• Member Since 22nd Mar, 2012
  • offline last seen Aug 28th, 2013

GongleWhomper


I am a new writer. I loved Mlp Fim fanfictions and decided to write one myself.

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After the incident with time travelling Twilight finds a spell that lets her travel across dimensions. So she uses it and goes on her big adventure. (Games, Movies, Everything Crossovers)

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 25 )

I am loving this story. Congrats on the concept. :yay:

If it may be of any help, I can add this story to a group called Looking for Editors, if you don't mind?

Also, paragraph breaks between speakers.

Ex:
"Blah Blah" said Twilight.

"Filler!" exclaimed Dash.

This makes the story look cleaner cut and virtually eliminates confusion as to who is speaking.

Thanks for following my advise. Now onward! To waiting for this to continue!

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>.>
tracking it!
and you!

this is seriously good

Yesyesyes, is good, very good. That beginning did surprise me.

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"What is porn?"
My face. :rainbowlaugh:
You do not want to know Twi, you do not want to know.

Cookies?! You said cookies! Where?

Although I have not met the TF2 crew, I can say I have heard about them.

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Damn, now I have to check out the trailor, and did you say free? I like free.

Now, the second time you said blue, you left out the 'e'. "All the Reds had it, and us - Blus too."

"Yes, yes. I'm fine." said Ivan (I think) said. Drop the second 'said'.

Other than that I believe this sums it up:

DIS GUN BE GUD!!

you should make the next world in skyrim:derpytongue2:...have them meet dovahkiin:pinkiecrazy:

Cookies? Meh... Muffins? :derpytongue2: Muffins!

370662 The e offa Blu was intentional... That is the spelling of the side :D

370662
You see, in that game there are two sides RED (Reliable Excavation Demolition) and BLU (Builders League United). They try to make it look like this is a war between builders, but that is just disguise. For real it's about two brothers which want their fathers (i think) land. Their names are Redmon Mann and Blutarch Mann. And yes, the game is free, and Steam is free. If you want full TF2 awesomeness just buy any item from mann co store. To buy you need to add to steam 5 euros/dollars. I've already played that game for 3.5 years and still didn't get bored. And every week they add new item + a new awesome update is comming.

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I know diddly squat about the game. Thanks for telling me. :pinkiehappy:

I have learned something today!

hmmm. i think that while the minecraft world would be interesting, i feel the skyrim crossover would be alot more easy to deal with, that is unless you have something planned out for the minecraft world. do wat you think would get the better response IMO:pinkiesmile:

and muffins too you say???:derpyderp1: i shall continue to comment here:pinkiehappy:...and on this page about 10 times:pinkiecrazy:

Minecraft

Idea: Get Derpy :derpyderp1: in the Minecraft world somehow, I'm thinking it would be funny.

Oh yeah... MUFFINS!!!!!!!! :derpyderp1: :derpyderp1:

SKYRIM NEXT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:
and then Minecraft:twilightsmile:

372789 i know someone who works at valve, and you are spot on.:moustache: not many people know TF2 lore. did you read The Sacrifice collection?

at first i was all :rainbowderp:
then i was all :rainbowwild:
then i was like :rainbowhuh:
then now im all like :twilightangry2:

well played source619...well played

I know there isn't a secret word in there and that you said that just to troll us readers:ajbemused:

The sercet word is Word!

Nope there really is a secret (or should i say hidden) word, look it's april 2nd so i can't troll anymore :fluttercry: and Fulgor! Y U NO COMMENT ANYMORE?

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Sorry bout that! Found an unread story about RvB in Equestria that is now 45 chapters long. Phew!

Good luck with real life, and can't wait for more from you.

EDIT: I found your secret word. It is 'World'!

You're back!! \(озо)/
Now, no apologies for real life issues. They come first.
Great update, short, but better than nothing.

Your friendly palace guard,
Fulgor Ignis

P.S. What are your first two languages?

League of Legends is awesome, Twilight and Ivan should end up there next :D

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