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Going to guess that the Elements do jack****, mainly because he predates the Elements by eons and having assaulted a head of state he now has casus belli to declare war on Equestria. Hopefully he gets a chance to spend son time bonding with his son.
Okay, I seriously love this chapter. It was very sweet of the Overlord to make breakfast for Gilda and I love how kindly he acts towards her. The Overlord and Gilda's dancing made me laugh, especially since the scene is an homage to The Mask and the fact that Celestia was incredibly jealous. Cadence's reaction to meeting the Overlord was amusing and Twilight's twitching eye was fun until the end. I'm surprised at the fact that Gilda wouldn't mind having Celestia return with the Overlord and the fact that Spike had a bad time at the Gala and is Celestia and the Overlord's child. The ending with Celestia and the Overlord dancing was very sweet until Twilight and the girls screwed it over. Hope to see the next chapter soon because that cliffhanger was epic.
7754658 You're only half right there. The Elements DID do something...but it wasn't to the Overlord. All will be explained six chapters later.
7754680 Sadly, you're going to have wait a bit. Let's just say that the Overlord interacting with the Elements back in Chapter 2 is about to be revealed.
7754658 I also seem to remember that he did something to them, when he was only a soul.
Twilight you megaidiot!!!! You ruined everything!! Again!!!
Wonder if he goes to court for custody over Spike. Would be funny.
Everything was going so well, then Twilight needs to fuck it all up....of course
Damn it Twilight, you ALWAYS act before you have all think or have all the facts.which leads to situations like this.
.... WELP, Twilight may have just started a war to end Equestria. SMOOTH MOVE, BOOK-BRAIN! THIS IS WHAT YA GOODIE-GOODIES GET FOR ATTACKING SOMEONE WHO CAN OBLITERATE YOU WITH A SINGLE THOUGHT!
7754969 You really think the Overlord is going to go to war over this? Well, he might...but the thing is WHEN. That'll make all the ponies sweat.
7754997 I'm predicting he'll walk it off like nothing happen, make the magic harmony rocks EXPLODE, then leave with a simple proclamation of "SOON". That'd definitely put people on edge.
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I thought he was less referring to the overlord and more referring to the fact that Twilight attacked the Prancian ambassador at a function that originally was going to have the actual leader which indicates the attack may have been originally an assassination attempt against the current...emperor? of Prance. Thus giving righteous casus belli to go to war. Plus he was there as the representative of Prance.
Twilight is gonna have a beating by both the Overlord AND Celestia.
The one thing I didn't agree with is the part when Cadence seemed to be falling for the Overlord.
1. She has a husband
2. He is part of a species she has never seen before
OOOhh shit twilight, things are going down. Oh idea, have the elements take a physical forms and have them leave to find there own way of killing and/or turning him into a mental slave of "harmony"
well typical of twilight to act first out of impulse then regret it later. Although, would the elements be able to affect him in the same ways as other characters since i am pretty sure he predates the elements of harmony
I HATE Cliffhangers but really good work so far. (thumbs up!)
I think Twi might get some 'political-sh*tstorm' heading her way...
7755136 Cadence ISN'T falling for the Overlord, She was just dumbstruck by his face. She was honestly expecting some scarred face that has ties to Evil, not an unmarred one
7755431 Oh trust me...The Shitstorm is the LEAST of her worries.
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You know who else was both handsome and unfathomably evil? Griffith.
7755531 Ah sorry for misinterpreting that. It's was just used in so many fics and has become a common sight for me. Just the way how Cadence is introduced to the Overlord is very similar to other fics.
Okay this is killing me, is there even a chance for Celestia and the Overlord? And with Spike being their kid, I would like to think the Overlord would spend some time with him and, Celestia would like to supervise them or have someone do it for her.
7755868 Oh there is, but it's gonna be a slow climb to get there.
7755552 Huh, I was picturing Griffith as the overlords face the entire time.
NOPE, this equestria is inredimable if they have never had pancakes till now; let the cleansing begin
Aaaah, so that's why the supercontinent Pangea broke apart, it was all Celestia and the overlord tower sessions
I find it funny how Twilight, a political leader at a high standard political party, outright attacks another political figure in the open with zero thought into the ramifications of her actions. The overlord doesn't even have to retaliate. Prance won't like the fact their representative was attacked without probable cause. She could say he's evil but what evidence can she provide to support that. And anything she says could be countered by the fact that the overlords defeated the caribou who would've done serious damage to Equestria. Thus, making her look even more like a fool. Not to mention dragging her friends down with her. And she was going to have to contend with a very angry Celestia, Luna, and Gilda. So in one fell swoop. she...
1. Caused an international incident.
2. Her reputation will take a huge hit.
3. Pissed off several lovers(both on and off)
4. Potinentionally started a war.
5. Possibly ruined her friends' lives as well.
7756726 That's basically it in a nutshell, though what the Overlord will have them go through in the next couple of chapters will be NOTHING compared to what you just described. Let's just say that the Elements aren't what they seem to be.
Oh and something else i should add in here, this all takes place just after Twilight's ascension into Alicornhood, so she is still learning the in and outs of the political arena from Celestia and Luna. This event will teach her not to shoot first, ask questions later...hopefully.
Twilight.....
Fuck you and your idiocy
7756726 You sir are a fucking multi colored genius to do that.
7758514 All that and more will happen...and it will be Luna who chews them out.
7758829 Evil is as Evil does as Gnarl always says. Since you think him a business man, let's go with that.
Say the Overlord acquires a powerful company, but he then guts it to add in his own ideas. This causes hundreds if not thousands of layoffs. To the laid off workers, he's Evil or at least the bad guy for replacing them. Yet to the new workers, he's made them a ton of money with his payoff, ergo, he's seen as the good guy.
Thing about Good and Evil is that its all a matter of perspective; one man's view of Evil can be viewed as Good by another.
To quote Alucard on the matter of the Elements attacking the Overlord: You done goofed
THE MASK!!! I LOVE THAT MOVIE!!!!
Oh great, another story that has Spike resenting his life.
Hopefully that is fixed later on.