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ok i guess
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I have a whole arc outlined with him. Weather or not to make it a separate story is my big question.
“Yeah, definitely okay.
“Yeah... rinse off...,”
Not sure if this is a correction at all. Just not heard/seen 'yea' for affirmation before.
bobbed her head just a bit
shower, the
Drop the comma
A yellow aura
Well... if all it takes to get a mare is a shower and grooming session, I'm off to get some combs!
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Thanks, fixed.
O sweet Jesus Batman, it's back and better than ever.
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One day I may have to write, The Twilight Between Them. I have a rough idea of what it the outline would look like.
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https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=ij8KWdiDnMk
I always remember my first clients whenever I do something new
I guess that would go double for the first client for something like this, huh?
I loved it! Please tell me there's
a new chapterseveral new chapters coming out. Like, preferably tomorrow.I noticed a few spelling goofs. The one that sprung mostly to my eyes were "there" being replaced by "their".
When The Animals sing their song that gave this story its name, they start out with:
"There is a house in New Orleans..."♪♫
Also, it seems there's a bit of confusion between the words "main" and "mane". I don't know if that is intentional, but otherwise it goes, "Rainbow's main talent is not her colorful mane, but her flying skills"
But enough yakking about goofs (I just did that because I love the story) - Please, please write more of this story!
A suggestion about The Baron: gasoline might not be something easily found in Equestria. But if it is a Diesel engine, it might run on canola oil (with a little adjustment, perhaps). Otherwise, he might fit it to run on alcohol.
I've been wondering if he will be able to have spare parts made for The Baron. The canvas won't be a problem, but good steel an especially the precision required to produce engine parts (say, a piston) might be more than the ponies can make. Magic can save you there (poof, it's there - tadaaa!), but as you yourself mentioned, they are (mostly) pre-industrial. Things like a turning lathe might not exist. But then again, they have managed to build a steam locomotive. So either they have some advanced tools, or they've compensated with magic.
How technical is Shane? If he could get his engine working, and then - with some pony help - make another, he could give them cars and Diesel trains.
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I'd like to point out a bit of trivia. The Animals did not make House of the Rising Sun, they merely released a popular version of it.
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inb4 celestia hears about it, maybe Luna would like that too.
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Aw-shoot. I made the same mistake as those who think Metallica made Whiskey in the Jar or Madonna wrote American Pie. Woe is me. But thanks for educating me :-)
Many musicians have sung House of the Rising Sun. I like Dolly Parton's version. But maybe that's just because I like her milk-and-honey voice...
Fuuuuuuu-!
I was hoping for a longer chapter for the whole date, complete with a full-fledged, wild, intense session of ball-slapping sex.
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I say, that we should just hope for another chapter to come out, hopefully with some (more) hot action...and we should hope it will come soon...
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It's in the works. Have two weeks off for Christmas. Might get out a couple chapters.
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Ah, yes. Nothing like some holidays for us to think up new adventures for our fourlegged polycromatic friends...
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Fillet, as in fillet knife, or fillet of fish.
Man, this job is hard!
I actually would not want this job!
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He's good at it as well.
From a professional job like this, no less is acceptable.
Obviously he's TOO good for his almost utter lack of experience.
But it wouldn't be a fun story without some inconsistencies.
Seriously though IR, it would have a first year certificate in a post-secondary institution as a minimal requirement of the job.
And that's to be a fallible, low rates amateur.
Mane, not name.
I assumed you meant mane