I live in Kentucky and have a Maine coon named Arbor
When the Autobots, Decepticons, and the kids get tossed into Equestria and the only to get out is by working together. Will sparks fly or will the Great War come to an end. Transformers Prime version of transformers in Equestria. Oh yeah, and this is all Miko's fault
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Wow, your punctuation for writing character dialog is painfully bad. I mean really bad, to the point that it's impossible to try and take this story even slightly serious.
It's always Miko's fault.
4029575 ALWAYS.
How about no.
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Were you taking it serious at first? I'm all for saying hey checkup on your grammer.
Yeah grammar is something I need to work on, also I look for editors and proof readers, for that reason.
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It was supposed to be serious, but well I have a problem, I can't do serious. The Miko bits are meant for comedy, next chapter will be shorter and more focused on comedy I'm actually about have a page of paper in.
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Ah I see, The person I was talking to kinda sounded harsh so I just naturaly replied.
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Also if you want I could help.
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yes can you please help
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Awesome! I'll start editting right away!
4038624
thanks
4031413 Because what people submit is what they consider their quality work, and even if you don't like the story you should at least respect the effort that went into writing it. This story seems...lazy.
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I'm going to go ahead and publish the next chapter and if I get the same negative response I'll have you edit if I can figure that out. Not tryin' to hurt your feelings if I wanted to do that I would publish the next chapter without a heads up.
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Sure, no feeling hurt here! Right now I'm editing the first chapter, I'll send it to you once I'm done.
So far so good
It has potential, but there is so much wrong with it that it's hard to keep reading. Sorry.
update plz
I really like it. This is a fun story. Please please write more.
To: Everyone else,
You should all know to not mess with a writer's confidence, if you cant say anything nice about the story then dont say anything.