Basicly since no one else has made a Spiral Knights and MLP crossover I decided too go ahead and make my own. AND THERE WILL BE LOTZ OF ACTION! LoL. Just so you know i dont have many "set" ideas, mostly making up this story as I go. >.>
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i've played that game, it's rather fun.
Will read.
"Note:Their will be more adult stuff in the future like sex"
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HA JK.
I don't play Spiral knights, so no readies for me
Cheers
~iraqlobstah
"Basicly since no one else has made a Spiral Knights and MLP crossover i decided too go ahead and make my own
Note:Their will be more adult stuff in the future like sex and what not but I will put something such as (WARNING!) or a sentence saying thats the words are not fit for children. (If there is going to be mature content later on in the story, then why rate this "Everyone"?)
Tell me what you think, And I will try too update this story as often as possible. "
Please tell me this is an April Fool's joke.
Please.
395488 i know you from somewhere...
395521
You know ME?!
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Cheers
~iraqlobstah
395527 do you follow wolfy hige?
395535
DA
Cheers
~iraqlobstah
395554 DA?
395557
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Means Yes
Cheers
~iraqlobstah
395578 Thats how i know you.
You would have to fight off zombies with a ginger ale can.
395601
IKR?
I shall best them!
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Cheers
~iraqlobstah
Your first mistake?
Sprial ponies
Unless that was intentional, which I hope it was!
395519 For now its "E for Everyone" Cuz nothing super mature has happened tho some time from now their will be and i will yes change the rate of age thing for it dont worry and its not gonna be "OH MAH GAWD *CLOP CLOP CLOP*" it wont be like that probley be build up short sex scean well actually...idk yet. Too be honest with all of you...I am making this up as I go so yeah xD
395557 i think he means "Deviant Art" i have an acc on there but i hardly use it
Oh Hey! Lookie here!
I had the same idea!
If I've anything to say about your piece...
*teacher moment* I honestly think you could have done a better job for a first chapter.
I think you should at least organized dialogue and events to make it not look too crushed together.
I'm not gonna press you for grammar but some places just... (sharp inhale), ouch, you know?
Not gonna dislike, but I'm not gonna like it either. I'll be keeping an eye on this one though!
FYI
If you wanna see my interpretation of this specific cross over..
the story's called 'Ponies and the Alpha Team'.
I personally never made it past depth, what was it... 15?
I've no idea what the Alpha Team did.
You've got potential.
Keep at it!
395750 it is. i called it "Spiral Ponies" cuz the name of the game is "Spiral Knights" i just thought it would make sense too make the "P" capitol like the "K" ya feel me dawg?
395519 alright i see your point about the spelling. i will try and do better dont worry. i am new too it but hopefully with some help it should be fantastic!
Hey!
I made a Spiral Knights Crossover! No seriously, 'Spiral Knight Mares'
This.....is very awkward...
395794 Ma'am yes ma'am! i will look into the alpha team thing but too be honest i dont know anything about them and ihave been on SK (shorten term for Spiral Knights) for a LONG time and i havent even been told their name or armors and i kinda dont wanna add them incase SEga and Three rings finally disclose information about them. and i will defenatly work at my spelling and i guess you can say its a little crunched and when i look back on it your point is valid. when i read this sentence its look horrible xD
xD
395821 SERIOUSLY?! i am checking it out right now! i love spiral knights and i tried once or twice tring too find a crossover for it but could't so i thought there were other bronies like me who want a good spiral knight cross over! now i know my spelling puncuation and all that good stuff aint the best but i will try my best. i am gonna check it out so wait for my comment!
395834
...I'm a sir.
teenage boy really.
I forgive you!
395868 my bad and i am the same. 14 year old who cant get off his arse too go eat, nah he just sits and play spiral knights! lol me in the nutshell xD
395803
Let me rephrase myself.
Sprial Ponies.
Not picking on you or anything, I'm just having fun watching you try to figure whats wrong.
396206 i cant see the problem xD the only other thing i can think of is that your trying too make a refrence too gurren lagann
I like the story so far!
There are a few issues in spelling and grammar, and It may be helpful to space out the dialogue to make it clearer who is saying what.
Other than that, everything is really good.
Uh oh this can't be good
399485 got it! i am despretly tring too make it cleaner and better i really am ><
399557 i can easily go on a rampage with my gear and murder all the ponies and griffions :3 but i iz too nice for dat blood shed
400409
I play spiral knights too and I seen pros at work, let me tell you, they aren't pretty
I mean holy cow how much DMG they do!
alright i think i will try that
Well, that went better than expected?
I saw this and went a.deviantart.net/avatars/a/w/awwyeahplz.png
422359 iz dat goodz or badz?
443526 Click me
Oh god... The spelling and grammar makes me want to kill you with my katana.
The grammar makes me want to puke...
*hurl*
676482 if you have nothin nice too say then plz leave, no one said you had too read it so, your loss buddeh
679604 *sigh* sorry,
One good thing though, he at least knows that celestia has nothing on him.
681030 i actually changed the chapters a bitso i could try and eliminate most of my grammer and spelling errors, and its alright i was kinda bein a dick sayin what i said about not sayin nice things
681954 actually, i've heard the advice b4...
Btw, I'm writting my own spiral knights fic,
685375 o rly? ima check it out. i love playin spiral and its nice to read fan fics about it too.
694678 hold on thar, i'm not for on the first chapter :p
694915 lol xD well let me know when its posted and i will totally read it also, my name on Spiral Knights is Legend-Wing. So feel free to send me a friend inv or soem mail so we can have a decent talk together
Ahem. You got the name wrong. Furthermore... if you do not play, do notw rite about it. This situation can be seen with the loZ crossovers. Any legend of zelda fans around here will know what I mean.