Early Equestria, full of dangers ranging from monsters to pirates. The last thing it needs is for a crazed human wearing a suit of battle armour to appear and claim to be the 'Lord of The Sea!'
She uses dreams all the time to talk to people, pretty much everywhere, in fact, she even used it to get to know Nigel better in another story of yours....
Other than that, nice chapter so far, looking forward to this stuff....
On a side note, if betrayal and magic are supposed to be what defeats Nigel, don't the turrets and robot things pretty much shoot and attack anything showing hostility to a friendly? Even if someone is deemed safe, Nigel should, and I mean SHOULD have the brains to make the turrets have priority safe targets. Just saying if betrayal is what brings him down, I will be disappointed.
That fate of the country, and the world, will be decided in the next, and final, chapter.
I hope you aren't serious about that. I feel like the story still has tons still left to be told. Yea, I'm just hoping that was meant as an overly dramatic piece for the next chapter.
“Are you kidding?” Nigel answered with a chuckle. “Hell, they’d find it hilarious. I mean, one man taking over an entire backwater planet? Golden! The fact that the suit alone preforms this well is likely to get me off any charges that anyone could possibly level.”
Sounds like a fun people.
I love everything little thing about this chapter, I couldn't possibly just comment on one thing! So, insert long drawn-out comment here about everything I loved about the chapter.
Although, if Celestia defeats Nigel, again, then I would be very disappointed with him. Celestia banished him to hell in your other story, but he has so much more in this story that it should be impossible to lose!
Don't forget that he gets kicked out (if I remember correctly) of hell in the sequel. Also, Celestia alone couldn't banish him, she need Luna's help to send him there.
5045314 Oh I know, it is just the fact that he got put there in the first place. I don't blame him though, not like he had a fancy powersuit to protect him or anything. This fic he has a fancy powersuit and high-tech defences. If he loses then I call shenanigans. Like, Discord worthy shenanigans... Oh shit what if-
5044670 But at the same time they can't do ANYTHING to Nigel, anything that stops Nigel's kinetic movement (eg. encasing him, sealing him....) destabilizes the perpetual balance of the 4 antimatter generators and they will explode............... Good bye a big bit of their galaxy.
She uses dreams all the time to talk to people, pretty much everywhere, in fact, she even used it to get to know Nigel better in another story of yours....
Ah, but did they think to use a dream to lure someone 'on the inside' over to their cause, as well as use it to impart knowledge in order to stage an attack?
Just saying if betrayal is what brings him down, I will be disappointed
Just saying that if he goes down, it will take far more than two alicorns and a unicorn. There's still many plans to be put into action.
Welp, looks like Platinum is going to die eventually. Even if she helped take down Nigel, I doubt she would survive to see the fruits of her betrayal. Keep up the good work!
5045314 The most evil thing in Tarturus kicks Chalmers out of Hell, For being too much of an insane psycho murdering badass. Satan just came up and was all like NO, Oh Hell No don't you EVER send his ass back here again. He's too much of a badass.
I smell chaos hilarity antics shenanigans and death and blood shed on the horizon yep tzeentch would be proud or just had a cup of joe or is laughing like light yagami
If you ask me, I sense a double-crossing on the part of the Alicorn Sisters. Think about it; a sole unicorn, who almost everyone in Equestria hates, against two alicorns, who could possibly rally the earth ponies, pegasi and unicorns alike against Platinum? Her betrayal isn't going to end well.
And that's if Nigel doesn't get even with her first.
*le me skimming through HaS recommendations thread* Oh hey PPP lemme just go see if there were any new chapters *le clicks and notices three unread chapters* Wtf fimfic?! *latches into story like starving wolf onto meat slab* Fucking damnit dropbear I have to sleep!
There would of course have to be: 'Normal' Nigel Female Nigel Sterotypical Black Nigel Gay Nigel British Gentleman Nigel Hyper-Intellegent Nigel Bogan Nigel Short Nigel Super-Religous Nigel And last but not least, Nigel from a planet in the forteenth century where they never invented the wheel.
*Sigh* It begins. Celestial and Luna are once again acting like Conniving B*tches without even getting to know him. Seriously what's with their self righteous "holier than thou" attitude that they seem to posses in almost every fic everywhere? Still, good job with the story anyway I really want to see where this is going. I just hope the story ends well.
Why do alicorns always act like that in the fics? And why do they always win? Gosh, I am hoping against hope that at least once the "Godnesses" will be defeated and driven back. Who are these arrogant bitches who come to a planet and think they can just take over with their OP magic (that serves only to break the natural order of things in order to create a safeguard for their unquestioned rule) and cunning tactics with brainwashing? Fuck them and their ways! Seriously, I need a fic where Celestia dies either by human/s or by ponies finding out she lied about controlling the sun.
5856699 i wish that this were a more popular opinion, not to start a flame-war on dropbears front door, but she runs into the same problems that we run into when we talk about god, why is there evil when there is this supposedly omnipotent, semi-prescient, completely benevolent being in the universe? even though she can directly talk to her subjects (unlike other deities i could mention) her "reasons" behind her plans seem misguided, and the plans themselves are so unnecessarily complex and inefficient. I actually had this idea a while back (i'm a wuss so i cant actually carry it out) where only one man comes to equestria, (would try to avoid HiE cliches) and, being raised in a separate culture, one that has had corrupt, theocratic governments before (north Korea...) and inadvertently starts a civil war, though maybe not the standard solar empire vs new lunar republic setting
no...it can't be. I congratulate you on accomplishing what I thought no mortal could do. You've made me (gulp) BE DISAPPOINTED IN LUNA!!! HOW COULD YOOOOOOOUUUUUU!!!
I can foresee the Nigel M charmers Emperor incident happening all over again. Ding ding. 'Hello?' This is Nigel. I have a one way ticket to the underworld. Access DENIED!
Out of the doorway walked the Commander, a large metal plate heaped with food in his arms. They all stared at the piles of fried eggs, buttered toast, yet more eggs scrambled, pancakes and even a heap of muffins. With a grunt, the armoured human placed the bounty down in the middle, a further stack of plates following it.
Ummm, eggs, I feel that should be uncomfortable for them, cause meat
Nigel vs 2 alicorns and a unicorn?
i like those odds
I'm betting that history will remember Celestia and Luna as the most evil ponies to ever walk Equestria.
She uses dreams all the time to talk to people, pretty much everywhere, in fact, she even used it to get to know Nigel better in another story of yours....
Other than that, nice chapter so far, looking forward to this stuff....
On a side note, if betrayal and magic are supposed to be what defeats Nigel, don't the turrets and robot things pretty much shoot and attack anything showing hostility to a friendly? Even if someone is deemed safe, Nigel should, and I mean SHOULD have the brains to make the turrets have priority safe targets. Just saying if betrayal is what brings him down, I will be disappointed.
I hope you aren't serious about that. I feel like the story still has tons still left to be told. Yea, I'm just hoping that was meant as an overly dramatic piece for the next chapter.
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UIP comes and kicks everyone's asses. Nigel and his little family goes on spaceship.
Ze End.
Sounds like a fun people.
I love everything little thing about this chapter, I couldn't possibly just comment on one thing! So, insert long drawn-out comment here about everything I loved about the chapter.
Although, if Celestia defeats Nigel, again, then I would be very disappointed with him. Celestia banished him to hell in your other story, but he has so much more in this story that it should be impossible to lose!
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Don't forget that he gets kicked out (if I remember correctly) of hell in the sequel. Also, Celestia alone couldn't banish him, she need Luna's help to send him there.
isn't that suit of his filled with 5 nuke worthy explosives?
i.picresize.com/images/2014/09/23/eBXlD.png Put it all on Chalmers!
5045314 Oh I know, it is just the fact that he got put there in the first place. I don't blame him though, not like he had a fancy powersuit to protect him or anything. This fic he has a fancy powersuit and high-tech defences. If he loses then I call shenanigans. Like, Discord worthy shenanigans... Oh shit what if-
5045391 no, enough explosives to destroy the world
I vote they all attack him with magic.
That way he can get some serious kink on.
I think that all it would take for Luna's plan to go to shit would be Platinum finding out that Nigel isn't really buddy-buddy with Sombra.
The calm before the storm...
Also, BUCK YOU PLATINUM!
And finally, Nigel please don't lose, because I want to see you troll the insanity out to all those who dare fight against you. It'll be fun that way!
"Hey, see all this nifty shit I got? Yeah, when I take over and my people show up, everyone'll have it."
Thats all he's gotta say
+ sequel?
???
5044670 But at the same time they can't do ANYTHING to Nigel, anything that stops Nigel's kinetic movement (eg. encasing him, sealing him....) destabilizes the perpetual balance of the 4 antimatter generators and they will explode............... Good bye a big bit of their galaxy.
5044816
Ah, but did they think to use a dream to lure someone 'on the inside' over to their cause, as well as use it to impart knowledge in order to stage an attack?
Just saying that if he goes down, it will take far more than two alicorns and a unicorn. There's still many plans to be put into action.
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You keep quite there...
5046470
I do have a love for sequels...
5046765
But do they know that?
He shouldn't have given them the instant coffee maker. Nothing good can come of it.
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If only you knew what plans I have for it...
Love the story, can't wait to see what comes next.
~Aku.
Welp, looks like Platinum is going to die eventually. Even if she helped take down Nigel, I doubt she would survive to see the fruits of her betrayal. Keep up the good work!
5045314 The most evil thing in Tarturus kicks Chalmers out of Hell, For being too much of an insane psycho murdering badass. Satan just came up and was all like NO, Oh Hell No don't you EVER send his ass back here again. He's too much of a badass.
5044577 i don't
not enough victims >:D
I smell chaos hilarity antics shenanigans and death and blood shed on the horizon yep tzeentch would be proud or just had a cup of joe or is laughing like light yagami
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Well, it's like, you have a sword that's curved on one side, and one that's straight here, and a dagger somewhere else.
Naturally if the curved or straight sword can't be used, you would use the dagger, ya know?
platinuum~
why you such a bichin traitur ;~;
abuush in ur fece iz wat u needz.
alsxzo, luna haz metal capacity thingy majigger :f
I don't know if 'cunning' is the right word here...seems more like 'foolish' and 'gullible' would be better adjectives.
If you ask me, I sense a double-crossing on the part of the Alicorn Sisters. Think about it; a sole unicorn, who almost everyone in Equestria hates, against two alicorns, who could possibly rally the earth ponies, pegasi and unicorns alike against Platinum? Her betrayal isn't going to end well.
And that's if Nigel doesn't get even with her first.
Just saying.
5055275 Mother is God.....
*le me skimming through HaS recommendations thread*
Oh hey PPP lemme just go see if there were any new chapters
*le clicks and notices three unread chapters*
Wtf fimfic?!
*latches into story like starving wolf onto meat slab*
Fucking damnit dropbear I have to sleep!
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That would be a lot of work.
There would of course have to be:
'Normal' Nigel
Female Nigel
Sterotypical Black Nigel
Gay Nigel
British Gentleman Nigel
Hyper-Intellegent Nigel
Bogan Nigel
Short Nigel
Super-Religous Nigel
And last but not least, Nigel from a planet in the forteenth century where they never invented the wheel.
So yeah, that would take some work.
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NIGELCON INSERT YEAR HERE! WOOO!
*stamps papers 'Approved'* Welcome to Favoritstan. Cause no trouble.
About when can we expect the final chapter? Is it gonna be a Christmas present to us or something?
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Well, at the moment it will be done sometime after I get the current chapter of Revenge is a Dish Best Served Cold out. Hopefully soon.
Platinum...if you betray Nigel after all this, I swear to go you are just as much of a bitch, if not more so, than Sombra.
*Sigh* It begins. Celestial and Luna are once again acting like Conniving B*tches without even getting to know him. Seriously what's with their self righteous "holier than thou" attitude that they seem to posses in almost every fic everywhere? Still, good job with the story anyway I really want to see where this is going. I just hope the story ends well.
Why do alicorns always act like that in the fics? And why do they always win?
Gosh, I am hoping against hope that at least once the "Godnesses" will be defeated and driven back. Who are these arrogant bitches who come to a planet and think they can just take over with their OP magic (that serves only to break the natural order of things in order to create a safeguard for their unquestioned rule) and cunning tactics with brainwashing?
Fuck them and their ways! Seriously, I need a fic where Celestia dies either by human/s or by ponies finding out she lied about controlling the sun.
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M8 you almost forget these Nigels
Illuminate Nigel
Changling Nigel
The Nigel that came from the future
Foetus telepathic Nigel in a tank
Living Cheese Nigel
Nigel the alien cat (or whatever species of alien cat the the present Nigel use to have for a pet.)
And Permently crippled all over for life Nigel.
5856699 i wish that this were a more popular opinion, not to start a flame-war on dropbears front door, but she runs into the same problems that we run into when we talk about god, why is there evil when there is this supposedly omnipotent, semi-prescient, completely benevolent being in the universe? even though she can directly talk to her subjects (unlike other deities i could mention) her "reasons" behind her plans seem misguided, and
the plans themselves are so unnecessarily complex and inefficient. I actually had this idea a while back (i'm a wuss so i cant actually carry it out) where only one man comes to equestria, (would try to avoid HiE cliches) and, being raised in a separate culture, one that has had corrupt, theocratic governments before (north Korea...) and inadvertently starts a civil war, though maybe not the standard solar empire vs new lunar republic setting
5784780 Answer: Discord. We all know they demonized this prankster and made him a real villain. The princesses have this attitude.
Why do you make me hate the princesses Dropbear?
KILL THEM. END THEIR LIVES AND TAKE OVER THE WORLD.
So Luna is the one being antagonistic for once, interesting....
no...it can't be. I congratulate you on accomplishing what I thought no mortal could do. You've made me (gulp) BE DISAPPOINTED IN LUNA!!! HOW COULD YOOOOOOOUUUUUU!!!
I can foresee the Nigel M charmers Emperor incident happening all over again.
Ding ding.
'Hello?'
This is Nigel.
I have a one way ticket to the underworld.
Access DENIED!
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Just remembered what happens when someone uses a spell on him
Ummm, eggs, I feel that should be uncomfortable for them, cause meat