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Huh. Always thought AB was Mac and Jack's kid. I suppose some deadbeat is fair enough.
Well...that's something. But can you skip the 'Greedy Generosity' part? Cause we've already had enough episodes of the show actually showing Rarity being a greedy bitch. Seriously I wouldn't even be surprised if Twilight was like 'Stop, I've seen enough of her crap as is' and the Overlord would be like 'Well that makes this journey a tad easier, let's move on shall we?'
7794412 Oi vey, what is with people and assuming Big Mac and Applejack are a thing? I knew the fandom was bad but not THAT bad. Besides, it made more sense for a deadbeat then Big Mac or Caramel. Think of it, we got a town that is highly reactive anything different; case in point, Bridle Gossip. Not to mention how they're sticklers for Tradition: Winter Wrap-up. Ergo, Logic told me to go with a child out of wedlock situation since it requires some of both situations i mentioned; ponies would react badly to the news of Applejack have a kid out of marriage and they'd shun her for it.
Sorry for the rant there, i just really hate it when people assume that I'm like other parts of the fandom.
7794424 No, since it is essential to building up to Sparity and Twilight realizing Spike's origins.
I was not expecting this. I had thought Applebloom would be a product of incest(Thank god you didn't take that cliched route). But being the result of a grieving mistake is way better. As for Fluttershy and Pinkie, I suggest using the ideas from your blog. I like the one where Pinkie has problems but no one ever cared enough to help her and would rather just have her smiling all the time. Fluttershy is a toss up between her wanting to find moments where she can be cruel so she can justify or that she was previously a very horrible person until her parents took her to therapy.
7794447 *Rubs forehead* Seriously people, you give me so little credit. I know the cliches (Though i wish i didn't) and how to avoid them in story writing. I already ranted a good bit about this so i will not go through it again.
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Surely everyone else in the town must know she can't be AJ sister. She was conceived after her supposed parent's death. Or is it just not discussed for the sake of politeness?
Yeesh, this was some Silent Hill-level of psychological torment.
7794461 Not discussed for politeness sake.
7794467 I did say it was her own lie given life. Same with her moral and conscious implying that was some Silent Hill in there...funny, never played the games.
7794471 Really? Because the whole "Inner Psychological Torment turned into a Physical Manifestation that looks like something Guillermo del Torro came up with after a fever dream" thing I got with the BigAppleSmith Monster made me immediately think of Silent Hill.
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The first three have been very intriguing. Twilight's contempt for other people, Rainbow's fanaticism and Jackie's compulsive lying to arguably the one person you should never lie towards. Eager to see what Rarity is greedy for. Recognition, fame, power, entitlement, status? Difficult to guess which one will make the final cut.
7794475 I thought more of Alan Wake.
7794452 My bad man. But I actually have one other suggestion for Pinkie. You can that Pinkie is a pony that was cursed to always spread joy for other's but never truly finding real happiness for herself. This could be done by saying Pinkie was a servant of Faust and she was given the task to help the world know joy.
But Faust was too vague about it and Pinkie interpreted it to bringing joy to everyone and she was so focused on her duty and devotion that she never made time for herself. Thus, all of her smiles are fake.
Or Pinkie was once a terrible pony that delighted in spreading misery until she was caught and made to do the opposite by faust. Both of these has a lot to do with immortality.
Or Pinkie somehow got a glimpse into the distant future where everyone hates one another and there is no joy so she took it upon herself to change that future by making every happy. But this would be a nigh impossible task for one single pony and for everyone she brought joy too. there would always be another. Thus, making her goal fruitless in the end.
You wrote that Golden Apple addressed her middle child, but in this scenario, Applejack would be the youngest since Applebloom was her daughter.
7794562 Ah, bugger! I didn't realize that...
7794437 ah, alright then. Just wondering
Is it wrong that I want Pinkie's "dark" secret/backstory to actually be dark, something along the lines of HER WHOLE FAMILY IS DEAD or SHE KILLED HER PARENTS AND SHE AND HER SISTERS EAT THEM, some fck up shit like that?
BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD
Wow. Mind blown. Didn't expected AJ to keep such a lie.
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damn, didn't see that one coming. I thought that it was that her parents aren't dead but left her and her family behind she keeps telling her sheff and everyone that there dead.
7795138 I thought she was an Orange NOT an Apple, or she had something to do with the dead parents. I'm very cruel to many ponies, most ponies went I wish to be.
(:read with sarcasm;) and then Twilight says they're going to get out once they remember their elements of Harmony and then they will "confront" there opposite and escape and warn Celestia.
(note this is not meant to insult to author, but to insult twilight)
I just noticed this for some reason, the Dodge Junction thing is complete bull shit. Applejack was first off being fucking forced with a penalty of death for some fucking reason to explain herself when she didn't want to. So Applejack made the promise of she'll talk when they'll have breakfast. Applejack decided to leave before breakfast so she wouldn't have to tell. That's not lying, she didn't want to say anything to begin with so the Pinkie Pie part is just complete bull shit.
7794567 ya plannin ta fix this here little mishap soon?
7795859 I'm trying but i can't find it!
...... this is simply awesome, pure gold, i love it!! why didn't i find this story sooner??
For Fluttershy.
A person may think that he is giving kindness while in reality it is nothing else but cruelty. Perhaps Fluttershy gave away the disabled or slightly wounded animals to predators while they were still alive. She showed kindness towards the predators by giving them food, while also stopping the 'pain' the wounded critters had.
Perhaps that would be her own twisted form of kindness that she thinks she holds. Smiling, while the predators eat the wounded prey. Afteral, she loves nature and everything that has to do with it.
7820199 D'oh!
. . . . . *falls unconscious. . . again*