• Published 6th Jan 2014
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Destinies Entwined - Graphic Refrain



Their lives had always seemed wrong; they had hidden it from everyone, but soon two ponies would find that they are not so different from one another as it seemed.

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Pink and Blue

Destinies Entwined

Pink & Blue

by Technomare


Pink and blue

A whole different hue

Together they had started.

For what one had to steal

Did the other conceal

Two colts, the fates had parted.




Obscured by the night

And driven by fright

One colt did aimlessly wander.

The source of his strife

Throughout all his life

He was left to eternally ponder.


And his brother in day

Would his gaze go astray

A reprimand - harsh - would follow.

His expression was sure

And his manner demure

While internally he was hollow.




Twists and Turns

The cold wind burns

Speaking words of kindness untrue.

He alights in the dark

And makes such remarks

With his coat, clad in flowery blue.


The parallel path

Bears identical wrath

A sea of despair is the drink.

He revels in light

Of his unending blight

Repaired, with a pristine pink.




When dusk meets the dawn

And the masks are undrawn

Were never two ponies so true.

Two mares once divided

Now their fates coincided

These ponies are pink and blue


Only by joy and sorrow does a pony know anything about themselves and their destiny.

~Johann Wolfgang von Hoefthe

Author's Note:

So, that concludes Destinies Entwined, as a good epilogue - in my opinion.

I might make a follow up if I feel up to it or have the time, however I found I really like doing one part quick stories like Sheet Music, so in the meantime you'll probably see some more of that.

P.S. I actually had this done before the chapter before this, which Is why It's taken a while to update, and also why I'm releasing two on the same day.

Comments ( 8 )

follow up! :yay:

Loved it! A sequal/continuation would be awesome.

Awesome, I'm really glad you liked it. You can check my blog for more info :twilightsmile:

I liked this story. Managed to tell quite a bit in a very short amount of space. I now wonder what I will do if my sibling turns out to be a sister.

A little short, but definitely got it's point across. I look forward if you have any stories or sequels with same themes in the future. :twilightsmile:

Thanks Froey and Cyborg.

I have been pretty inactive lately, but I plan to change that -- perhaps with a sequel

This story has the shortest chapters I have ever seen. Well I guess I shouldn't let that stop me.

A pleasant read, but it felt way to short for the ammount of time it spanned. Would have felt more natural if it happened over a week rather than half a year.

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