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Hope the next chapter comes soon to learn about Celestia and the Overlord
"Death of a Tyrant"...and yet the Overlord's still alive? False advertising!
6174374 I'm going to keep saying it this time in small words so you can understand.
DO. NOT. LIKE. DO. NOT. READ.
You think you speak for the rest of the site? Newsflash: You don't. This story is popular to others so I'm going to keep going on it. Go heckle someone else so you can get your rocks off...if you even have them.
6174358 I did say that in the author notes didn't i?
6174546 Yep, you did. I also seem to have accidentally erased the part where I said that the Overlord's plans to deal with the Prench was awesome when I posted the comment.
6174579 Ah, computer glitches...i get it.
6174545
"How dare you criticize my work because other people like it" is not a valid argument. Nobody ever tells a movie reviewer or a game reviewer not to criticize a product or a piece of work just because others like it. Nobody who believes in intellectual honesty, anyhow. You think it's fair to tell the Nostalgia Critic not to criticize the Matrix just because lots of people like it? And I LIKE that film. But even I recognize he has the right to point out things he sees as issues and problems!
UPDATE!
Looking forward to more whenever you get it out
6174612 I'm saying if you don't have points on how to make it better, don't bother to post.
6174821 Thanks. I'll try but Life is getting in the way.
6175404
If you want truly constructive criticism, then I have one thing suggestion that's quite simple. All the Overlord's backstory pretty much was crammed into a single chapter at the very beginning an it felt overly rushed. Have his humanity fleshed out. Have his motivations fleshed out, let us see a more quieter and contemplative side other than just essentially being a tyrant who has no motivation for why he does what he does beyond "Mwa ha ha evil".
6175405 Doesn't it always? All the same, I'll be waiting
Evil pony midget had it comming, all hail the dark one!
6175471 Thank you. And I am trying that...as for the backstory...there will be a bit more of that in the next chapter. I actually wanted to put that one up before this on, but i saw that it was again, too rushed so i decided to flesh it out some. As for the Overlord's apparent 'Randomness', I did mention quite a few times that he is searching for items that were taken from his tower as that is how it works in the games. Granted its not going to be ALL the items as he hid several beforehand. But there is something that you might like soon.
IT LIVES
I can picture the Overlord saying,"it's good to be back"
6177181 Yeah.
At last, evil always finds a way.
6177844 It always does.
Using history of the human world are you? Nice. I have not seen any stories that do that. Good job retelling the French Revolution.
6360917 I did have the Overlord point out that the ponies are reliving what the human race has in eons past. When i say something like that, you can bet your last bit/dollar i will stay in continuity with that.
6361057 Yeah remember him saying that history was repeating it's self, but I did not expect you to this out of the way to do it.
OverLordium??? Really. REALLY!!! REALLY!!!!!
6406643 Hey, i was dead tired when i made the chapter! I exhausted any other name that made since and started to get into werid ones. Boomium was the name i originally came up with...
Any news on new chapter?
Any news on a new chapter
Honestly if there wasn't blood thirsty ponies (never thought that was something's I'd say) I would've let the minions fight over him...
Now I have a wonder of what pony tastes like...
Also would that be too evil? Having minions literally tearing him apart at all angles?
6791479 No, i think its happened before.
6906390 Update?