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I think you're taking this fic a little too seriously

Jimmies are being rustled, and fictional clopfics are serious fucking bzns.

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You are just an upset person in general, aren't you? I disagree with a good number of your suggestions, as they are elementary level techniques that needn't be employed in this particular piece.

Anyways: Good Job, Twilight.

Love and Tolerance everypony. Love and Tolerance.

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nice story, hope for more one day

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Perhaps, maybe if this gets 50 likes ill write all sorts of ships, and clopfics.

>> TwiliteSpunklez
I really hope this gets 50 likes then. Cant wait to sse more from you

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You make me happy, I tell you what, Ill write another one regardless, give me 2 ponies to write about (have to be canon) whether or not you want it to be a clopfic, or just a ship, and ill write it for you when i have time.

>>TwiliteSpunklez
thx, I gusse I'll think of two and let yah know later, as for now, im going to go and try to fix up my story and hopfuly make it a bit better. Keep up the great work.

>> TwiliteSpunklez
If you're serious about this then how about Pinkie pie and Twilight, im verry interested to see what you can do with these two, and keep up the great work

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TwiPie eh?

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This is a funny story haha, but I bet you can't make one of Soarin and Rainbow Dash or Soarin and Fluttershy

>> TwiliteSpunklez
to be serious, id like Luna and Twilight, and once again awsome story

394836 do ALL THE SUGGESTIONS

... at once.

I might explode.

hey i just joined and i read this first haha. I REALLY liked it.
Favorited and watched!!
Can't wait to read your other piece!

Beautiful, just Beautiful.

awsome story and awsome choice of music.

I spotted quite a few mistakes, a lot to do with punctuation in dialogue. I suggest reading up on that.

Commenting previously on Dimondiums comment, I will object to some rational point; You have your interests, and other's have theirs. But there is no need to go calling judgement on peoples interests and fictional roleplay (yes even uh, Rainbow Dash's "predetermined" sexual interests in other ponies' rumps). All I can say, is everyone has their favorite Pony, hell mine is Trixie, Twilight, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie aaaannnnd probably Vinyl Scratch. (I'm missing a few), needless to say your a great writer, and I have seen a select majority of your stories, but there is little need to converse such a hostile argument towards someone who offered you to proof-read for them.

Anyway, I have gone off my mind a little, Rainbow Dash's personality fits in the category of Crazy, Miscellaneous, Superficial and down-to-earth boldness. I completely accept that you like her, I for one am into Fluttershy because of her personality almost identical to mine; I have a tendency to jump at the slightest touch or sound, I am extremely shy to people I don't know (as opposed to open like a door to my friends), and all-in-all I love her personality because I can compare myself to her.

I'm done, I should get back to my novel. Ensure to be open to other ponies' opinions next time, as bad as they look like to your eyes, their point of view etc. I like your fics, keep it up Dimondium!

I came... to this fic and got aroused. *Ba dum tishh*

What the buck Pinkie, what the buck?

This story is pretty ancient so to speak