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Loving this story so far! Keep up the good work.
4656469 Thanks!
Ooohhhh Overlady Need One Fic. Of This, And The Cap. Is Really Good, I Need More Fast,
GIlda in anthro form in a maid suit? A lovley sight indeed.
4658543 Just wait until the next chapter.
Love it also you are rigth in both games the overlord never force the mistress, are you going to continue it, i am reading another fic with the lord, i love this character your work is very good hope you carry on
Beings who raise a stink over a story fiction-wise that doesn't follow their own branch of logic.
I take it my criticism isn't welcome?
I'm guessing Gilda has to look somewhat like this at the moment
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5184349 Hey, sorry for the late late LATE reply. No, your criticism was most welcome, but there were others who just wanted this story done by THEIR standards and not my own. This isn't the first time i did Fanfiction, but it is the first time doing it with Overlord and MLP. It's rough, but constrictive criticism i will take.
That music piece... and i use that term very loosely... was annoying, far from calm and generally just ear splitting to even try to listen....
I really didn't like it... what few bits i even listened......
Here he too her claw and kissed the back of it
1. Took.
The deviant art was erased so there's a broken link on this chapter. Specifically about her maid outfit.
this is an old and probably discontinued story, but why wouldn't she know about skin? Like, what's under the ponies' fur and the griffins' feathers? just straight up muscle?