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Terrible thing having to face who we truly are, that’s the BIG take-away from all those shows\cartoons where someone gets spilt.
He and everyone around them HAVE to face ALL aspects of that person.
Wow messed up overlord. Did you have to crush Celestia heart like that? I get what he's doing though. If Equestria loses their allies then they lose trade, deals, and other stuff. The country will become destitute and will have no choice but to align with the overlord to stay afloat as well as protect themselves. Twilight really should've kept herself under control. I get the feeling that the overlord would never have done that. Can't wait to see the fallout from this.
Interested to see political sh*t-storm that most likely happen's...
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He's a dick, yes, but he sees opportunity and when he sees it, he capitalizes on it.
Now we see the plan unfold. Neutralising his biggest obstacles, discrediting his major opposition and a show of power all in one stroke? A masterful scheme. And he barely had to do anything. A triumphant day for the forces of evil! Looking forward to seeing the repercussions of this particular evening. Fantastic as always.
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Trust me, I think you'll like what I'll do. Course after all of this, i think i might have the Overlord partake in some good old fashion of kidnapping a fair maiden from her tower...you know, to make up for the ruined night.
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Interesting the main six are broken mentally yet the way he did that is by fixing them mentally revealing truths and undoing mental blocks both self imposed and forced. This could be interesting the ways fluttershy and pinkie reacted could bear fruit pinkie would probably try to fix her depression by going to the same person that made her aware of it one again, the overlord possibly leading to a pinkamena the assassin ark for her. While fluttershy will likely try to kill/get revenge on her parents, her doctor and anyone else who had a hand in the process of turning her "nice" possibly torturing the doctors for info on anyone else who they used the process on so she could free them(went off the deep end for this next part) and unleash an army of violent ponies who all want revenge. The overlord could always use a general with the ability to make anyone submit with just a stare could be useful for any non minion troops especially if he experiments with dark magic on her.
Twilight could be a problem his actions ruined her life up to this point by breaking both her friendships and making her embarrass herself in front of celestia. She could easily go to the crystal empire to "visit her brother" officially and while no one looks study any books left behind by sombra and once she had enough dark power she could march into tartarus (possibly mind controlling cerberus) and absorb the demons energy till she'd be strong enough to be a legitimate threat to not just him but also any country he's allied too. She'd be like super sombra that dissected tereck and implanted the (organ? magic?Gland?) that lets him absorb magic. What do you think was I right or at least close with any part and if no did any part of this seem entertaining to you?
“I do not care about my friends state of mind!”
No.
Just. NO. That's NOT how Twilight Sparkle would act. It's not. You can't just FORCE the characters to act in a way that COMPLETELY GOES AGAINST THEIR PERSONALITY AND EVERYTHING WE KNOW ABOUT THEM just to put them in the position you want. That's BAD WRITING. That's like forcing Batman to suddenly kill with a gun because you want everyone to turn against him and think he's a psychotic instead of, say, FRAMING Batman for killing with a gun, which would be better writing. These characters are unrecognizable, the villain is ridiculously overpowered, and yet you expect us to agree with HIS point of view, even though he's doing disgusting things. Worse still, there's not a genuinely likable character in the story cuz you've WARPED the real main characters into not even pale reflections of what they ought to be.
And you can't use the argument "Well it's an alternate universe" NO, it's not, cuz there ain't no TAG for that, no warning, this is supposed to be them, just with the "Overlord" world going into theirs, bleeding into theirs. This kind of treatment of characters is a bastardization of what they are. You're tearing the main canon down to make YOUR character look good. That's like Frank Miller tearing down Superman to make BATMAN look good by comparison.
And that is WRONG, damn it.
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Except every single thing he did actually has roots in canon.
Hell it explains even more than Discord's Be evil because I say so thing and you're upset that a CROSSOVER has characters acting ooc even when dealing with something they've never dealt with before? Or embracing sides of themselves shown in canon? I don't recall all the episodes but we've seen their evils quite a bit in the series.
I don't have the time to explain all the ways your snowflake rear needs to chill.
So just calm down and enjoy the story for what it is, or discontinue reading it and take your lack of constructive criticism with you. Thank you.
Oh and about your batman example. That did happen the episode Longest Night in Batman The Animated Series is in fact a thing.
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Twilight acting like she doesn't care what her friends think isn't in character. At all. At least Discord is known for doing that stuff and we are not meant to AGREE with his methods. The author WANTS that here. That's bad writing to make the characters so unlikable and out of character.
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She didn't care what they thought on several occasions during the series doing spells and cantrips that actively added to the issues in several episodes. Flutterbat ringing a bell? How about the want it need it spell?
She is absolutely terrible under pressure and is currently under a great amount of it being shown that her happy life was full of lies fed to her by the Crown to get her friends to stay in line, and having those lies peeled away is making her unable to cope and feel Enmity.
Fluttershy being Clockwork Oranged. Her dominant mind suppressed because her parents wanted a doormat.
Pinkie hiding her split personality caused by a major tragedy.
Rarity basically holding thr Overlord's SON'S heart hostage but not returning his feelings at all! Hell he's even Twilight's son as well because of the fact she hatched him!
Applejack lying to everyone about Apple Bloom being her daughter due to not wanting to deal with temporary shame.
Oh and let's not forget how she watched Dash murder all of her friends because she's more loyal to Queen and Country than the other EoH.
So You're saying that a more extreme scenario of what happened with Discord where Twilight outright tried to force them to use the EoH in her rage while not caring that they weren't acting right isn't in character?
But my sweet sweet special snowflake. That's the beauty of it. It is!
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Just hope it doesn't take another month to see it this story is my crack at this point.
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We were not meant to like Discord. We are SUPPOSED to agree with the Overlord. And by the way, going even further makes it unrealistic. Do you want to know why so much of the crazy stuff in the show works? It's because it knows that it's a fantasy series. It's perfectly sensible for there to be magic solutions to problems, but it wouldn't make any sense for example, if an ANVIL just suddenly popped out of the air and flopped onto somebody's head like in a Looney Tunes cartoon. Well, unless Discord is fighting someone, but that's about it.
The behavior of the characters and the setting still have to remain true to that environment. This isn't. It wants us to take all of this 100% seriously, when the show was more about winking nods to this kind of cliché, like the idea of a magical item that can just somehow solve everybody's problems instantly when the real power was inside them all along.
By taking it 100% seriously, that takes away a good deal of the shows appeal. And again, it just comes off is unrealistic, out of character behavior. It flies against what we know about the characters. And it especially doesn't help that, again, we are supposed to agree with the villain that is doing all this crap to them.
Ah, no. I write villain characters myself. But at least they're open and honest about the fact that they do bad shit. At least they actually feel bad about what they do. And I don't try to make the audience agree with them over the obvious heroes.
There's no good guys in this story. How's THAT for a constructive criticism?
That's a rather cold thing to do to your daughter.
. . . . . I see I was right to be worried.