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What an asshole move Twilight >.>
I remember reading this too.
Never understood Twixie, but it's descriptive, so 5/5.
Huh... try to find the – errors in the text....
Interesting start. Let's see where this goes.
wat
I am intrigued. Looking forward to reading more.
Was this already posted on Deviant Art? I didn't see it.
You had the moral high ground Twilight, and suddenly cunt move.
...Which is new. Kudos for throwing me for a loop.
ooo plot twist
I love your Trixie, and the way you describe her makes the Twilight x Trixie ship so nice. Instead of trying to make her sympathetic by inventing a thousand and one excuses for her egotistical ways, you instead present them so that you cannot be offended. Instead the reader realise that the only one that becomes a victim to Trixie in any way is Trixie, really. Everything bad she does only hurt herself in the end, and she cannot approach others for friendship or love without making an ass* of herself. You just want to hug her, in a cringeworthy way.
*Sorry for the implicit racism in this statement, but I assure you, a lot of my friends are donkeys!
SOOOOO glad you're finally on FIM fiction
I Fucking love you Butterscotch
Wow...that was...so lovely! It really reminded me of these two pictures:
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6822754
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6838572
But, yeah; there's that – error in the text that you might want to fix, but besides that...that was steamy, but still tame enough to not really register as a clop fic in my mind...at least not yet. Both Twilight and Trixie were very in-character, in my opinion, so props for that. I really did love it; I can't wait to see more!
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Asshole move?! Trixie desurved that!
Aww, Twilight, that's not nice, sinking down to Trixie's level.
Silly ponies. Celestia needs to lock them both of them in a room they can't teleport out of and let them figure things out. Maybe pipe in some hormones or provide toys.
i327.photobucket.com/albums/k463/L4R_momma/dundun.gif
Wait...I recognize this story...
Though when I last saw it, it wasn't finished.
127613 We all do, dumb ass. Hell, ever read Draconic Troubles? The author once replied to a comment I had posted by saying that "We don't need your clopfics in my comments section, please! We've already got Buttersc0tch for that!"
I lol'd.
Thanks for commenting everyone!
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Fixed! Thanks for that. It's hard to spot all of them.
Also, Tailslover13 I've never seen those pics before. I think my story (posted 9 months ago to DA) started a minor meme of Trixie being good at massages, and the artist may be working from that. Thanks for alerting me to them, though! They're super cute.
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It was posted to DA - a long time ago though.
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That's a masterful analysis, sieurin! I was getting pretty sick of the remorseful Trixie of fanfiction and wanted to keep her true to the original show.
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Glad to be here! It looks like this fimfiction has a nice, vibrant community.
127707 Anything to help, but Shinji pointed it out before I did, so...props to him/her mainly. You've seriously never seen those pictures before? Well, that's not too surprising; not too many people have, since they don't have a lot of comments or favorites. But, yeah; those stuck in my head, since they're cute and funny and I love Twilight x Trixie. Either way, I just wanted you to see them and get a giggle, which you apparently did. You're welcome; anything for a fellow masterful writer (yes, I'm arrogant) and a nice one at that.
Hmm. Twi/Trixie clop with nearly 6k words, yet more to come?
Jup, I'm looking forward to get to read this. (After a nap, I keep dozing off here)
NICLEY DONE TWILIGHT.verry good.>:)
Whoa, what a blast from the past. So, were you thinking of completing this?
...and that's how you do a twilight/trixie romance. Class is over. Hope you all took notes.
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Indeed. With all that's happened between them, angry love is the only possible love.
the ending was great, you portrayed twilight as one who is seriously in tune with their heart. Enough to read the hearts of others
BUCK YOU TWILIGHT
Oh butterscotch, you and your writing and when you do the thing with the words and they make the think.
Very sexy. lol at the idea of the massage pony lying bound and gagged somewhere.
Oh butterscotch, I love your stories, I really do. You were actually the one to make me interested in writing, albeit my own is currently in the less affectionate spectrum of things, I was inspired nonetheless. This story here was very good, I enjoyed reading this, even if Twilight was a bit of a dick.
127606 I think you mean mule.
Trixie needs to drop her pretensions. But Twilight's deception ruined the genuine affection trixie had felt. Wow Twilight can sometimes be a real jerk.
Very very nice...
This was pretty good. At first i was positive it was a simple "spa related clopper" but was a small bit surprised when i found out about Trixie. Man twilight will not just back hand you but with her ring hand, (i was just imagining after twilight did that to Trixie that she started doing that sassy black lady snapping fingers thing ).
I'm not quite sure if this is specifically Twixie or if it's just the various shenanigans that occur at the spa (as the name would imply).
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for life! (Oh, how original of me)
I would appreciate a bit of clarification on this matter.
...
PS: I pray to Celestia this is specifically Twixie (because it's my favorite ship
Omg... Will this fanfic have a plot !? ITS A MIRACLE !
Cant wait to see more ! 
http://theyellowkid.files.wordpress.com/2010/08/what-a-twist.jpg
And yeah... Kind of a cunt move on Twi's part
lol needs a part two
Trixie totally went from hell ya to omg omg love me! Too easy. Twilight should've returned the favor but she's a competitive cunt huh?
love the fics please keep them coming
That was actually a very entertaining story, i smirked a lot.
127054 agreed.
.....Sequel?
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Butters did write a semi-sorta-sequel, The Mistress of Midnight Castle, but she later decided to unhitch the two stories from one another (though Midnight Castle does still contain a direct reference to the events of Spa Follies) because they were so different in tone; she felt Spa Follies needed a more lighthearted sequel.
Hmm, it looks like Midnight Castle isn't here on FimFiction yet, so here, have a link.
are you ever going to finish this?
Twilight could hear the clink of bottles and the shuffle of material as the spa pony continued dutifully in her preparations for the massage and facial treatment she would be giving her later.(if you know what i mean)
and with the extra lubrication she slithered out of the knotted towels... Again if you know what i mean xD