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I am Midnight Red Vel’vet Melody Dawn Sparkle and this is my story

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That is the longest name I have ever seen. Nice.

Stay frosty!
~Hazard~

pleasebeatrollficpleasebeatrollfic:pinkiesad2:

I think this definitely deserves the comedy and random tags. It may not be what you were aiming for, but I found it pretty funny.

Oh this is simply troll-tastic, but I believe you could have made it worse; after all, I could still understand what you were saying almost half the time. I think the "best" troll fic I ever saw was literally typed on an iPod it was so bad. Still an amusing little dig at the convention of Mary-Sue characters.

392812 There should be a contest where the fanbase decides an official "Worst MLP:FiM Fanfic Ever" and we all agree to rename it My Little Immortal.

Liked for being a truly wonderful trollfic parody of the greatest fanfic of all time.

just from reading hte comments am i the only one who think itd be hilarous if this turned out to not be a trollfic:twilightoops:

oh god where did life go wrong? -reads more and cries about admitting it-

RB_

Normally, this would be the part where i would offer advice, but...
THERE'S NOTHING HERE WORTH FIXING!!!

MARY SUE+HORRIBLE GRAMMAR DOES NOT A GOOD FIC MAKE!!!

KILL IT WITH FIRE!!!

reminds of "i'm nut okay I promise" which is a mlp themed parody of my immortal, If I remember correctly.

You know what? I'm done hating.

What is your reasoning behind this story? I really just want to know. I can tell it's a trollfiction, that's as clear as day. But why? Why would you write a trollficiton? It's okay if you did something serious! If you admit your flaws than the MLP fanfiction will help you! I don't understand why people choose to be dumb on the internet!

How about instead of devoting all of our time into writing trollficition, we use our time to better our own fiction. So that we become the fandom that other fandoms want to be and hold in high esteem.

How about we do that?

You know what? I'm with Ignorable.

I guess I just don't see the point in writing something that is supposed to be awful to the point of illegibility. It seems a lot like making fun of someone who's trying to play basketball despite being really really shot by going out onto the fourth with your shoelaces deliberately tied togeather.

Either way, the only thing you get at the end of it all is a pointless waste of time and effort

Well now...I've gotta say, this is...

...amusing, is the term I think I'm looking for. Are you, perhaps, trying to recreate the "My Immortal" formula, but just using the ponies instead? If you are, I applaud your efforts good sir or madam...though I think you're trying a little too hard, if I can be honest. :facehoof:

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A rendition of My Immortal using Ponies it seems...its rather entertaining when you think about it

Haven't read but I'm saying it advance: GO KILL YOURSELF!!!!!!:flutterrage:

WHY ARE THEY CONSTANTLY CHANGING GENDERS! ?
P.S. THIS IS TOO BAD TO BE FIXED.
P.P.S. EVIL TALKS TO HIM/HERSELF.

I WANNA DIE NOW!
WHY DO I HAVE SO MUCH IN COMMON WITH THE MAIN CHARACTER??!?!

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