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Wonder what he was planning on naming Spike originally. Not very regal or befitting the Scion of the Overlord is it?
Glad your back to writing, and the chapter is great but the overall its...bland when you think about it. The part about the ruby and spike stuff that's fine but everything else is just...meh *shrugs* But that's just me
Anyways, keep up the good work my friend
7860453 I kinda figured, but to be perfectly honest, i say bland is better then off the wall.
Loved how you only needed the show for this one for the most part.. seriously, always hated rarity as a character.
7860464 true, but this is why I hate Rarity, she's just a bland as fuck character. All we know is that she's a good tailor, and a bitch. That's it, besides those two bland points about her she's about as forgettable as her mannequins. But oh well, keep up the good work man
You know, just watching this asshole continuously condescend down to an actual heroine isn't entertaining, it's grueling. It's cruel.
7860581 Welcome to the world of villainy boyo!
And the madness continues!
7860648 I always thought that for the most part that's called owning up to everyday reality in situations like this but that's me
You know, this works more so in earlier seasons then now. I'd say that nowadays Spike doesn't really take it to heart that Rarity doesn't exactly return his feelings. That and Rarity has overtime become more caring of Spike. Of course, Spike can't have his romance yet because, well, he's still a child. Even if she wanted to, Rarity can't. So I wouldn't say chains hold them together. As well, 'greed'.
Rarity has a bloody point. She's a businessmare. If she doesn't make a profit, she loses her business. That and she can't expand if she doesn't make connections. One of the things I loved about that episode was that Twilight realized that Rarity was making connections and applauded her for it. It's not greed when it's your livelyhood.
Lastly, when Rarity saw Spike in chains.... she would have decked N. Rarity. I mean, she knows N. Rarity. She's been manipulated by her. She's not afraid to get into a fight and again, she's come to care for Spike a lot as she does confide her feelings to him and seek him out for comfort. So really, once she saw that I'd think she'd just get angry and beat N. Rarity into a pulp.
Well done sir, well done indeed.
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That doesn't work when you want the main villain protagonist to be the one we are meant to get behind and agree with. It's like asking us to sympathize with Joffrey over Jon Snow.
Ah...NO.
Welcome back and awesome chapter.
7862010 I was being sarcastic about that comment...oh, wait, this is the internet, sarcasm is everywhere.
7863974 Yeah, i just discovered that myself this morning...look up ss2sonic and find gilda...i think he's got a maid pix of her somewhere.
7905860 Oh they didn't just done goofed. THEY DONE FUCKED UP!
I was wondering when you're coming out with the next chapter for this story I'm really looking forward to it
So, when are you going to do the next chapter? I am rather eager to see what Pinkie holds deep inside her. I'm betting she's going to notice Overlord and Twilight watching thanks to her 'Breaking the 4th Wall' ability.
*Once again turns into dragon form (see comment in Fall of the Caribou part 1)* OFF WITH HER BUCKING HEAD!