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Let's see now...from what I can guess...
Rainbows going to break her wings from her depression, fully realizing she has no right to fly anymore.
I'm kind of sure Rarity is gonna stab her arms but keep her life.
Fluttershy is just gonna starve herself while staying in her room crying.
Fuck knows what Pinkies doing.
Applejack will teach AB then hang herself(probably)
And Twilight is just going to sit at home having a mental break down so hard that she can't do anything ever.
Now I could be so horribly wrong here and I hope I am, but who knows.
Damn... This was so good that I had to reread the chapter. I knew the girls were going to be thrown to the dogs, but this was delicious. I especially like this bit...
Notice the extra emphasis on my son! I mean that's what she gets for ruining her night.
Very well delivered punishment right there.... After all; Equestria is only ONE nation among many. Even if their rules move sun and moon, does not mean they get dip's in best deal's and all that.
Make amends with the Overlord dumbass
Ya'll got what you deserved.
8288736
Very dark, I hope you're wrong though.
8288810
Dark yes, but I have a feeling they won't die or cripple themselves in such depressing and painful ways.
I most certainly LOVED the punishments dished out in this chapter
Yeah they deserve this the Overlord was at the part in a peaceful way but we all knew he considered the mane 6 attacking him at the party with the elements but beside that not much else except learning the existence of his son
Call me crazy, but are we going to an insane or pissed off Twilight becoming a Nightmare Alicorn after all of that.
I mean seriously, given the magnitude of what she just lost, it would put any pony over the edge.
8288860
Something bad is going to happen we all know that. But the defining key of this is if I'm right and they either cripple, harm, or kill themselves. God I hope I'm wrong cause them killing themselves would throw the key factor this story is going for out the window
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8288860
you both should read my last comment 8280891 and tell me what you think
RCV?
two things I think you ment with scaving looks and I thought that the true selves that the overlord showed them would take over or did they revert back but there's still a chance for pinkie to deal with her inner self and fluttershy to be set free because I see her mental repression kinda like a lobotomy.
8288933
sheesh...but okay then.
8288736
That seems a little bit on the insanely over the top side of things. If any of them were going to hang themselves I would say it's probably Twilight since I'm pretty sure this is going to lead to some kind of falling out with her friends, after all it was her who basically gave the call to arms. I definitely do see them having some manner of breakdowns over this, but I doubt it would be anywhere near as dark as what you are guessing at. I can imagine Rainbow plucking out feathers from her wings rendering her flying sub-par, but breaking them seems kind of much. Fluttershy will probably just be insanely overbearing on the one pet she keeps, to the point of even driving it away. I don't really see anything too extreme happening with the others, I mean Rarity will probably work herself ragged but that's about all I can see happening with her. The punishments really weren't all that harsh considering this was essentially an attempted assassination of a foreign dignitary. I was honestly expecting Prance and their allies to call for blood, have them all de-winged an de-horned. Slash the tendons on the earth ponies so their impressive physical ability would amount to pretty much nothing. I was rather surprised to see the punishments be something so....pony-like i guess? Still, heading in a great direction, looking forward to seeing where it all leads.
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Why I was 'drastic' in my case was because all of their lives were literally ripped apart. Rainbow's dream job and all her hard work mean absolute fucking nothing, Rarity can't be a seamstress that she's been for years, Pinkie's entire life of parties is now just completely gone to shit, Fluttershy's life of helping animals is also gone to shit, Applejack would have seemed fine enough but then AB and her own fuck up she hates to admit is making her entire life feel like shit, and Twilight's entire life has been destroyed. So literally I'm expecting drastic things happening to all of them. Sure literally ripping off the pieces of their bodies is horrific but I think just...a little too dark then what I pointed out.
8288991
Where their lives ripped apart though? Rainbow and Twilight definitely got it hard, but the rest of them, though it's upsetting, I wouldn't really call it destroying their lives. Fluttershy for example can still take care of animals, she just can't have like 60 pets anymore, and as an animal lover sure it's something to be upset about, but not worth busting out the ol noose and chair. Rarity also did not lose the right to be a seamstress, she just can only sell her dresses in Equestria, sure she loses money, but that's pretty much it. If she was able to be a successful seamstress before she was able to sell internationally, then she should still be fine. If she started to run into hardships it would be the fallout of her actions not because of the punishment. Pinky was tied with Applejack for barely even being punished in my opinion. I mean, she can still even throw parties at sugar cube corner, so won't they all just go there for their parties? Applejack just can't sell apples outside of Ponyville personally anymore, and has to train Applebloom, something that she arguably should have already been doing considering it is a family business and all. Sure she feels shitty, but that is because of her own inner turmoil, the punishment was practically a slap on the wrist.
8289067
Eh true.
Muhahaha! Curious to see how things proceed. Wonder what our favourite embodiment of Evil was up to during those two weeks. R&R among other things I imagine. ;)
8288736
The fact you got SIX UPVOTES for recommending really sick, twisted stuff shows why people are reading this. It's not because it's a good story, most of the people reading this are into "Pony torture". They just want to see the Mane 6, the non-human, non-villain cast get hurt, get put through Hell. It's not being read by people who genuinely like the series, it's being read by people who HATE it and want to see the characters within suffer, and a monstrous villain get away with being monstrous, with nothing, not even GUILT, coming to bite them in the ass. That's why stories like this are so popular. A huge chunk of the site not only loves human protagonists, they adore human VILLAINS because it means the author can do evil, evil stuff to the characters and essentially get away with it.
8289307
I hate torture in any sense. Just so I could get that across.
But because of how the latest chapter was written out I kind of thought of the worst possible situation sadly. It wouldn't be surprising if something bad happened to them all during the time but...still. That's why I hope I'm horribly wrong cause I don't want to see them so brutally hurt...I really like this series and it shows 'oh hey shit's not as candy colored as you wish it was'...I just hope things don't end poorly...
8289357
I don't think this guy has played any of the overlord games before... it could be a lot, lot worse... hell in overlord 2 part of the tutorial is to club baby seals to death, then a bit after that you lead an assault on a elven nature sanctuary and corrupt a stone that is pure light magic. Then you go and assault your old home and you can either enslave the current governor or kill him... and enslavement is the good choice there, then later when you need to find more spell stones you get the choice to melt huge amounts of polar ice to free a ship so you can sail or you can use your magic to enslave townspeople to force them to dig out the ship... and the enslavement is the good option... yeah, this could get a whole hell of a lot worse, though I like how he did this story and how he destroyed the elements, there's a overlord game where your character is sent to hell and different sections of hell are ruled by fallen heroes (overlord 1's group if fellow heroes who left him for dead) this reminds me of that, each hero was based around a sin... I think a halfing became the Sin of gluttony, I can't remember. Ooo... I wonder if the author has him forging new weapons and gear in the traditional overlord way (sacrificing his minions into a forge to create incredibly strong weapons and armor.)
8289431
I don't think the author, or the main character is that evil to be honest. Honestly there's a fine line between actually writing a good story that makes you wonder how things are going to go, and just straight up hate that no one should like but likes because it's just straight up hate on literally everything we care about.
8289464
Yeah, the overlord is supposed to be the epitome of evil, the peak of perversion, the Duke of destruction, etc... (this guy is just someone Gnarl found in a dying world, and gnarl is trying to force him to go even further down the path of corruption) but in the 2nd game they brought that to a slight stop you can be a "merciful" overlord or as more evil deeds you do the more corrupt you got and the more corrupt you got you'd go through... mutations? I guess where spikes of metal would force themselves out of you, to the point you look just foreboding to even see... well he Gilda, which seems like the corruption path, I wonder if the author has any plans for a more "pure" female to try to lead him back to being a hero...
8289486
The Overlord is neither good nor bad, he just has to be bad to help balance out the world that's been at peace for a few thousand years.
8289492
Yeah, he's the cosmic balance here... in the games, heh, he didn't need to be awoken/saved/corrupted, the world was already going to Helheim in a hand basket.
Doing what he likes and having fun. That is the Overlord.
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pretty much
Wow, I did not expect the responses I got tonight. I'm very glad many of you liked what I did with the punishments in regards to this.
Now to answer some questions you all are asking about.
For one, the Mane Six probably won't go THAT far in their depressions to consider killing themselves. They still have a role to play in this. Now excessive drinking or whatnot, on the other hand, probably will happen.
Second, a resurgence of a Nightmare may or may not happen. I'm actually considering adding that in somewhere now.
Third and Finally, amends will be made with the Overlord but only after the Mane Six overcome their problems.
Really happy you enjoyed this latest chapter and I'll be exploring the Mane Six a bit more before turning back to the Overlord.
EDIT: For those who are calling Celestia a bitch due to the punishments, something you have to consider here is that Celestia is a LEADER of a NATION. It's the old Vulcan saying;
"The good of the many outweigh the needs of the few or the One."
Celestia has to put the good of the rest of the nation over the needs of six individuals. She takes NO pride in doing what has been done, considering that she has viewed Twilight as a surrogate daughter. This is hard on her just as it is on the rest of them.
8289431
i dont remember that ice melting part which part of the game was it was it before or after the beach area with the fat nobles
8289798
Overlord 2, when you had to retrieve the ship to go to the elven lands, if you used magic you did the good guy thing by enslaving their minds, if you lit the huge oil lake thing? Then all the ice holding the ship at port melted and instead of arriving at dry land you end up finding out you flooded all the elven lowland with water, leaving legion soldiers and elves on floating wood chunks... to be honest I felt like a total A-hole after flooding their lands then I just laughed at seeing all the legionnaires and elves floating around on wooden boards.
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8289464
Well in the first game you get a chance to save the elven race (Which I think is the cannen rout considering sanctuary has elves.) and in the second game the elf queen decides that the overlord is needed and decides to sacrifice herself to power the tower heart so I have a theory while the overlord is "evil" he is an agent of balance when the world has too much good in it he brings evil to it and if there is too much evil such as the empire he killed them and establishes his own domain usually smaller and more contained than the empire for he maye have enslaved two or three towns (counting the capital and sanctuary but lets face it the people at the capital deserved it.) the empire looks like they destroyed/enslaved hundreds if not thousands of villages considering how big the military they had was.
8289824
Well, yeah they were based on the Romans... well the worst parts of the Romans, though those centurions and legionnaires... those are just disgraceful to the uniform, the nobles... well that fit with a good many roman aristocrats... and yeah he is a force of balance, all the incarnations of the overlord, while they are evil, can do good things... except in hell, that's just you getting back at the bastards for leaving you to die... that first roman fake, the governor of your former home, I wanted to enslave him because I thought he'd go to the jester, but I ended up killing him. The overlord always has a good reason to hate people though, in the first game his adventuring party left him to die, the second game he was chased out of his home by the citizens... but he does balace everything out, but there's always someone to end the overlord... a endless cycle of life and death, peace and war, the overlord only Ever escapes that with his mistresses... he is a tragic villian to me, like Mr.Freeze, or like Aku from Samurai Jack.
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I enjoy the story because I'm cynical, and I see the worst in people... and all your well crafted views into their personal sins showed I was correct, though fluttershy... I honestly didn't expect that, so well done sir you managed to surprise me. I like how you show both sides of the coin instead of showing one side of it, It's annoying to find all these stories where the ponies believe they are always right about everything, this is one of the finest (next to the wheel of time series) stories I've had the pleasure to read. The idea he created the gems was an interesting choice and he was incredibly forward thinking about including the fail safes and everything into the gems. And all those punishments had me laughing, you tore down all of their ego's about being the Elements of 'Harmony', and at the same time completely shattered them, I shall continue my watch on this story, it's shaping to be an interesting midnight re-read.
8289808
there was a choice there i didnt know that i thought you HAD to light the fires
8289933
The gauntlet let's you enslave the people's mind of you don't kill them... -_-
But the ice before you reach the ship, yeah you got to melt.
Man, Twilight's punishment was HARSH, really harsh. Too much in my opinion.
But a broken heart makes broken decisions, I would love to see twilight bounce back, helping wherever she can and other such things.
Dam the prissiness is a bich I'm sorry for the main six great work keep it up
Really all in all, I can not feel for any of them.
Twilight and them are nothing but well trained attack dogs, so tia should have KNOWN that they’d go for the “end the threat”
Really, twilight and them should have known that it was only a matter of time before something happened because seriously, they are tools that apparently at least in this story don’t rate as cannon fodder once Luna was purged of NNM.
And tia? She has held the world in check ever since she and Luna over threw her boyfriend by the promise of 11 degree sunburn if they stepped out of line and NOW of all times she has a spine that has less structural integrity than wet toilet paper.
Hell, her coming down on the main 6 comes more off her being pissed that they attacked her ex-boyfriend who she has the hots for than anything else and is using the other countries being pissed as an excuse.
8289681
yay! I was wrong!, ho thank god I was scared honestly.
8289824
Right then
That the worst punishment ever.
It like that scene in Thor where Thor became unworthy and banishment scene.
I hope things turn alright at the end.
(round of applause) Out of all the stories I've read that the mane six got punished this one is on top in my books.
I tip my hat to you.
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8290028
There is a harsher punishment, she could have been stripped of horn and wing as well... or if the author has read the wheel of time series, he could have taken a note from how they punish Aes SedaI (female magic users, males go insane because of taint until they purify it) in that series they 'Still' them, meanin they tear the Aes Sedai's ability to use magic from them... most that are 'stilled' or 'gentled' (term for male users) don't survive unless they are kept under constant watch.
GET FUCKING REKT TWILIGHT!
But in all seriousness I feel like Fluttershy's punishment was a bit severe though understandable however everyone else was just perfect. And another reason why I liked the punishment (specifically twilight's) of the main six is that in most fimfictions on here were situations like this happen celestia let's them get off easy but this one. THIS One made my day so much that I did this.
This is what needed today.
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Now you know how I felt...
More of this awesome piece of literature, this bahankadonka!! I. WANT. MOAR!!!!! That is all.... please... you bloody brilliant you *points index finger at the author*
I have the strangest boner right now. The only thing I would've changed would've been that they would have to repair the damage by being fostered with the Overlord. That is, the Song of Ice and Fire version of fostering if you didn't know.
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They you do not see the beauty of this evil. It is not just black and white it's a cohosh of different grays that are different to who perceives them. Evil is doing what you want and not care for what others think. Not what others see as evil.
You are a dark, depraved, evil, disgusting and all around UNPLEASANT human being.
You are Satan's Anus with Klansman Mustard.
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I fucking love you! (If female, not like that, if male, no homo.)
This may sound pretty fucked up, but this chapter made me laugh more than any normal person has the right to.