In an Equestria where Celestia and Luna have slain each other, a human is brought to Equestria in the body of King Sombra, in hopes that he might be able to save the kingdom from the fiends of Tartarus...
When testing a spell she read, Twilight and her friends pull some very interesting creatures from another dimension. With the fate of Equestria on their shoulders once again, The Elements of Harmony must overcome the power of the Elements of Insanity
After being injured during the events of "The Ponies who Played with Fire" a now-captive Discord is facing trial for murder, while Fluttershy and her small band of allies are in a desperate struggle both to clear his name and avoid their own capture.
Princess Luna has got into an argument with her sister and goes to her private realm to vent. Meanwhile, in another realm, Prince Artemis has got into a similar situation. From what was a simple encounter between the two quickly becomes anything but
Me and my friends get the Nightmare Animatronic suits from the Internet. We get sent to Equestria. Problem is, we can only interact with others in ponies dreams.
Oh this is simply troll-tastic, but I believe you could have made it worse; after all, I could still understand what you were saying almost half the time. I think the "best" troll fic I ever saw was literally typed on an iPod it was so bad. Still an amusing little dig at the convention of Mary-Sue characters.
392812 There should be a contest where the fanbase decides an official "Worst MLP:FiM Fanfic Ever" and we all agree to rename it My Little Immortal.
What is your reasoning behind this story? I really just want to know. I can tell it's a trollfiction, that's as clear as day. But why? Why would you write a trollficiton? It's okay if you did something serious! If you admit your flaws than the MLP fanfiction will help you! I don't understand why people choose to be dumb on the internet!
How about instead of devoting all of our time into writing trollficition, we use our time to better our own fiction. So that we become the fandom that other fandoms want to be and hold in high esteem.
I guess I just don't see the point in writing something that is supposed to be awful to the point of illegibility. It seems a lot like making fun of someone who's trying to play basketball despite being really really shot by going out onto the fourth with your shoelaces deliberately tied togeather.
Either way, the only thing you get at the end of it all is a pointless waste of time and effort
...amusing, is the term I think I'm looking for. Are you, perhaps, trying to recreate the "My Immortal" formula, but just using the ponies instead? If you are, I applaud your efforts good sir or madam...though I think you're trying a little too hard, if I can be honest.
That is the longest name I have ever seen. Nice.
Stay frosty!
~Hazard~
I believe this is a mockery to those that make Mary-Sues. If not: troll.me/images/all-the-things-psycho/imma-kill-you-bitch-thumb.jpg
My Little Immortal?
pleasebeatrollficpleasebeatrollfic
I think this definitely deserves the comedy and random tags. It may not be what you were aiming for, but I found it pretty funny.
Oh this is simply troll-tastic, but I believe you could have made it worse; after all, I could still understand what you were saying almost half the time. I think the "best" troll fic I ever saw was literally typed on an iPod it was so bad. Still an amusing little dig at the convention of Mary-Sue characters.
392812 There should be a contest where the fanbase decides an official "Worst MLP:FiM Fanfic Ever" and we all agree to rename it My Little Immortal.
Liked for being a truly wonderful trollfic parody of the greatest fanfic of all time.
just from reading hte comments am i the only one who think itd be hilarous if this turned out to not be a trollfic
What am I reading?
oh god where did life go wrong? -reads more and cries about admitting it-
bwahahahaha
Normally, this would be the part where i would offer advice, but...
THERE'S NOTHING HERE WORTH FIXING!!!
MARY SUE+HORRIBLE GRAMMAR DOES NOT A GOOD FIC MAKE!!!
KILL IT WITH FIRE!!!
reminds of "i'm nut okay I promise" which is a mlp themed parody of my immortal, If I remember correctly.
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You know what? I'm done hating.
What is your reasoning behind this story? I really just want to know. I can tell it's a trollfiction, that's as clear as day. But why? Why would you write a trollficiton? It's okay if you did something serious! If you admit your flaws than the MLP fanfiction will help you! I don't understand why people choose to be dumb on the internet!
How about instead of devoting all of our time into writing trollficition, we use our time to better our own fiction. So that we become the fandom that other fandoms want to be and hold in high esteem.
How about we do that?
You know what? I'm with Ignorable.
I guess I just don't see the point in writing something that is supposed to be awful to the point of illegibility. It seems a lot like making fun of someone who's trying to play basketball despite being really really shot by going out onto the fourth with your shoelaces deliberately tied togeather.
Either way, the only thing you get at the end of it all is a pointless waste of time and effort
Well now...I've gotta say, this is...
...amusing, is the term I think I'm looking for. Are you, perhaps, trying to recreate the "My Immortal" formula, but just using the ponies instead? If you are, I applaud your efforts good sir or madam...though I think you're trying a little too hard, if I can be honest.
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A rendition of My Immortal using Ponies it seems...its rather entertaining when you think about it
758600 What is My Immortal?
759243 Hope this answers your horrible fan-fiction needs my good sir! I hope it brings you great sorrow, hate, rage and finally and the sense of not wanting to live on the same planet as the writers. ( Note; This version is only the pony version of the story as the original was a Harry Potter fan-fiction.)
Haven't read but I'm saying it advance: GO KILL YOURSELF!!!!!!
WHY ARE THEY CONSTANTLY CHANGING GENDERS! ?
P.S. THIS IS TOO BAD TO BE FIXED.
P.P.S. EVIL TALKS TO HIM/HERSELF.
I WANNA DIE NOW!
WHY DO I HAVE SO MUCH IN COMMON WITH THE MAIN CHARACTER??!?!
Whats a prep?
MAKE IT STOP!!!!!
Such a painful looking alicorn.