Got me hooked. The characters seem interesting and world feels very alive. The Stable and move to the bar scenes seemed a little rushed but is still a very good story. Fav'd, waiting for more!

she tucked her feet underneath her,

Feet?

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Fixed.

My curiosity satisfied, I leaned over her wing and brushed her cheek. “You feel like-” she was sound asleep. Apparently I had been more soothing than erotic.

Fuuuuuuuu-

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On the plus side, she will be surely interested in repeat.

Bah ha ha ha, tough luck for this poor bastard.

This is really good so far. I'm liking the buildup and the glimpses at this facet of the world. Key & Shane are great together and have some interesting banter. Onward to the rest.

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Y'know, I've actually had this happen myself a couple of times while giving a massage. Honestly it never really bothered me when it happened because it denotes a level of trust & care that is very deep; plus the attention you tend to get when she wakes up tends to make it worthwhile.

Apparently I had been more soothing than erotic.

That's not a bad thing. Geisha performed more services than simply sex, after all, and different people have different ideas of relaxing, though that probably wasn't her original intention. Maybe he could take up being a masseuse. Even in THIS world that makes alot of money if you're good at it. Given that only a few races in Equestria have fingers (and Dragon fingers are clawed) he;d prolly have no end of customers.

“Peg, we’re making out right now, aren’t we?”

“Yea.”

“Thanks for the heads up.”

with first master

with a first master

Oh... you unlucky bugger. Still, I might have to steal the idea that a proper wing massage sends a pegasus (mare or stallion) to sleep.

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Cock blocked by mister sandman!

STI's

Sexually transmitted...infants?

4651699 FUCKING BEST JOKE EVER!!!!!!!!!!!! so good...

STI’s

This aint subaru we're talking about ... I think you meant STDs (sexually transmitted disease) but i guess illness could work aswell, but STD is more wide spread

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I know this is kind of an old comment, but since I didn't see anyone mention it, it stands for Sexually Transmitted Infection.
Then again you may have just been setting up for that Subaru joke.
I'd apologize, but Subarus don't need setting up to be a joke.

My curiosity satisfied, I leaned over her wing and brushed her cheek. “You feel like-” she was sound asleep. Apparently I had been more soothing than erotic.

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The color and structure were fantasizing. I think you mean fascinating.

Typos... TYPOS FUCKING EVERYWHERE!!!

"“Peg, we’re making out right now, aren’t we?”

“Yea.”

“Thanks for the heads up.”

Key Peg looked back at me with a grin. “I tried to tell you.”

”Just shut up and keep your hooves to yourself.” " Cool!!!!

6287941 Oooooooooooooooooooh

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Tail as old as time.

Ааааа, конеёб!

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The link to the article was most amusing. Thank you