My little darkness

by Rena-kun

CHAPTER 9: THE SCARTCH

AN:stamp falming me prepz i didnt read all of homstuck or watch all da eps of mlp!

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We soon realized we had 2 invok da scrakts becuz our universe was doomed

then all of a sudenly an eveil person wit sexah blu eyes started fling towrds me in a car! he was wering a whit shirt wioth a green gost on it so it was obvious that he was satanist. he was............. jhon egbert!!!

"nooooooooo" i yelled scarededly but then he shouted "WINDY THING!" so i couldnt move..

"Huss of Lips!" I yelled.

he started screeming and crying so i kicked him in the you-know-here and i felt sad even tho i was a sadest. i ten took him to my house so we could become friends and then he gave me a gun to shoot cancr.

"nooooooooooo!!! why owuld you want me to do that?!"

"lol idk" john said then he disapperd". we then wetn to the baet mes and invoked the scartsh!! i was abul to sav us al by using my magic so we cold go to the new univers we creatd and not forget anything becuz that would b very dumb. while we wer on my magic flying house i married cancer and we had some really happy kids named canver and midnit the secod vantas sparkle.

Comments

[Mr Ignorable]

You know what? I'm done hating.

What is your reasoning behind this story? I really just want to know. I can tell it's a trollfiction, that's as clear as day. But why? Why would you write a trollficiton? It's okay if you did something serious! If you admit your flaws than the MLP fanfiction will help you! I don't understand why people choose to be dumb on the internet!

How about instead of devoting all of our time into writing trollficition, we use our time to better our own fiction. So that we become the fandom that other fandoms want to be and hold in high esteem.

How about we do that?

[alexnine]

You know what? I'm with Ignorable.

I guess I just don't see the point in writing something that is supposed to be awful to the point of illegibility. It seems a lot like making fun of someone who's trying to play basketball despite being really really shot by going out onto the fourth with your shoelaces deliberately tied togeather.

Either way, the only thing you get at the end of it all is a pointless waste of time and effort

[Darkened Paradise]

Well now...I've gotta say, this is...

...amusing, is the term I think I'm looking for. Are you, perhaps, trying to recreate the "My Immortal" formula, but just using the ponies instead? If you are, I applaud your efforts good sir or madam...though I think you're trying a little too hard, if I can be honest.

[Darkness_take_you]

758600 What is My Immortal?

[ThatQuietGuy]

759243 Hope this answers your horrible fan-fiction needs my good sir! I hope it brings you great sorrow, hate, rage and finally and the sense of not wanting to live on the same planet as the writers. ( Note; This version is only the pony version of the story as the original was a Harry Potter fan-fiction.)

[Savant Sentral]

Haven't read but I'm saying it advance: GO KILL YOURSELF!!!!!!