When a human in Equestria attempts suicide, the ponies who shunned him are forced to care for him in Ponyville Hospital.
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Keep it up! Writing style is just as good as the first, and I want to see where this goes!
4297575 Thank you, it means a lot to me.
I think you meant as soon as she saw me. I said I would tell you If I saw a mistake.
Why would Applejack put him in a guest bedroom just to move him into the barn?
And I cant wait to hear the reasons why he was treated the way he was by the ponys even after the Princesses told him to move to Ponyville. Twilight said the had seen enough humans so I have a few ideas myself.
4298837 Comfort. But I see what you mean.
4297468 I went to college to be an high school english teacher.
This makes no sense to me. I mean, it's well-written; don't think I'm ragging on your skill, because I'm not. It's the story that doesn't make any sense. Ending made it very clear that the ponies hated him, Applejack especially. While I understand that she might not want him dead, why would she go out of her way to help him past that? More importantly, why would he accept her help? If these ponies made him so miserable as to attempt suicide, why would he do anything but tell Applejack to go fuck herself?
So far from this chapter, I think that Applejack felt somewhat guilty what she did to Jason although compared to her friends, she is the only who actually interact more with Jason than the rest of her friends. Probably thats why it made her feel guilty when Jason committed suicide and think it was her fault. Its like having little brother that you hate and wish he will never born only when he is gone, you will fell the emptiness in your life.
Reason why ponies hate him probably they are xenophobic but not close enough to not care of him. Its a bit like how we Malaysian with multi-racial in it. our relation is quite unique cause Malays and Chinese hate each other but not hateful enough to not care at all. We have our reason why we hate each other (blame British for splitting our races)
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I think what I wrote up probably is the cause though. Reason why Jason accept Applejack help is probably because all those 3 years had made submissive. Its the reason why he want to commit suicide because he don't care.
4301152 Agree with this all the way, I expected to see something... I dunno... Unique in a way, while this story is no doubt unique onto itself I think it simply was the word I could refer to.
Wait, he remained alone for three years and he's not insane? Bullshit.
Wait, he accepted help from such a terrible population/species that he literally attempted suicide? Bullshit.
Wait, he didn't even have any objections against said population and species? Fuck this i'm done.
4301152 i completely agree. its like im reading something completely different from what i was expecting as a sequel to "Ending".
4301152 4305739>>4331531 SpudRum already covered some of what I thought, but here is what I think.
No mater how much you hated someone (as long as they weren't a bad person), wouldn't you feel guilty if they killed themselves because of your actions? Can you live with that? If you wanted to take this really far, you could say Applejack saved him out of some selfishness. She could have let him die and it is likely nopony would have cared, but for whatever reason (i think pure guilt) she saved him. How could you look at your frinds when you felt responsible for causing someone else to end their life? Even if they were shunned it is still a life.
Why would he not hate them?
He said right in this chapter that he still saw them as they were in the show at times and it is hard for him to repress that image. Weather it was because of childish fantasy, genuine curiosity, adventure, or one sided love, he believes it is his fault for coming there and not thinking ahead. The ponies did not invite him and he doesn't feel the need to resent them for invading their lives.
Why would he spit in the face of Applejack's kindness when she is the only one to combat his ideas that everyone didn't want him around (dead or otherwise)?
Hate is a hell of a feeling to hold onto for long periods, let alone three years. Personally I know it can be exhausting. He needed to spend his energy on survival alone. Hate isn't productive and often destructive. After hating for such a long time people often start wondering why? instead of hating, they want to understand what has caused such a rift between themselves and others. These thoughts on hate can apply to both Jason and the ponies.
Notice how the first question Applejack and Jason ask each other is "why?" It was not anger, but a genuine longing for answers.
Why is he not crazy after three years of isolation?
As fare as not going crazy in three years... he is kind of crazy. This can account for many of the emotions and actions he has taken up to this point. Humans are very adaptable and highly capable of surviving on their own for long periods of time. Just because he was isolated for so long doesn't necessarily mean he should have gone completely bonkers.
4297581 To the author, I would like to say I enjoy this so far, and as long as loose ends are addressed eventually I see no real problems yet. Just keep going.
GOOD TIMES!!
the food porn..... i want a big-ass slice of pie now.....
*snaps out of it*
awesome fic so far..... but, personally at this point, i would just ask why she "cared" so fucking much if she was okay with kicking his head off a few weeks ago.... like, what changed? he would only go back to living in a cave and eating trash again..... so don't be so selfish and let him die if he wants to..... fucking hate the mindset of "saving" a person that is universally hated. stop trying to make yourself feel better about the treatment and shit, Applejack, and fuck off. damn....
4490109 I don't know whether to disagree with you, or agree with you. It's hard to decide.
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Both of you aren't thinking the same way AJ is (at the moment)
After witnessing him trying to kill himself she felt grief as well as shock 'what is he thinking!?' way of thinking after witnessing a sentient being hanging himself.
Because of that (and her way of thinking) she believes and hopes that because she's risking a lot of things as well as taking personal care of him, all wrongs will be fixed and everything will go according to her 'plan'
Sadly she never considered that once you beat and break something too much, it is impossible for said something to be fixed and be brand new.
Why wouldn't he meet with Luna and Celestia again if everypony in Ponyville hated him? They seemed to have no problem with him
Okay, i'm sorry, but... Three years? really?
I'd think it'd be more like a stray cat on your property - you shoo it away the first time with a broom. And when it comes back, you shoo it again. And again. And again.
But one day, after a month or so, the cat doesn't come that morning, and you realize that you actually miss the little bastard. He was annoying, yeah, but somehow, you'd grown used to the li'l guy. I mean, he's not hurting anything.
I really don't think the ponies would loathe him for 3 full years, and if they did truly hate him all that time, they surely wouldn't mind being rid of him.
4490109 damn it, I can only give you one like. Stupid machine, give this man a medal!
Have to say this guy is stacking up to be a weak idiot so far. Honestly who goes through years of torture and just up and forgives one of their tormentors cause they aren't comfortable watching the result of their own bad behavior?
7885085 Are you comfortable?
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Maybe Celestia and Luna sent him to ponyville just so that the main 6 can an eye on him, if he was dangerous. They probably don't even like him.
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Somebody who's more interested in taking advantage of what he can get when he can get it than in some tiny amount of revenge that could have waited until later.
Why couldn’t he move his body before?
How does she know he’s name?
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To the first question; Short answer, hospitalisation due to neck related injury . Long answer, just look up how very important the neck is to your ability to move your limbs. While the brain and the body itself tend to get all the fame for allowing you to move, the neck is the often unsung hero that allows it to all work in the first place. Enough damage to this area, if it doesn't just kill you, could well paralyze you for life.
To the second question; He's been in this world for at least three years, so it could have come up at any time. Failing that when she checked him out of the hospital, if theirs are anything like most of ours, they likely wanted something to call him in the reports and as he could talk he likely would have insisted they call him by his name.
Please just don't loose your Independence
just dont