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Would you be interested in being my prereader? I need one to pickup on mistakes like these, sometimes when I write i get so fatigued and frustrated I can't pick up on even the simplest mistakes. You sound like you really know how to break it down.

this gave me wood.
also a boner

353240

For future projects of course :X

Finished it before the song did.

353388

At least 314.85 words a minute? Impressive good sir

353402

What can I say? I like to read. Celestia only knows just how many fics I go through every day.

Maybe I should write an Epilogue.. After all there are so many people tracking it despite it saying complete.

Cute story. I would seriously change "bluish" to something a little more descriptive. (Powder Blue or even cyan would fit better)

I enjoyed the optional ending. More stories should toss that in and avoid having a clop-tastic story that just happens to start off sweet. I read the rest but I like the first ending better. Good job.

353658

It happens, I usually do it to remind myself to read a story later if I can't at the time. I assume that's what others are doing, who knows. Also it's a good sign that people enjoy it as is. I'd take it as a compliment.

353842

I do, it doesn't bother me. I appreciate any viewer's acknowledgement of my stories, in fact I love seeing numbers next to my flame, it's why i keep writing.

354627

I would of rather you pm'd that. :X

354640

I don't really care that much, just for future reference though, making corrections as I see fit, I apologize that you dont like rainbow creep but I found it an amusing possibility.

Besides...

Twilight is clearly best pony, who wouldn't be a creep for twixtrix.

354661

Hahahaha ah ahhhhhh. funny. Luna is obviously best pony.

And thios story has me unsure. Do I dawww, lol or clop? WHICH ONE!!!!

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Also, What if...
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354661 ahum everyone has there preference on which pony is best,my fave is vinyl scratch,plus we write fan fiction for our amusement and not all has pedophilia rape murder etc. so no need to be a total dick to someone who wanted to write a story, ps good story pnoy