Luna has never really given any thought of having a stallion friend, sexually. Of late, she has been looking at her stallion friend a different way, all because of what happened one fateful night. She quite enjoyed it, but it happened so sudden, and they had been friends for years. Disrupting this friendship into something new and sexy has brought thoughts to Luna"s head, some pleasant, some...interesting.
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368504
seems legit.
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Allow me to be utterly astounded by the cut-off. Fut the wuck?
his eyes, oh his gorgeous eyes, where the golden of the most mature flame
He pressed her body closely to his, their parts dangerously close together
slipped down her body to kiss her breasts
her breasts
her breasts
wat.
...
This thing is just begging to be MSTed.
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"This thing is just begging to be MSTed."
Sure, we'll get to it on the 15th, provided it's long enough by then.
I've seen worst...
IT'S CALLED YO' MOM!
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not bad tracking now
thank you
what you mean by what? im simply writing what i want.
that's the whole point of the fanfic. to hold suspense
Mary Sue?
if you dont like it, dont comment
Guys i promise, chapter two is coming! I havent had time to write it. CALM IT DOWN!
368504 Mary Sue?
that feel when 50% of the comments are from the author itself
edit addition seems like a waste
DAMN!!!!!
what the hell is discord doing in a romance fic
i was replying dumbass @mrheadhopper
i changed it. its a mix. u dont like it, dont comment @shadowflame2000
SO i haven't read it yet (its on list but i promise i will get to it) but i did skim and i would suggest breaing up your paragraphs better and hitting the tab key at the start of each paragraph cause it feels very wall of text which as a reader makes me a litte nausceas and tends to make me less then enthusastic about reading it (hoping for some sparity to be fair again i skimed the hope is their) when i do get a chance to read it though i'll give you a real opinion of it
i a completely ashamed! Is this really how bronies are supposed to act! My chrysalis you are a disturbing bunch. I know there was never aything about this being a rough draft and the errors are countless, but the leat you could do is maybe critique NICELY and tell me where i went wrong. oh trust me i know there are an assload of errors. this is not my best fic. this was done in three or less hours out of complete boredom. The story i was writing at the tiime was... i had writers block,hence the crappiness of this fic. Some of this was good,but I must say it was the most unnerving to write. Like I said, I had writers block,so not oo many ideas were bubbling up. I sincerely apologize. But honestly,grow up and stop acting like a spoiled little filly.
If there are any mis-spells in this sorry. I am typing from my old gen. kiindle.