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Very nice! Glad to see an update! This series sits quite happily in my favorites and tracked for when you update, and really enjoyed this series from start to now. Looking forward to more!
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I am going to try very hard to get back to my old update schedule.
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No worries, mate. Don't force it. Let the muse flow when it may. That is how I am managing my story. Thanks for writing this! Time for a reread.
Yay, Rag Doll's back and as adorable as ever. I'm definitely looking forwards to the next chapter, especially since it seems like that offer he just made is going to turn into an important plot thread in the future which means lots more cute changeling shenanigans.
Also, one minor writing tip on the passage below:
Jumping phrases like the one I underlined are always a bit awkward to read, so in a case like this you should really write out the extra line or two of dialogue to bring the conversation to a natural end instead.
Aawww, I'm so happy that we're seeing Rag Doll again! This was awesome!
Also very happy to see an update to a very nice story. Don't force it either, but I am looking forward to reading more of your work
IT LIIIIIIIIVES. a good day.
Great to see this return.^^
Weirdly enough I actually looked up this story last week to see if there were any updates, only to find I was already tracking it. I really like the world-building you weave in and the characters it's populated with are varied as well. I like the idea of a changeling railroad, it'll be interesting where it leads.
Also, more of Baron! I'm guessing the latent magic of Equestria and all of the magical stuff he's been putting on it has awoken its' machine spirit, which would be really cool
It's nice to see an update here. I'm a little curious about the golem - a sort of remote body for the plane?
Also, Doll is still adorable. I'm intrigued to see where this will go.
Nice to see this one back, would live to have even more
I didn't remember he had magic though, when did that happen?
Did The Baron just get it's cutie mark? Cause that sounds like the most fun explanation. Also the static electricity sounds more like magic than just static thus thinking about a cutie mark isn't that weird...
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He first displayed the ability to use magic when he was bartending Luna's party. But he started studying it a couple chapters prior to that.
I love the idea of the story as well as how it's written, but legitimate question to the author, are things going to pick up with the writing process? Not to be rude or anything, but I don't want to keep following a story that only puts out a few short chapters a year.
Been awhile. But worth the wait.
Ah excellent, an update. See you next year
Seriously though. I hope to see more soon!
Wonderful to finally see another chapter of this one. Seems from your blog posts that you've suffered from a bit of a writer's block. I hope this chapter is an indication that you've overcome that problem.
Looking forward to the next chapter(s)
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You're nuts, dude. Shane x Giselle is OTP.
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Hopefully, I can get back to publishing 1 or 2 chapters a month.
8936453 She probably pushed herself through that process earlier when she was looking better to have it ready as a backup food supply whenever she needed it.
8936431 8936472 Weren't herds a thing in this setting? That would certainly solve that problem, although getting Giselle on board with the whole changeling thing might be an issue.
I think I'm going to need to reread this. I'm forgetting a lot of context within this story, I guess it's just been a while added with how many stories I've read in between.
Wait, it's alive? Time to re-read to figure out what happen.
So thanks for that.
Eyy, good to see ya again! And seeing Rag Doll back put a big smile on my face. Her playing with the doll for that foal was just too adorably sweet. I would feed her for life... hope Shane does the same, nothing against Giselle mind. Actually all his clients and acquaintances etc have been pretty sweet/likable. I almost wonder what he'd do with an annoying one, but I'd just as soon not see it; he's got better things to do, between rebuilding Baron, meeting Spike, getting a princess to visit (platonic or otherwise), helping Changelings, dating Giselle... yeah... looking forward to more of this
A magic Roomba? Why am I surprised there isn't already such a thing for the wealthy hoity-toity types? You'd think for a species that sheds everywhere they'd have a means of cleaning up all that fur and dander.
Such a nice story.
Glad to see you are back.
Nice work, keep it up.
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why settle for one when he could start a herd xD
I'm enjoying this story. I hope it doesn't take a year for us to get the next chapter.
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Me too.
I'm feeling pretty good about the current chapter. It may be out in 2 or 3 weeks.
I reread the whole thing in two days and I ain't even mad. If fact, I was so inspired that as soon as I'm done with my military service I'll apply to get an airplane license
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Check this out: https://www.military.com/paycheck-chronicles/2018/05/23/new-program-provides-free-pilot-training-veterans.html
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Thank you but I am not a US soldier
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That's obvious, isn’t it? It's an escape route after all!
Seriously though, I agree. I also find the scenario of Changelings seeking refuge from their queen (presumably due to loss of faith after the wedding disaster) to be an interesting decision for what I’d guess to be post S2 AU Changeling Lore/Culture.
The idea of a vehicle developing a pseudo-personality/consciousness has always fascinated me as well, so it’ll be interesting to see if that’s what the magic spark is.
...Wait. Magic spark? How long until Baron is casting Magic Missile to attack the Darkness?!
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The time line for this story has become anachronistic. It's supposed to be S4~5, but I've kinda muddied the time line.
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The timeline might not be entirely faithful to the canon, but this is clearly well before any stirrings leading to the canonical Changeling revolution would happen since Flurry Heart isn’t a thing. Of course this is assuming that your reference to canonical seasons means you aren’t going entirely off the rails at any point and the timeline as a whole will not diverge in any large-scale way. Based on this assumption, events of S6 and beyond have not been mixed into the S4-S5 mesh you have right now, so nothing has happened that would lead to the canonical Changeling revolution yet.
If that is indeed the case, then my mention of the wedding disaster possibly dirtying the hive’s faith in Chrysalis and leading to some getting out while they can or some similar train of thought is still a viable explanation of what has lead to the existence of Changeling refugees, since specifics have not yet been provided.
In short, for the purposes of my guess as to why Changelings are fleeing, the point in the show’s running that the story represents at the time isn’t a factor in its validity as long as it’s between seasons 2 and 6. That said, I appreciate that you have some frame of reference for the time period based on the canon. Even if the story doesn’t leave Canterlot (or even the Palace Complex), it certainly makes it easier to frame the background elements that you choose to describe if you have an established foundation to work from.
Yes! So glad this is still ongoing! Great job, I've been really enjoying this, and I can't wait to see more <3
Love it.
Mental image of doll dancing a plushie with her mouth to some foals has destroyed my heart. I'm angry that the changeling is successfully wining me over wit being cute!
Yet another re-read of this great story...yet another wish for more chapters...
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So… how is that going for you?
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Not so great...
I really need to write more.
So is luna and shane gonna be a thing in this story?
I either hadn't read this chapter before now and thought that I had, or I simply missed it:
(At the risk of stating the obvious...)
No one painted that on, Baron got a Cutie Mark!
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We're pullin' for ya!
Bring this back.
It was wonderful... really... :-(((((((((
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Honestly, he acts like an everyday run of the mill clueless awkward teenager.
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The quarantine is the perfect excuse to try to get back into writing...
Well, unless you're a medical professional. If that's the case, you've got more important things to do than write horsewords.
What does fah-lay mean?
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It was a poor attempt to phonetically spell "filet".