and he dies, a lethal dose and he is forcibly turned into a pony so healing magic can work on him, a nearly lethal dose and he is left paralyzed and delirius for days while Mama Flutters learns not to fear him, he could wake up perfectly fine, or five years later.
Anything can happen.
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....ohohohohooooo, I'm gonna LIKE this arc.