Well, I don't have anything against femdom, but I do have a problem with rape, so enjoy your downvote I guess.

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Have fun with that. Just note that it says Non-Consensual Sex under the Warnings list. I can't seem to understand why you don't think that means rape.

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I think the point was that you seem to think more people are likely to have a problem with femdom than with non-consensual sex, since you said "If you have anything against fem-dom...suck it up, twinkie."

Basically, no, I (and probably most others) don't have anything against consensual femdom. It's the non-consensual part of it that people are more likely to have a problem with.

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I understand that people may have a problem with it. And the reason I made a joke about femdom and not the nonconsensuality thereof was because I don't want up make rape jokes.

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Well, "don't want to make jokes about rape" and "wrote a clop fic about rape" seems kind of strange to me. But okay...

The problem with the "joke" you made though is that it kind of comes off as misogynistic. Like advocating that people should have a problem with the femdom part, but not the non-consensual part. As if it were a male doing the raping, it would somehow be okay. But the fact that it's femdom is what makes it a problem.

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Man I was waiting for this and it did not disappoint! Love it! Hope for a sequel in a way.

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Writing a depiction of rape and joking about it is a bit of a taboo in the writing community, so please understand that, as awkward as it is. Nevertheless, I completely understand your opinions on the joke I made and I'll edit the description when I get the chance if you find it offensive. I actually wrote that when I had a lot of friends who didn't like consensual or nonconsensual dominance and at that time I thought those opinions were more common than they actually are. In concision, I apologize if you were offended by this story, and as a side note, I'm really sorry that your comments are getting disliked. /)_-

Wow, this was great! A Noteworthy fic and a non-lesbian Octavia fic are great alone, so a Noteavia fic is even greater!

Now, where's that sequel...

Aww, dear... Thank you for the shout-out.

I wish I had read this update sooner, but my laptop is still out for repair.

Anyway, I very much enjoyed this chapter and the way you used the hypnosis. Is there going to be a sequel?

Please make some sort of sequel? I BEG YOU! This was just...... AMAZING!

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Blah blah. Blah blah blah blah sequels.

No, I don't plan on writing a sequel to this. I'd have to write it without Mask, because he's moving on to other projects and has generally grown tired of writing for this particular story. I have as well, but for a different reason than him- I'm currently conceptualizing a lot of other great stories and I want to work on those.

HOWEVER! Because I know you're all horny sons of bitches, there will be a bonus chapter in the far future. But don't expect it any time soon.

Anyway, I hope that's all the answers you guys need. Thanks for the feedback and all this positive support. I mean, geez. Look at what a Mr Zelda C Brony said:

This was just...AMAZING!

4923025 heh. Id love to try to write a sequel with ya. Or spin off...heck, even rp it

4923025 I can't believe your not writing a sequel to this. The last sentence to your story was pretty much a cliffhanger for gods sake!
That is why everyone (including me) wants a sequel to this story!

LOGIC HAS CONSUMED ME!!!

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I can't be bothered to write for this fandom any more. I'm not caught up with the show, and most of my storywriting effort has gone into a short sci-fi horror story I'm working on

7012087 Neat-o, I congradulate you. I'm not much into horror, but I'll read it when I feel like crap, just to get me hyped up.

Lacking. Here's the thing: I don't see a plot. No, the story kind of plot.

I don't see a conflict, other than Octavia's "should I? Am I going too far? Naah, just another one".

I don't see much characterization, other than a curious male asks for information and goes brain dead near a good looking girl (that's not a put down -- I've seen that sort of thing in life often enough), and she plays that for permission.

If you remove the clop, what's left? There's no story. Just a long build up.

Just "another day in the life of a non-ethical pony who manipulates others for pleasure."

Now, there's so much that could have been built on. You have several ponies that know she is a practicing hypnotist. You've had people comment how different Noteworthy seems to be acting. But all of that side stuff just drops out -- it might as well not be there for all the effect it has on what happens.