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Huh I liked this chapter. His reaction to a changeling seemed genuine and his concern about what to do with abused ponies adds some nice depth to Shane. I'm continually surprised at how much this is a great story with clop and NOT clop with a bit of story.
Keep up the good work.
Methinks Shane has a regular.
That was excellent. I loved his reaction to Doll's true form and I also liked how he combined work and studying at the end there. It was also interesting to hear about how they deal with abuse cases, and having the cafe manager be a former stud was a very nice touch.
This is still really good and interesting, keep up the good work!
CALLED IT!
Let's hope "Doll" becomes a regular. You know...for food.
And her name wouldn't happen to be a nod to Changling Doll, would it?
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Caught me.
I picked this up expecting something else entirely, but found myself presently surprised. Please keep up the excellent work.
NOOOOOOOOOOO! YOU CHANGED IT! IT WAS SO SUBTLY PERFEEEEEECT!
RIP soft body extension
Happy ending is always good. Now I'm wondering if he'll find other changelings from time to time. Word of mouth is powerful, and she's extremely well off for now, which might be unusual. But she's rather isolated, so..
I'm actually curious if he's the bottom of the 'picking order', like he's pondered. An interlude would be interesting. I have to admit, getting poorer or down to earth customers is probably more interesting than snooty nobility.
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If you like it, you'd enjoy the British scifi comedy book series "Red Dwarf".
There are a lot of parts where it helps the reader understand what lead to the events that the main character experiences by telling the story some time prior from the perspective of a ship component or a mop (there's even one case where it's a fake rubber plant in an office corner).
It's an AMAZING series, and I highly recommend it!
(I'm pretty sure you can find all 4 books on amazon.)
Awww, these chapters always feel so short.
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Well, as long as she doesn't start spouting off user instructions, we'll be good.
Problem I see is if he's too good, then others will show up and leave him a drained wreck.
However... 10 bits says he confides this cute "cuddlebug" of a client to Celestia. I have a feeling she is the only one he can tell all the dark secrets to, the kind that invariably turn up when humans are asked about everything of "Earth"; the good, the bad, and the ugly. Celestia will probably not see a problem since this is a lone changeling and might even take steps to try and integrate them into Equestria, turning a potential enemy into an asset and a highly valuable one at that. Might need to make some sort of pony version of the Witness Protection Service to help changelings seeking asylum in Equestria-- assuming it doesn't already exist.
You know, that set of books is almost too obvious of foreshadowing his ultralight acting more like chapter "Intermission: The Little Red Baron" than a pile of aluminum and canvas. Not that there's anything wrong with a happy plane. Heck, it might even cajole other non-pegasi to consider the applications a fast and nimble aircraft has versus the slow ponderous flight of airships. Taking the idea further, scale up the airship, add a landing strip, and you have a carrier. I doubt there'll be a sudden industrial revolution anytime soon so pegasi will still be needed to pull chariots in those fast-travel small-capacity situations, heh.
Nice chapter, even tho I would have liked to see Rag Doll just be a normal pony in need of some TLC. I'm really curious to see where things go from here. Lot's of new characters showing up, but I have to wonder if they'll mean something more down the road, or are just guest stars of the week.
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I changed it back, just for you.
Commence read.
Great stuff.
Glad that all went well and ideas about the world continue on.
Glad to see this story back on my watch list! It kinda disappeared there for a week or so.
While I haven't even read this, have a thumbs up for the title alone.
On a mostly unrelated note, socioeconomically-unfortunate males should stay away from this one.
Whenever a story that started a long time ago updates and continues to be good, I simply wonder, why can't I upvote stories more than once?
6470664 plenty of non-christian/non-jewish/non-muslim religions value virginity as purity. all of them really. Some even place male virginity on a pedestal alongside female too.
Really looking forward to the next chapter...
Got to re-reading through this and noticed... he's talking to a 'Rose' here, but isn't her name Ruby? It's even Ruby once during their dialogue and Rose the rest of the time. Are there two mares in the office, or...?
He got himself a girlfriend