Most, if not all bronies would love to meet the mane six, or even one of the background ponies, just to meet them and say how much they love the show and all of that. But what if, instead of you meeting them, they meet you?
Well, this is what happened to a fairly new brony. He may have known the show for about a year, but he loved it more than anything. When a simple wish turns out to be true, he is in for the ride of his life.
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Oh my word, that title! future tip don't put OC in your title. Honestly this is an extremely tired and worn off concept for your first story
Also Pinkie is a bit out of character, for example
I can't imagine her saying this i imagine it being more along the lines of
I dunno thats just how I see Pinkie anyways good luck!
3724565 thanks for the tips, really appreciate it :)
It seemed like a great story from reading the description, innocent of any cliches or signs of bad fiction...
Then the grammar just dropped to shit.
3724578 Hey no problem buddy, I'm relatively new here myself but I know a little bit about what gets popular and what generally goes around on this site as well as grammar and such
It was good. Short but good. I think I would react the same way, but with a little more excitement rather than questions.
A good story, but what's with the part where Write loses his memory? Is that going to come back later? I cant tell since it doesn't seem very meaningful. Another thing i found unclear is Discord just happening to know everything. Did he grant the wish? Is he an all-knowing being now? I also find myself pausing to question hair physics when Twilight's mane undoes itself because she's upset... Other than that i kinda like it so far.
3755956 I have plans for all of these things, they will come back and be explained. I'm also glad you're liking it so far, this story has gotten a lot more support than I originally thought it would and I really do appreciate it, thank you :)
Nice ending, a bit short to me, but I love it. Maybe make a chapter of him being back at earth and everybody being worried about him. And maybe, him seeing his OC on a MLP episode.
3768099 Thanks for the suggestions, I'll defeinitly keep these in mind. (Shadow pony cliff hanger time)
3768597 Your Welcome. I just want to see the Aftermath in this story before you end it.
Even better ending! I loved it when everyone bowed to Princess Celestia. (Brony or Non) this is now my favorite complete book!