When a human in Equestria attempts suicide, the ponies who shunned him are forced to care for him in Ponyville Hospital.
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Yay for Gilda! *hugs perpetually pissed part-eagle part-lion*
Short but I can't complain. Nicely done!
4473400 You could complain, but it's all been said before a hundred different times in a hundred different ways.
Yea! Smack some sense into him!
FINALLY!!!
4473421 Well good point! That's a reason I don't usually complain now that I think about it. Out of curiosity though, when can we expect the next chapter? Also, your story keeps getting featured, you should be proud.
4473430 Yeah, he does need a waambulance.
4473436 badum chsh
4473434 In order: Getting the same complaints regularly isn't a good thing, but I have no idea how to fix the problems. And the next chapter will come out when it's finished. And thank you, but I think after the first couple times it just reserved me a spot for whenever I updated.
4473432 YOU'RE TELLING ME! WRITING THAT SUMBITCH TOOK ME TWO WEEKS! WEEKS! FOR JUST 2000 WORDS!
...Where has my life gone?
damn, poor guy. but sometimes the harsh truth for a suicidal patient is the best approach.
4473532 GILDA'S THERAPY:
Was an emo bitch.
Got the shit slapped out of him.
Is now less of an emo bitch.
Results motherfucker, results.
Love the story and I can't wait to see where this goes next.
Damn....What a bitch!
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4473507 I thought you were dead dude ;) I hope we don't have to wait as long for the next update, but no rush either. Peace ✌️
He shoulda added the part where he can never see his family again.
MAYBE she would have shown a LITTLE mercy.
Glad to see this story back in action! Also, we finally have progress! WOOO!!!
4473670 so how the hell did he GET there?
I wonder if he developed Stockholm Syndrome from being stuck with Gilda for that long.
Now I'm curious of what did Gilda have go through.
Nice work on this chapter
Anger isn't generally what's going through someone's head when they commit suicide. Good tactic, regardless of whether it was her intent or not.
That said, the suffering of another doesn't invalidate what you've endured.
Also, "fucking dweeb". That's the most bizarre combination of insults I've heard that uses actual words.
quick someone pick up the phone because he fucking call it WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOA
4402865 The fact of the matter is Twilight didn't care what he was and practically deluded her self from remebering his existence until Applejack saved him. No the town didn't fear Zecora because she was living in the everfree, it was stated in the episode itself they were afraid because she was strange I mean it might of played a part but it was because of Zecora herself and not the area she was living in. As for everything else in the story makes a lot of sense and sadly you only have to look in a history book to find out why... if something is different it creates fear, fear will turn into hatred at some point, once you are hated everything you do is considered offensive to those that hate/fear you. This is common sense and has been taught in practically every history class I had growing up, how the heck isn't this known?! You would think a human is about as different from the Equestrian norm as you can get so how did you think they would react to him on a realistic standpoint? How would we react to an alien creature we have never seen/heard of before practically knocking on your door? Basic reaction is "crap! wheres my gun!?" so how do you think a PREY based race of ponies would react... and I agree with WiseFireCracker that Jason wouldn't of bothered walking to Canterlot and taking a train? Not happening with the way the natives treat him
gilda is a serious faggot.
4474018 Im curious to know as well, shes a carnivore in herbivore land and she hasn't gone back to her own kind... makes you wonder why doesn't it? Did she get exiled or something or is she trapped in equestria by some other means, maybe shes looking for something? I guess we'll find out soon since we will be seeing alot more of her
Only Gilda can still say "dweeb" as an insult and get away with it.
I don't get the point of the punishment Gilda and Jason were stuck with. Wouldn't it have been easier to leave them for dead away from the camp, instead of taking up a whole tent with them and having to do corpse cleanup later?
4474315 While RealityCheck is, as usual, needlessly rude, he is on to something.
4474674 How so? I like learning new things and im curious on how other point of views can effect a unbiased judgment for a given subject so can you explain the base facts for his argument so I can compare my data to a varible factor of new and old facts and nip the "This is how that's suppose to be" or "your writing it wrong" in the bud.
...sadly im like Twilight and when I get hooked on a knowledge based subject I sorta go a little OCD until I get a sound conclusion also doesn't help my minds able to randomly swap gears at the drop of a hat on me
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I agree with the obvious point that fear breeds ill will, however the grab your gun attitude does not account for the majority of the human race or even a large portion of gun hoe Americans. In fact I take slight offense to bull headed idiots who talk about shooting anything that threatens their home. I would think that some ponies would act differently as well.
If an alien bothers to knock on my door, literally or figuratively; many people would reason that, "well they didn't hurt me when they could have, lets hear what they have to say."
Or
"Ooh a new species. We could learn so much from a positive relationship."
Or
"If I shoot the alien in the head I could cause intergalactic war or kill some alien's son."
Anyway, I'm just saying that ponies are not all going to react with irrational fear. Especially many of the mane six. I don't really get why Rainbow Dash decided to turn b*** up to eleven. I can sort of see her brash behavior going into overdrive, but this story takes her into vindictive sadism. Rainbow Strikes me as a protect the home front type, but not the go out of my way to cause harm to others type.
Fluttershy being too scared to do anything. That works, because that's what she always does unless someone is in danger. Jason is in danger, but it makes sense that she was too afraid to be around to help.
Rarity. Again, she is kind of stuck up at times and I can see her falsely thinking of Jason as a barbarian and just avoiding him.
Pinkie Pie. Where was pinkie pie this whole time? I feel like she would have gotten upset about a super miserable person. Her pinkie sense and her obsession with cheering people up should have had her talking to Jason long ago.
Applejack. Why the needless abuse? I guess she had the same question herself in later chapters, but that isn't really an answer so much as she is as confused by it as we are.
Then, there is Twilight. There has been enough said about her already.
My main question is, why are the ponies so darn vindictive? They are the exact opposite of kind and caring. Yes the author mentions this in Jason's thoughts, but they didn't all get traumatized from what Twilight experienced. They pretty much go out of their way to be evil. This is even worse than human society. It would be like humans thinking gut punching any homeless people they see is normal.
TL;DR
I'm still reading this and I intend to keep going. The writing is pretty good quality in terms of imagery and detail. It just seems like characters are all from a different universe where everyone acts like one stereotype of the uneducated gun hoe shoot first and ask questions never attitude.
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Actually, its good that you update it weekly than daily. If you do it daily, I doubt you could get rest. My advice is make a story note out of it so you can plan how the story going to be and you can rest while update it weekly
4474907 I agree that not everyone has the same gun ho view but you got to admit that the vast majority of the whole react to the unknown with fear and hate turned up to 11 at times, even if we don't go out of our ways to be a antagonist to the hypothical alien we would still feel the 'creepy' or 'weird' vibe that would cause us to either avoid or condem that unknown creature until such a time where they have without a doubt proven to be peaceful. Rasicm is my main point, it all started from our instinctive fear of the unknown back then blossoming into hate/anger. Im not racist in any way shape or form and will go out of my way to help all ethnics but I do realize its orgins and if you turn that 'weird/unnatural' up a few notches in a species that is known and stated to be a prey based species in a world where the monsters of our myths can easily eat you or a realative as a snack... ill outright say this since it need to be said to prevent future arguments/complaints on the characters actions. The awnser to everyones complaints on the characters being 'to vindictive' or 'your making them do this without reason' is one of my comments in a previous chapter a while ago, instinct is the key and quite frankly explains EVERYTHING here on why the characters did what they did. They are ponies and as seen irl ponies/horses have VERY good instincts so what is you slap some intellegence on one and isolated it from any dog interaction in any way shape or form and then try to see how well that same animals going to take meating its first dog. That very same animal that has now gained intellegence STILL retains their basic survival instinct just as we humans do today so if its a pony gaining the smarts through evolution they still have the prey instincts no matter what and as humaities basic fight or flight instinct will contest they are acting mean/vindictive BUT it still matches with the equivelent psycological profile of massive spikes of paranoia when ever Jasons around and the mane 6 don't even realize this is whats caused them to lash out the way they did and instead only realize the anger part of the eqaution. Their instincts blow the very same 'unatural' vibe we would get way out of proportion and in a world where your kind can be a meal for some random monster, most of which CAN talk and interact... how the heck did you think they were going to react, in all honesty if you take all of these factors that have been proven time and time again in SCIENCE and add in a few psyc. profiles on the characters into the picture while adding the inate prey instinct then they should of actually been acting WORSE to Jason then they did! Its the basic survival instinct at its finest when you have a alien creature that is literally giving of 'predator' and 'unatural' vibes so to make a long story short if this story was to be as realistic as everyone wants it to be then Jason would of already been killed by the native ponies when the mandotory 'self preservation' instinct kicks in. Celestia and Luna are immortal and in more control or their minds so of course they don't fall under this catagory.
I personally love the story the way it is and an early ending like most of you seem to want is not what im looking forward to, everyone needs to just stop complaining about the way certain character are acting and enjoy the ride Vlads driving for us.
..boy this got long
4475023 Try watching District 9 and imagine if there was just ONE alien trying to live in our society instead of a whole culture.
4475026 I saw that and it was a very good movie in my opinion, and I see what you mean... it would get very ugly very fast
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Just for a note, one long block of text is amazingly hard to read.
Please use paragraphs.
Yay, new part! I enjoyed this one.
At first I didn't think anything major was going to happen, but once again, I was proven wrong. I didn't really expect Gilda to ask Jason to tag along with her for some reason, which has gotten me intrigued.
I get the feeling there's going to be a revelation to what exactly Gilda's been up to since her friendship with Rainbow Dash ended.
Is it possible what Gilda has gone through is on par with Jason?
Am I right, wrong, close, or just being silly?
Find out next time on It Never Really Ends!
4475369 I guess you'll have to wait. I'm gonna try to have a chapter out every week, give or take. Needless to say, I'm having fun writing Gilda.
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Was this on purpose, or you made a mistake?
4475492 Same scene, two perspectives.
4475509 ooooh! my bad sorry
4475511 No problem, it happens.
4475023 Read "Twilight Makes First Contact." I think that is one of the most realistic approaches to the many facets of people that exist in our society.
Fear and hate don't always go hand in hand. You are painting humans as all xenophobic brutes without reason. Neither of us have real "proof" that the vast majority is one way or the other, but I do know that you are painting an extremely biased view of humanity.
Europeans, Americans, Chinese Russians, Texans and Seattle citizens all have their own "typical behavior."
As far a racism goes, there were many people who believed it was wrong and nations of people who didn't use slavery. If there weren't a good number of people who thought this way then there would still be slavery. The civil war should be evidence of that. A nation split on ideals alone.
All I'm saying is you need to look at the larger picture of humanity before you make us all sound like a bunch of blind fools.
Wow, say what you want about GIlda, she sure dosen't sugercoat her opinions of what she Thinks of quitters.
4476140 I have no clue where you get your information but it is proven and stated by the scientific community that we humans are not only a predator race and therefore we hold the natural agression of one... you seem to think my view is biased but have you really seen the world we are living in now and days? I stoped watching the news 3 years ago because it was ALWAYS another story on how someone raped, murdered, or stole something for the most stupidest of reasons, shoot war is the biggest factor your not inculding for some reason. We all have our perspectives and when those perspectives collide our species resort to murdering each other on the battle field, now hows that meet the counter argument. It is our very nature to be agressive and I wasn't talking about being brutes but we also match that catergory as well. Sure my veiw may be a little biased but I can honestly say I never make an opinion or make my vew on a topic known until I have all the facts, and the cold hard truth of the matter is we are a race that I have no doubt would meet an alien civilization with hostility as a general whole. There are people out here who wouldn't like you said but as stated multiple times by our very own psycolocists and scientists they are the considered exception to the whole so if you consider that and factor in greed... EVERYONE has greed in them no matter how small and that leads to alot of people doing horrible things so the ones who would use common sense(which is very lacking these days) or blindly trust a creature they never met before are only about an estimated 31% of the general population, which means the majority are still subject to human nature. I try my best not to meet these general rules by being nice to everyone, being forgiving, being caring, and having a rule I follow where I never judge another without all the facts or trying for myself and you know where I am in life? I am 20 years old and still living with my mom because im considered a social outcast by the main part of society because im 'different' so I may have a slight biased view due to that but the facts don't lie about this topic. I refuse to blindly beileve in your basic staement of im wrong and almost everyones a good person because the cold hard truth is we have created a society where you NEED to put others down and step on lesser people to get ANYWHERE in life... this is slowly but surely weeding out the people who are generally good as I myself can contest, I don't want to hurt anyone in any shape or form but to get anywhere in life I kinda have to... see the problem with this? Everyones entitled to there own opinions but im gonna choose to stick with the facts and statistics before I blindly beileve anything, sorry. I will read Twilight make first contact to see if it matches what you say, I lllike to keep an open mind on everything so ill see if I can prove your statements in the next 3 days before I try to restate mine
4475237 I don't bother to use paragraphs for comments because I can't type like everyone else. MY wrists can't do standard formation so I have to 'hunt and peck' everything I type and it gets hard to do that plus keep myself sitting still long enough to type at all.
I am always hyper and energetic as long as the tempiture is below 60 degrees, When it gets above that you might start seeing me using paragraphs due to not needing to rush and prevent myself from accidently breaking my computer anymore then it already is. I have tape holding it together for petes sake due to how many time my hyperactivity has made me accidently hit or throw it! Ill try to use paragraphs in the future but I make no promises
What I first thought when I read the chapter title
4476615 I have to hunt n' peck too, buddy. It's not a matter of ability, it's a matter of effort.
4476557 BAAAHAHAHHAH. NO. I'm a fifth year environmental student who is VERY skeptical of humanity and I know full well what we as a species are capable of. However, we are also the only species that can suppress our instincts enough to do things like go to Space, set up a United nations. Spend millions on cancer research etc.
The media is INCREDIBLY biased (the networks are paid to entertain, 45 percent of all agriculture is owned by one company (Monsanto). Our government is paid for by big oil. Believe me I am well informed on what is going on. It is literally my job to know this stuff to help improve the environment and know how to implement policy against our corrupts system.
My point is that we, Americans are a tiny representation of a whole. There are war torn countries that would take in a wounded stranger of the opposing side, because that is the norm of good will they have. Many countries are way more intimate and friendly and have been around far lot longer than the US (which is only 400 plus years old).
What we have is self control. If most humans did not have self control and were driven by ancient habits and instincts, we would not have survived till now. We have a name for people who let greed or violence take them. They are called criminals.
If you ask some, sure they will say it was instinct, but many will tell you they knew what they were doing. That is a choice not some "Id" or internal animal.
Animals react. Humans make choices.
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Why is it always the really smart people use proper punctuation, spacing, and capitalization, while the "hurr durr hyoomans are evul" crowd can't type like a normal person to save their life? :V