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im a brony thats a girl i love making art and stories and my fav ships are distlestia and soarindash

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Hey ponies this is a story about Discord and Celestia as fillies. Its a great love story about a beauty and a beast.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 30 )

-THE POOR GRAMMAR
IT BURNS!!!!!

me like this story :pinkiehappy: and i will be waiting for more chapters for this story to come out

awesome story happily waiting for chapter 2.:pinkiehappy:

im sorry rainbow dragon ill try to fix next chapter but i always say u instead of you

Comment posted by Sky Dance deleted Jan 19th, 2014

3808786
no prob I always like and fav a good story.:pinkiesmile:

why no words to for this chapter

3808574 would u like to subscribe i have alot more great stories coming up

why all the thumbs down i mean the grammer is readable :fluttercry::pinkiesad2::raritydespair:

3811408 I CAN DO WHAT I WANT TO:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh: JK SORRY JUST TELLING SOMEONE THAT LIKED MY
BOOK THAT IT WASN'T MEANT FOR U UNLESS U DO WANT TO SUBSCRIBE

That description is bad and you should feel bad

:applejackunsure:how does it go from waking up to

''Come on Cory'' Tia giggled.
''COMING TIA'' Cory yelled.
''Hey how'd you know my name...well nickname'' Tia asked suspiciously.
''Um well i know your real name everyone does...so i just took away the celes part...genius. i smugged.

3877650 oh sorry the chapter in between failed but now its on sorry again:applecry:

Finshed the chapter, time to read up.:heart::pinkiesmile::pinkiesmile::pinkiesmile::heart:

Comment posted by SweetieTheBot deleted Feb 9th, 2014

I've already told you I am not doing that in the other chapters and you already told me all this stuff
so you really didn't have to say this on here.:ajbemused::unsuresweetie:

3917523 Plus this is my first story so thanks for the input but I already told you that I'm fixing it.:ajbemused:

3916946 haha sorry my first chapter was really bad but I really can't change it because well it would be a train wreck where people would just get madder then before so yeah sorry.:derpytongue2::scootangel:

The story was good!
But there were A LOT of grammar and spelling errors

''TAKE ME THE HELL HOME AT ONCE''

How is that even...what were you trying to say?

3823722
You mean story and follow?
this isn't YouTube

STOP SAYING BOOK!!!!!!!!!!
It's an online story!!!!!!!!!

Once again, so many grammar mistakes!
Please, before writing a story, make sure you have good grammar, or else your gonna get a lot of comments like this

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