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Appleloosa, a young town at the edge of civilization is a place for new starts. A new start is just what Cheerilee needs. The Love Poison incident left him with to many questions to ask. It destroyed a friendship he had had for years. Leaving Ponyville is the hardest thing he has ever had to do. And yet he was doing it. The southland isn't without its perks as he makes new friends along the way. One friend in particular only adds to a question that adds to the central problem that was born from the Love Poison. What is love?

Takes place before Magical Mystery Cure.
Story involves R63 Cheerilee.
If you don't like the story on the count of grammar/spelling mistakes let me know please. If you don't like the over all idea, just dislike.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 9 )

Before I even start, I suggest coming up with a R63 name for Cheerilee. It avoids confusion, and makes it a bit more believable. Also, an AU tag would help. :ajsmug:

Another thing... well, why is SHE R63'd but not Braeburn... or anyone else? I mean, I get you want a gay Braeburn romance, and I fully support this. I think this fandom needs more colt-cuddling loving, but it seems a bit... eh, contrived, maybe? Might not be the right word, but it's a bit silly. If you want a gay romance, there are plenty of stallions.

Just something to chew on.

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I agree with this, love your story so far but you gotta give him the rule63 name...

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Cheerilee to me is rather gender neutral and I intend on him to be refered to as Lee in the next chapter.
I've read several r63 fictions and for the most part my favorites involve only a few characters being r63 so I thought I would try my hand at it.
There are plenty of stallions but, for the most part Braeburns gay love interest are typically Soarin or Big Mac. I just wanted to do something different.

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I think the most popular name for r63 Cheerilee is Cheeriloo or something. I don't like the name Cheeriloo. Why can't Cheerilee's name be Cheerilee? Applejack gets to be Applejack.

I think "Lee" is a good name for 63'd cheerilee. Cheeriloo just sounds stupid as hell :ajbemused:
I also agree that there needs to be ships aside from the boring ass ones that are very overdone. I'm giving this story a +1.

3778334 :yay: I love your avatar by the way. :derpytongue2:

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The best part of waking up~
Is a little sunny in your cuup~:pinkiehappy:

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I agree with your decision to keep the name. Cheeriloo sounds kinda ridiculous.

Also, please do go on when you get time. I'm quite interested.

But. i would say that you should space your story better. Kind of a wall at the moment.

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