Hi I'm a Brony from Asia! Nice to meet you all! Also Twilight is the best pony!
Spike seemed to be bored with Twilight gifts. She needed to find a new one this year, but how far would she go to get him one?
The Artist's DA : PhysicWalnut (Source is on the picture!)
Part of a story trade with Clacksphob and OC is Best Pony, sharing a writing prompt.
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Could use some editing. But other than that, good story.
Get's it right here *pounding his heart*
4298874 4299315 Thank you!
I know I'm a bit bad with my grammar and wording. I'll try harder next time. 
Good story, but we really have find an editor for you. Some parts were tough to read through, due to grammar issues.
On a more positive note, there was only a single story line glitch that I noticed...
Twilight presumably went to visit Rarity to learn the 'Gem Finding Spell', but never asked about it. In the actual episode, we know that Twilight already knows the spell. Was there some other reason for the visit? Maybe to see if Rarity has a more advanced version of the spell?
4305396 Thank you for your feedback. Still, I really don't know where did I go wrong with grammar in my story at all. I'm still learning it, but no one really told me
Yes, you do have a point. I wasn't paying attention to that part at all. (since I had a time limit to write before I have to publish together with my friends.)
I am trying to find an editor for a while now. I do have an editor but it's really hard to get in contact with him because of our time difference.
I will try to edit this story again since I don't have to worry about the deadline anymore.
And again, thank you so much for spending your time to read this. I really appreciate it.
PS : Thank you for the cover art!