Hey ponies this is a story about Discord and Celestia as fillies. Its a great love story about a beauty and a beast.
im a brony thats a girl i love making art and stories and my fav ships are distlestia and soarindash
Hey ponies this is a story about Discord and Celestia as fillies. Its a great love story about a beauty and a beast.
finally finshed .
-THE POOR GRAMMAR
IT BURNS!!!!!
me like this story and i will be waiting for more chapters for this story to come out
awesome story happily waiting for chapter 2.
im sorry rainbow dragon ill try to fix next chapter but i always say u instead of you
3808574 thx so much
3808786
no prob I always like and fav a good story.
why no words to for this chapter
3808574 would u like to subscribe i have alot more great stories coming up
3808914
ok
3808914 C'mon don't advertize
why all the thumbs down i mean the grammer is readable
3811408 I CAN DO WHAT I WANT TO JK SORRY JUST TELLING SOMEONE THAT LIKED MY
BOOK THAT IT WASN'T MEANT FOR U UNLESS U DO WANT TO SUBSCRIBE
That description is bad and you should feel bad
IM SICK COUGH COUGH
how does it go from waking up to
3877650 oh sorry the chapter in between failed but now its on sorry again
Finshed the chapter, time to read up.
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I've already told you I am not doing that in the other chapters and you already told me all this stuff
so you really didn't have to say this on here.
3917523 Plus this is my first story so thanks for the input but I already told you that I'm fixing it.
3916946 haha sorry my first chapter was really bad but I really can't change it because well it would be a train wreck where people would just get madder then before so yeah sorry.
The story was good!
But there were A LOT of grammar and spelling errors
How is that even...what were you trying to say?
3823722
You mean story and follow?
this isn't YouTube
STOP SAYING BOOK!!!!!!!!!!
It's an online story!!!!!!!!!
Once again, so many grammar mistakes!
Please, before writing a story, make sure you have good grammar, or else your gonna get a lot of comments like this