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The guy with too much time, and not enough drive to write.

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I liked this, and I look forward to reading more. However, i have question.

Does this story take place within the same continuity as Blank Sheet? Or is this going to be its own separate story with the whole Blank Sheet thing just being an AU kind of story?

Comment posted by DMakkam deleted Jun 22nd, 2014


This is going to be an Alternate Universe to Blank Sheet. She'll move to Ponyville later on, but won't run into Blank.


Well I'm glad you like it, and I'm going to make more soon.

Yes, this pleases me greatly <3

Thoroughly enjoyed this :twilightsmile:. Might even give this 'Blank Sheet' story everyone else is talking about a try as well :pinkiecrazy:.

I like it. Want to see more :pinkiehappy:

Loved Blank Sheet. Looking forward to seeing more of this now. :rainbowkiss:

3645328 Okay. I'm glad this will be an Alternate Universe to Blank Sheet. I like the Blank Sheet story for the plot (in more ways than one) but I honestly can't stand Blank Sheet himself as a character. I dunno. He just kind of rubs me the wrong way.

But I loved Spiral, even in that story. I think it's great that you're making another one just about her, and it's pretty good so far.

Looking forward to more. :pinkiehappy:

enjoyed this first chapter a lot, hope we get more soon :pinkiehappy:

I don't even need to read to know i love it but when/if you finish the story you should finis it on the moment she and blank sheet get to 'gather'. I suspect this is going to be a 15 chapter plus story

A spin off? Why not, least you are still writing again. :D

Hold it! *screech*
No. Way. You made a story about Spiral Dream! Welp. Gonna actually read it now.

My approval of this story continues powerfully. I eagerly look forward to the next installment. :ajsmug:

Cant wait to read more:pinkiehappy:

I think I read something somewhere about editing and letting you know if we spotted something or not. . .

Then again, it is 3 AM and I've been browsing everywhere recently. Anyways, back to my point.
Punctuation. A lot of it is missing. For the most part, it seems to be mainly commas. There are a few places where a period could be used instead, however there do need to be more commas.


Thank you for pointing that out. I need to find an editor anyways.... Just one more thing to add upon the list!

soo there going to be any canon characters involved in this?....






If you mean the Main Six then later on yes, but if you mean The Hypnotic Adventures of Blank Sheet.... I might introduce one of the ponies Blank put under. Depends.


Yes there will be canon ponies from the show. I just didn't tag them because it's going to focus more on OC's in the beginning.


So as you may have gathered by my capslocked comments, I am a massive fan of the Blank Sheet/Spiral Dream multiverse :rainbowkiss: and I wanted to get your permission for something. I have plans to write a story called Pixelmix Meets Spiral Dream (I'll think of a better name later) where Spiral meets my OC, and I wanted to ask your permission before I began writing. After all, you DO own the character, technically. Just being courteous. :twilightsmile: so, yeah! You have a good day sir :pinkiehappy:

Will there be any impreg-related content in this or Blank Sheet in the not-too-distant future?

You do it so damn well... :fluttercry:




'Scuse me while I eviscerate myself.

So what's gonna happen with the Blank Sheet fic?


I'm in the process of working on the next chapter. Internet problems and various tasks have gotten in the way. I'm also working on updating the greentext some more, and then the next chapter of The Life of Spiral Dream.

I'm trying to reach a few thousands words in the next Blank Sheet chapter.


Ehrm, I'm not sure if I just didn't notice that it was this way before, but did the status change to "on hiatus" recently? Like, are the outside problems that bad?

I hope not...

I just realized a potential plot twist in this chapter...

And if it really means what I think it means, it doesn't look good for Spiral Dream. :rainbowderp:


She's drunk.
She sends Garden to get fruits.
She wakes everypony up and makes them forget everything.
She falls asleep (because she's drunk)

...It was never stated that Garden came back.

Call me paranoid, but that's exactly the kind of hint I would write into my stories.




*grabs shotgun and sprints for Equestria Portal* HOLD ON, SPI, I'M COMING!

Perfect music for this situation: http://soundcloud.com/atmozfears/f_ck_n_j_mp

well, that was an interesting start^^ dont get why she didnt want to be a Mistress when she clearly enjoyed being in charge but oh well^^ nice chap^^

Nice job on this so far. I'm terrible at writing stuff from the character's first person perspective, so you have my Kudos just for pulling that off. I like Spiral Dream and her somewhat rambly style of speech. And it's nice to see a hypnotist pony that has her limits sometimes.

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