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MousieMustache


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Symphony's father a donkey, her mother a horse, making her a mule. Mules are nearly all infertile with the slightest chance of being able to conceive a foal. For this reason, there are hardly any mules in Equestria. Sweet Symphony is one of few and school is a tough place where the different are shunned.

After being teased day in and day out, she can finally take it no more and decides to run away to find more of her kind to finally end the bullying.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 19 )

It's always interesting to go with a different species, but beware of cliches.

4194824
Thank you!
My favorite story plots are about outcasts because I relate. But I will make sure to keep cliches to a minimum.

Ho, wow, wasn't expecting that, this is well written!
Lol, I was almost expecting a younger Chanted to call across at Divinity.
"Hey, stainmane, leave her alone, or I'll set your pelt on fire."

4195912
Haha thank you. :derpytongue2:
Like I said, I write. I also am a grammar nazi, so I always try to be grammatically correct at least when writing stories.
I'm thinking about writing one more chapter tonight before going to bed. :raritywink:

Aw, Arctic Mist is nice.

Why are they calling her ugly? She's friggin adorable.

4196392
Kids in school are mean especially if someone is different; even in a cute way.

this story is really well written. I can sort of relate to the main character, so keep writing!:twilightsmile::pinkiehappy::scootangel:

4197595
Thank youuu! I'll write up another chapter today.
I'm glad everybody likes it. :twilightsmile:

you inspired me for my one story!:yay:
i dind't use your sentences, if i did i didn't do it on purpase (i'm not english)

4202912
No problem!
And thank you so very much. (:
What is your native language?

4203542
my native language is dutch. I'm from Holland,Netherlands.
I hope i can submit my story soon:raritywink:
you will be the first who knows(if i remember to say:twilightsheepish:)
can you actually private chat on FIMfiction? (question to everypony :-P ) the answer is yes

4197123 Total truth. I get a hard time at school because I'm different from everyone else. A lot of the kids in my grade are totally d-bags and too concerned about their own petty lives to care about anyone else.

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I wanted to write this so that people like you, like ME, could relate. (:
My time in school was the toughest. I was so glad to get out and go to college where simple things like looks didn't matter.

4223972 Yep, you did your job. She even LOOKS similar to me (dark coat, short hair).

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I'm glad you like it! :twilightsmile:
I'm planning on finishing the next chapter either tonight or tomorrow. Be sure to look out for it! :heart:

Ah, I also am on holidays. As for this story and chapter, the dialogue feels a little robotic, and the grammar could use some work, but overall, it's good.

my spring break is a week away!:twilightangry2::twilightangry2::twilightangry2:
just kidding but its stil a week away!
anyway good chapter!

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