Stone Castle

by rainbow-brony3136

The dry wall

''Come on Cory'' Tia giggled.

''COMING TIA'' Cory yelled.

''Hey how'd you know my name...well nickname'' Tia asked suspiciously.

''Um well i know your real name everyone does...so i just took away the Celes part''...''genius''. I huffed.

''YA except everypony in the castle came up with it before u'' Tia snorted as we walked to the front
of the fair where a weird pony was dressed like a clown.

''UM HI WE were just gonna go in ,thanks'' I grunted trying to pass the pony blocking me.

''Wait kids here's some prizes '' the pony gushed handing us stickers.

''Um thank'' Tia grumbled then grabbed my paw and whispered.
''Lets go this guy is nuts''.

''Don't have to much fun kids'' the clown yelled at us as we ran.

As we walked we came to a tint. ''Come on my parents know i Love magic they might be looking for
me in here'' I yelled.

We both ran to the purple tint and went inside. As we walked threw the crowd mystical music played and a pony in cape was
on stage with a wand in his hand. He also had a big black box ,that looked like a couple of ponies could fit in it.

''HOCAS POCAS DEE DON I PICK U TWO'' The weird magician yelled.

I spun around and he was pointing at me and Celestia.

''Come on fillies, up on the stage'' the magician smiled.

I looked at Tia and we both knew we didn't have a choice so we walked up on the stage.

I looked out at the audience as the bright lights glared on my back then turned towards the box,Tia, and the magician.

''Step in the box children'' The pony gleamed.

Me and Tia followed his instructions and stepped in the box.

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I stepped in the box with Tia.
As she walked in she grabbed my paw and held it tight.
I was glad it was dark in there because if we were on the stage u would have seen me blushing.

The magician slammed the door shut and started tapping on the box with his big stick/wand thingy.

I looked up at Tia ,she looked scared and nervous. She probably was, considering shes a princess and could
kill somepony at the tap of a hoof, when here she was in a small black box with a-a MONSTER like me.

At that moment I felt something so strong inside me wanted to hug her and tell her its alright ,even if we
did just meet.

If u saw those eyes u would want to do the same. Softly I vowed I would never let anything happen to this
beautiful mare.

''Cory im-im scared'' Tia whispered softly.

At that exact moment magic spun around her and at me.
Magic flapped around us.Tia's hair blew around the box scraping the sides and blowing in my face, then she was gone.

I walked out of the box to look for her when the audience gasped.

''monstrous'' ''combined'' ''colt and...filly'' horror'' the audience shouted in different directions.

''The magician handed me a mirror but i didn't pick it up, a white hoof did but as the hoof lifted to me i stared in

''aaagggghhhh'' me and Tia screamed at the top of are lungs, we were combined.
As we screamed the magician told us to go back in the box.
Me and Tia shuffled with legs trashing back in the box.

Magic swirled around and i was staring at Tia again fear still blank on her face.

We walked out and the audience roared with applause.

''Thank u thank u, i am the great Star Swirl'' Star Swirl yelled happily.

''Come on I can see my parents in the back,they just came in'' I whispered to Tia.

''Good they didn't see us, I'd be dead if my mom found out i did a magic trick on stage'' Tia whispered back stepping
off the stage with me.

''yeah i'm about to be dead, bye Tia'' I said as a walk to the area where my parents were.

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I said bye to Cory and he walked to his parents.

Then as I turned I saw Cory's Mom staring at me as if I was a pesky fly.

I wondered what was wrong and what secret she was hiding as I flew away.

When I got home I whisper-yelled ''Mom I'm home'' hopefully thinking she wouldn't hear me.
Im 13 but im not really allowed to leave the castle unless of emergency's.

30 seconds later my mother marched into the room yelling at the top of her lungs.

''YOU LEFT...WITH OUT ASKING..MMMEEE!!!!'' GO TOO UR ROOM NNNNNNOOOOOWWW!!!!!!
she screamed.

As I ran crying to my room my father came in trying to reason with my mother.
I flew on my bed and cried silently, until I heard a knock at my window.

As my last tears ran down my cheeks I walked to the window.
Their laying on the windowsill was a golden eagle feather next to a note.

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Dear,

Tia

Thanks for helping me find my parents I'm glad I met you.
Even know the odds are against us I hope we meet again

Your,

friend

CORY
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I hugged the note and laid on my bed blushing.
As a new feeling burned inside me , making my heart pump.

Comments

[Professor Donger]

That description is bad and you should feel bad

[rainbow-brony3136]

[rainbow-brony3136]

IM SICK COUGH COUGH

[twilight517828]

how does it go from waking up to

''Come on Cory'' Tia giggled.
''COMING TIA'' Cory yelled.
''Hey how'd you know my name...well nickname'' Tia asked suspiciously.
''Um well i know your real name everyone does...so i just took away the celes part...genius. i smugged.

[rainbow-brony3136]

Finshed the chapter, time to read up.

[rainbow-brony3136]

I've already told you I am not doing that in the other chapters and you already told me all this stuff
so you really didn't have to say this on here.

[rainbow-brony3136]

3917523 Plus this is my first story so thanks for the input but I already told you that I'm fixing it.

[rainbow-brony3136]

3916946 haha sorry my first chapter was really bad but I really can't change it because well it would be a train wreck where people would just get madder then before so yeah sorry.

[Frosty_Rainbow]

Once again, so many grammar mistakes!
Please, before writing a story, make sure you have good grammar, or else your gonna get a lot of comments like this