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While I am not particularly inclined to read the story, I saw your mini-bio and had to make this comment.
Student. Amateur. Never have I been more amused at the use of a single word. Nor, I believe, has that word been more properly used.
you kept calling him overlad instead of overlord
No, it wasn't the overlord that turned on pony-kind it was pony-kind turned against all life on the planet and tried to create "order" with "harmony" magic and the insidious tree of "harmony"! Seriously, no one ever pay attention to the part where it's been stated that the tree has dug its roots into the heart of the world? To kill the tree is to kill the planet, that way there is NO removing the taint of "harmony" magic. Magic or any other powerful or all-powerful resource or resource in general is to be controlled by the elites tia, in this caseand no other, end of statement bring in the firing squad for those that disagree
7559095 they were going off of looks
Also, UPDATE!!!!!!
7559095 That is Spike doing the reading, he's not going to read it Perfectly he's going to read it casually and shorten things down.
7559105 even before spike was reading and twilight was even in the flashbacks with celestia speaking he was still called overlad even before they saw his face
i dont think the overlord turned on them i think they () tuned on him
I love your backstory about the Overlord. Surprising that Celestia and Luna are interstellar princesses that terraformed Earth into Equestria and that Celestia went from a bratty princess into a more mature lady thanks to the Overlord. Thanks for the amazing chapter. It was worth the wait.
7559095 I did that because this was a younger Overlord. In universe terms, he was only 20,000 years old at the time of this happening so in the eyes of the universe he was just barely a teen.
7559074 I gotta get that fix, i graduated this past May. Still saying I'm an amateur despite my other stories on Fanfiction.net.
Really love that this has continued. The Overlord really reminds me of Melkor.
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...My point is that you misspelled both words.
Why would the Alicorns want to colonise a dead world with a dying sun and a moon out of orbit? They didn't know that it could be repaired, and it seemed like a lot of work just to play god.
7559456 I don't know, maybe they just wanted to because they could. The fanbase makes them like Gods, so i just follow the Fans.
7559513 You want to go that route in your story, fine, go that route. This is my story and if I want to make them out as gods, fine, i will. I already got 1 immortal guy, why not have more? I'm not here to argue, I'm just here to write to my heart's content.
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Not complaining mate, just making a point. Love this story and hopefully will see more of it.
Love this story, pretty awesome to see an update.
Interesting background story, and it is good to see you are still working on this fic.
7562711 I'm always working on my stories, its just life seems to have it out for me in regards to updates.
"me reading this" I have an idea for a new race! "makes asari" well my lifes work is done.
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7564150 Quote is actually older then that.
The Republic of Germaneigh will not assist Prance in this matter
7600702 Gotta leave some for our Scaly underdog, Spike.
Rainbow ain't the brightest, it said he didn't want his race back and she jumped to the conclusion he wanted them back for the turn, hope someone reminds her of that.
7601025 Correction, she said 'A race to rule over', namely the ponies not his own race.
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I apologize, I swear I got dyslexia cause I always read something wrong then reread and see how it is written.
Still hoping to see him goes with the DOMINATION than DESTRUCTION side of overlording, sure the extra power may be fine but who you going to rule over and have make your shit for you and your minions? The SEALS?!? Then again I fought there's much of a difference between them and the ponies . . . Unless they are secretly like the Rabbit in Monty Python
7624869 Ah, True Order may be a static void but The Chaos is a formless pit which nothing can exist except when it can. Life is chaotic, all life, but it is through bouts of order does life prosper. Balance is what optimal, because it allows both. Order gives chaos meaning as is true of the inverse. For Balance!
"thine" means "your" in modern english. so that sentence currently says that Luna is the demons sister. and i think you meant for that sentence to mean Luna as Celestias sister. So the word you're looking to use should be "mine"
Mine = first person possessive
Thine = second person possessive
I hope this helps