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Static Fusion


I'm a 15 year old that likes to try many things at least once. Music and writing are my favorites, aside from programming. Look me up on Youtube @ Static Fusion! :pinkiesmile:

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Memories of the past appear to be locked to all, but what if these are the most important of all memories? Memories are fragile, only to be touched by the hands of the mind, but what if corruption, what if chaos finds its way with them?
These questions seem to be rhetorical, but not to one boy. To this one, these questions are as real as the land he lays his feet upon. But is this real?

Rated T to be safe.

Attention: This story is currently going through some large revisions. I'm sorry for any inconvenience during this period, but I am working as fast as I can. The changes that will be made affect the story slightly and add a bit more of that story goodness that everyone loves.

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Are you trying to get down-votes?
EDIT: something positive, Your grammar and paragraphing is good it's just the plot of the story that will get you down votes from other people however I will put this in my read later list and see how this story turns out to be

I went into this fully prepared to rip someone a new one for a story with a terrible Mary Sue protagonist who becomes a terrible seventh element of harmony.

I... I'm pleasantly surprised. I don't hate Cody, I actually felt bad for him when reading this. He doesn't seem to be a Gary Stu, though he might become one later if you take this story in the way it seems you will. I just hope you don't drag his sorrow into weepyness, because for now it still seems realistic. I wonder what Luna will find in (what I'm assuming to be) his nightmare...

All in all, this is a nice prologue. Please continue. :twilightsmile:

I was actually surprised, I'll stick around with this story. :twilightsmile:

YbJ

Cody is a human, right? This story needs a human tag.

I like it so far! Just be careful not to turn Cody into a Gary Stu!

Huh... Definitely not what I expected. I am intrigued....

To put it simply "MOAR!!!!!!!!!".

Interesting... I love how you described Luna!

I wonder how Celestia is going to react...

I like this story :pinkiecrazy: maybe even on a crazy level :pinkiecrazy:

Loved this story, 20/10, great job, very entertaining. I would say something that i did find wrong with the first chapter connecting to the last, but since noone else notices it, and its entertaining to be the only one so far who i can see has noticed it. :raritywink: Cool Story Bro. :rainbowdetermined2:

I Really like these stories.:pinkiehappy: I'll be watching you.:pinkiecrazy:

Celestia you Bitch Your ponies aren't the only ones who have lost special people in there life. fucking bitch

And how is he supposed to know, he can't read minds. And he is from another world, so you can excuse his "ignorance". And Celestia damn it, he lost his family and is far away as possible from all his other family and all friends he had on earth, yet you forget about all that, because he asked a innocent question, that he didn't know what the consequence would be, and you act like he did it on purpose, and needs to be watched. You sure your name is Celestia and not :trollestia:

I feel like I've read this chapter before, almost word for word.

yay new chapter!:pinkiehappy: I liked it. Diamond Tiara is so... ahhhhh:flutterrage: but she always is so, nothing we can do. Anyway hope to see next chapter soon. :heart::twilightsmile:

I like the story, but the cover art gave me aids.

5519542 When I read that, I thought of the literal meaning and..... that was a weird thought. :rainbowlaugh: For the cover pic, when you notified me, I had a great idea and it will be made and applied soon. :twilightsmile:

Thanks for everypony's comments and thoughts so far!

Nooooooo not the dreaded cliffhanger xD

You had my intrigue, then you caught my attention. Now? Bye. It's become so unoriginal, so cut and dry that I actually cringed while reading this chapter.

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