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This is a psychological, suspense-driven drama. There are some descriptions of violence, but they will be relatively tame and sparse.
White-hot Crimson is a tale about a pony's descent into madness. It is about a throbbing guilt, a burning drive. It is about desire for control, and arbitrary justice.
Rarity was never good at controlling her anger, and years of repressed frustration couldn't stay dormant forever.
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Interesting start, I'm intrigued
I don't understand the amounts of dislikes. This is a very good start coupled by magneficent writing. Keep going! I'm begging here.
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I know, right. Guess some people can't stand violence among 'perfect' technicolor ponies.
This story is looking great so far! Supressing her anger is something I completely forgot about Rarity's character. As clearly seen in Sisterhooves Social with her and Sweetie Belle.
I noticed a couple of grammatical errors in the story. It isn't too bad, but it did kinda break the flow of the story a little bit making me retrace my steps to check back at what I just read.
Other than these small mistakes, it looks pretty good from here on out. Who's Rarity gonna kill next?
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Thanks for pointing those out, I'll fix them right away!
Find out next chapter! Whoowah!
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Also, before I forget, let me know when you have the next chapter out. You know where to find me.
Ohh, a killer Rarity story? Interesting. Only read about one other of these.
Not sure why all the downvotes? It's not that bad and it's written well.
I'm lovin' this story so far.
This certainly is something of a refreshing read, in some ways. It isn't often that one finds a story regarding rarity in the act of gruesome murder. You have indeed piqued my interest. I'll be sure to keep an eye on your story.