In Canterlot, there is the district of Canterwell.
In Canterwell, there is a flat.
In that flat live Octavia and Vinyl Scratch.
This is a day in their lives.
In Canterlot, there is the district of Canterwell.
In Canterwell, there is a flat.
In that flat live Octavia and Vinyl Scratch.
This is a day in their lives.
Just a couple of things;
Otherwise, looking good!
you sum up what living at the tipping point of homelessness is like almost perfectly. I like it, it makes a nice change to read about it.
Well that was a very nice surprise. Love to see more of your work with this. Really really good, man.
Before I start reading, I can't help but notice that the tags are absent...
Quite a bit of work, dampened only minutely by it's conspicuous British-ness.
Writing: 5 / 5 (far above average)
Story: 3 / 5 (average)