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Poor Bon Bon. Loved your filler
YUM YUM!
This chapter was funny.
Are you serious? Upon immediately hearing that this guy is a human and the ultimate evil, she immediately attacked her friend, tied her up and drags her over to him.
To be a sex slave and a maid.
It's not okay. It's not okay. between this and your chapter on the princess, this story is getting misogynistic as fuck. Shame on you. SHAME! ON! YOU!
4840088 Huh? Oh you. Thought i heard a pest buzzing around...
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Yeah, How dare I have actual moral integrity. Women don't deserve to be portrayed well at all. They should all be slaves or lesser beings in the face of my overpowered Gary Stu villain character, or should worship him unrealistically for no good reason at all.
Shame. On. You.
4840146 Funny, others seem to be alright with it.
*brings out a solid block of wood with complaints written on it.* All complaints are to be put here.
4840183
There are more "likes" on the "fall of the Equestria" story then "dislikes". But it's slave rape porn. Just because a lot of people are okay with something doesn't mean the story isn't bad. Lots of people went to see Transformers. It's still a lousy film. Lots of people LOOOOOVE Malideus. But it's a stupid, hateful piece of crap.
The assumption that popularity equals quality is out logical fallacy that any writer who even bother led to take any course in college about writing would be able to debunk.
4840195 Never heard of Fall of Equestria. But now that i have, I'll check it out.
Lyra is best pony minion.
Not only willingly came to the Overlord but brought a second new slave too.
Armored Gilda too? Battle Mistress engaged.
Loving this story.
4840299 Glad someone is...and THANK GOD! I finally found the block command on this place! Complainers, beware!
4840316
That's really not very mature of you to just block anybody who has criticism of your story. If the only reviews of any work were positive, nobody would ever review anything and people would never know there was something wrong with a work. Do you think film studios tried to censor Roger Ebert from saying bad things about their films? No, they knew that people had the right to say whatever they wanted about their movies. Things like the block feature should be used for those calling you stuff like "f@g" or "c--t" or "n---r" and personal attacks, who are hounding you online whenever possible, not to just keep somebody who doesn't like your main character/protagonist from commenting on your story.
I think what scares me the most about this story is the fact Lyra just -happened- to have a skimpy maid outfit on hand for just such an occasion.
(Not calling you out there, cause I could completely see Lyra having one for just such an emergency.)
I admire her dedication to the human fascination she possesses. If only there were more like her, the Overlord would have to build a second tower just to hold them all
Lyra is several diffrent kinds of Crazy, heck she's creepier than the overlord!!
4840434 No, but people who constantly harass me about my style and of how i portray the characters in my stories does deserve being blocked.
4840678
But your character IS kinda overpowered. And the sudden twist that Lyra isn't just evil but sort of perverted kinda comes out of nowhere. Something like that should be built up to, or hinted at, foreshadowed.
4841053 Whoa, who said Lyra's evil? She OVEREXCITED that a human exists did you not catch that? and the perversion? The File. That is the key here.
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You mean the entry about the Overlord? But it says right there he's evil as all Hell. That doesn't explain why she wants to join him. Just reading about, say, Charlie Manson alone won't make you wanna go join Charlie Manson. I mean, it would be one thing if we'd seen her obsessed with him before, but we didn't get that.
And what does she think is gonna happen joining a guy named the OVERLORD, who's described as the ultimate evil? Nothing good could POSSIBLY come of that. For all she knows, he could beat her every night. If she's doing this to try and study him, wouldn't it be a good idea to tell the Mane Six "look, I've got an idea, if this doesn't work out, here's what you need to do"? This could VERY easily go wrong.
4841171 okay, one, that entry is made by a mad pony 'I.M. Demens' Demens is Latin for Insane. How can you not know that? two, I will explain that in the upcoming chapters. Jeez, I don't do things all willy-nilly, I do have a outline of this and the next chapter will explain how Lyra came into possession of the book
4841240
Okay, fair point on number two...but she herself tells Bon-Bon he is, in fact, the Overlord. An "evil human" who probably likes nubile maids. So she clearly believes the book. Also...how many good guys do you know call themselves "Overlord"?
4841240 Believe it or not, in the games he's more of an Anti-Hero, so he can be a Paladin of Evil or a Tyrant of Evil. You really gotta know the games for how the mind works.
4840088 Misogyny is defined as the hatred or dislike of women. Sexual objectification is a manifestation of this, but only when used in such a way that it attempts to make women seem inferior to men, which is a viewpoint the Overlord does not seem to possess.
As it stands, this only shows pervertedness on the part of the Overlord, and by extension the author, which is not something I can condemn in good conscience because it would be equatable to condeming any demonstration of heterosexuality because it is offensive to women, which is of course moronic.
If anything, the Overlord seems to be a philogynist, both in-game and in this story; He shows a fondness for women that does not seem to extend to men.
4841397
He might be not AS bad as some others...unless this is his son. From Overlord II. Who is 100% pure bag of dicks.
4841574 I will be explaining Celestia's and Lyra's affections in later chapters. All i ask is for a little patience since the school year is going to be starting up again.
4844110 Take your time; I'm not the one making a big deal out of it.
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Not true. Look at the act of free will. It's chaotic, but not EVIL. They're not the same. Order and chaos aren't moral alignments like good and evil.
And nobody likes nukes. Or war. Fear isn't equal to evil.
4908912 Interchangable aliases That's me pointing out that Order and Chaos can be good and/or evil and that in the long run all will come to balance. That's why I used the body as an example. Order keeps the heart pumping but Chaos keeps the body safe. Thus they are both needed to keep equilibrium.
I know well that Chaos is not always evil. Without Chaos to break Order's rut, nothing would change, nothing would progress. That is why I tend to support Discord (philosophically anyway) because the herd mentality and cutie marks leave out the problems that allow the common man to overcome and become better because of it or fail and find something that no one else has. (At least if the end was always positive).
And I was commenting about how half of the world was supposed to be evil. It didn't need to be evil for war to break out. As soon as someone launches an A bomb, the world is going to burn.
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No, they won't, because the only "balance" comes from good ultimately trumping evil as all religions worth a damn explains. Evil isn't necessary. Chaos and order can be used for good reasons. Evil can't be used for good reasons. Any "good" that an evil act can bring about could be brought about through good means. Evil is good SPOILED. It's good gone rotten. It's a parasite that wouldn't exist if not for good. It's why the Devil is always a fallen Angel, etc, etc. It doesn't exist to bring about any real good to the world because it's selfish and underhanded. And the reasons for the war that started in the beginning of the story is nonsensical. That's the issue. It comes off like throwing humanity under the bus. It makes no sense the majority would just decide to start a nuclear war. And really? A SINGLE CHAPTER? That's it? You can't have just one chapter for character foundation. It's too rushed.
4909033 Don't talk to me about character foundation, I'm not the author. But I have to say that you only happen to be seeing only one side of the pennies in the air. Order isn't always good and Chaos isn't always evil. Both can be evil or good. Adolf Hitler led Germany to orderly and systematically remove all that did not fit his idea of perfect. Evil Order. Gandhi acted out against the british rule. Even without violence, he caused a change all around the planet and exposed british crimes against humanity that most seemed to have forgotten. Good Chaos.
And evil has been used for good all the time. Greed is evil, yet with the money from business men's greed we are able to fund public works like parks, the arts, public school systems.
War is bad, but if not for the initiative caused by WWII the USA may not have survived the great depression.
Violence is bad but it is through mastery of it that the iconic tibetan monks are able to live long lives and discover techniques and skills that make them above human, and find nirvana.
Every story has two sides, and it is through the knowledge of both that you gain understanding.
4909833
No, just because an evil act inadvertently causes good that doesn't mean it a good act in itself. Evil is ultimately unnecessary. And don't they to play the argument "we need evil for conflict". We don't need conflict in our lives. And if we do it need not come from evil. Do you think a hurricane is evil? A forest fire? Plenty of conflict arises from amoral sources and makes for plenty of suffering in the world. But evil is ultimately unnecessary.
There's often two aides to every story. The right and the wrong side. But one side is not always going to have any "point". You think a guy who believes the earth is flat is worth listening compared to someone who thinks its round? The same goes for evil. It's viewpoint isn't worth considering because it's inherently warped and twisted. And your perception of it may say "oh, it's just this", but that doesn't change the facts of it. It doesn't matter if Hitler thought he was being good. What he did was still evil. Perception means nothing because nobody is the villain of their own story. But that doesn't mean they aren't villains.
Look,you're not gonna convince me, you're clearly more the subjective school, I'm objective. Nothing you say will change that.
I agree that an evil act that causes good doesn't mean it was an act of goodness. I was merely pointing out that evil intentions can lead to good, and good intentions can lead to evil. And I will agree that evil is not needed for conflict, that's what order and chaos are for, and can be unneccassary but it is not without a point. You have mentioned religion multiple times before, and to say evil has no point is to say that the gods people worship allow evil to corrupt and twist those that are devoted to them for no reason. That God allows the devil to attack and twist his followers because he does not care and that there would be no point in religion because the gods would do nothing no matter what you do for them.
Or that they simply choose favorites, that of all the creations they have made and followers they have only those that they really like get any special treatment.
Why would you follow a being that would allow you to die by evils hand while the guy next door gets to go to heaven simply because he looks better than you?
And on a different note, if you truly believe evil is unnecesary then why do you live with filters? Why not become live the life of a palidan and give up anything that is not one hundred percent good? Become a beacon of all that is just. Devote yourself to your cause and nothing else, give up anything and everything you have worked for to those that have less than you if it will not help you on your crusade, speak only the absolute truth let no lie no matter how small leave your lips, eat only when it is completely necessary for the food you eat could go to some other hungry fellow you do not know yet. Give away your laptop and computer who would need such a thing when your time is well spent working for your cause.
Why don't you live such a lifestyle now? Aren't comforts such as the ones we use now deadly sins of sloth? Isn't the story we've both read a sin of lust and envy? Nothing has no point.
And your view on your viewpoints seems hypocritical considering your example. From his perspective he was doing that world an ultimate good and disregarded the viewpoints of others because he thought them evil for disagreeing with his. Do not mistake me for agreeing with Hitler because, I most definitly definitly disagree with his plan to murder any and all of the non-aryan populous of the world but you defeat your purpose and choose to life your life in ignorance by not learning any other perspective.
I agree that our philosophical views are very different. You see the world in black and white while I try to look past and find the gray in between but I will always respect your opinion and choice in philosophy, and I have to say the debate was rather fun. It's always good to see things from a different perspective.
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4949025 4914209 Sorry, college has resumed and its a hectic time. I'll update when i can.
4841684 I love overlord 2 so much fun
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Overlord 2 makes me drool for another overlord game.
Pls Codemasters, pls.
Give Triumph Studios the IP and let them satisfy our need and hunger for evil.
5015874 there is an overlord 3 its just for wii i think it was plus your strictly good in it if you noticed in 1 you could be both bad or good in 2 you were evil in 3 your good which i think is kinda dissapointing
5017869 Dark Legends is NOT the third Overlord game. It is at best an attempt to sway younger users to the games. It has no canon relation to Raising Hell or Overlord 2.
5020331 whats dark legends? i myself have not played it i just saw vids on youtube that showed gameplay
5022560 Dark Legends is the Wii version of Overlord and many consider it a unofficial prequel/third Overlord game. I have played it and, while the story itself was great, the way it was executed turned it on its head for me. Triumph Studios weren't behind the making of that Video game.
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Triumph Studios made damn fine Overlord Games. I personally haven't played Dark Legends or Minions, but from what I have read it doesn't sound near as good.
No Mistresses
Army is capped beneath 50
Has no connection to the other two games that we know of
Just doesn't scream true Overlord. Plus, where would he even fit in the list of Overlords?
The Black Baron, his uncle, controlled minions but was known as the Black Baron and not an Overlord?
So does that make that character the first Overlord? Because he certainly didn't have the magic required nor the mistresses to produce daughters like the Second Overlord.
5025491 Not only that, but the game itself was WAY too short, and the ending was really abrupt.
5184349 it is welcome so long as you help me improve. Just don't be like Ngrey who nitpicked everything i did.
chapters coming soon?
5212646 Sorry. Sorry. Sorry. Busy time with college projects
I am working on them, but they are slow again due to major college projects.
Love this story hope you continue this it's gold!
How far are you with the new chapter?
5376979 Glad i could give them to ya!
Haven't read a good Overlord crossover in a long time; keep up the good work
5454834 Huh...Ss2sonic must have made that before my post...shame. Either one works though.
this is a most definite write MORE STORY