The Cutie Mark Crusaders haven't let up in their quest for cutie marks. One day, their planning is interrupted by a shooting star in the night sky. They agree upon a wish, rationalizing that if they all wish the same thing, it would be sure to come true, right? Of course!
Around the same time, a form slowly descends to the Ponyville Square, almost as if gently placed there. Despite the snow falling around him, the sleeping human doesn't stir in the suddenly changing environment. And he definitely doesn't go unnoticed.
Celestia seems reluctant to meet this new inhabitant, and gives Twilight some coordinates and very specific directions to teach this newcomer some of Equestria's history before taking him there. Of course, without the human ever being aware of the plans. What fun would that be?
I personally love HiE. The only reason it's shunned is cause it is overdone and they usually have too generic of a plot.
You, sir/madam, are a genius. I look forward to more!
Wow, I did not expect such fast response to this. It's been up for like, a couple hours and it almost has as many views as my other stuff. XD Thanks for the positive comments, but feel free to give me criticism as well! ^_^
Well, I can't wait to see more of Justice in Equestria. I can totally see him wishing for a meat based food and realizing that he's in a world of herbivores just after he starts explaining what a hamburger is. Poor guy. But keep up the gamer jokes, those are good.
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Don't worry, both of those are sure to come in the future. The person Justice is based on hates almost all veggies, so that'll be fun. ^_^
I like this story
Keep going.
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Thanks you guys. ^_^ I'll hopefully have the ext part out in a week or two. :3
Poor Justice. I hope he grows to enjoy life in Equestria. But I can totally see the CMC coming up to him and apologizing for wishing him into Equestria at some point, especially if they see him sad about not being back home.
Guy has mental breakdowns and a good sense of humor. Cool beans.
You have the foundations for some good story here. Can't wait.
Hope your move went well. Now just don't forget to write (the story, that is
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More more more it's getting good
I am enjoying this.
Very nice chapter, it's always cool to see a HiE fic where they have an ipod and can share music and stuff. But I can totally see Justice getting into antics with the Crusaders at some point when they require the use of his hands to help them out.
That's not a thing. It's either "(noun) slowly descended" or "(noun) is slowly lowered/dropped/levitated/etc."
So thanks for that.
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Fixed. Derp on my part. Thanks!