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Sunder Shadows


Names Dante I'm a fairly new guy to writing. I'm part German and other things, I have a major liking for video games aswell as writing.

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A new royal ponies in town and his name is Dante, luckily falling upon a new adventure he must solve this mystery within the new lands of the Equestrians.




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Comments ( 9 )

"Crystal" has no "H" in it.

4366356 My bad...it still needs a bit of proofing, but forgive me it's rather late atm and kind of brain dead :P

I think I can do a reading of this. But there are a few points where I'm not sure who's talking, Crysalis or dante. Could you clarify for me? Also, it's not going to have any clopping in it right?

5259529 Oh...well just point out lines for me, and I'll tell who's saying what. Also I'm not planning on making this a clopping story.

5273853 I think these are the only ones ; “Dragon”
“Hey will you shut up you royal punk”
“Nobody touches the queen with out her consent

5274046 Those are the Queens lines....

I like it, please continue.

I like it, please continue.

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