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Reliance

Donut Joe really isn't the kind of pony you want to lean on and cry to. But, it seems he's developing a knack for it. Thunderlane and Rumble are having problems, and they seem to be depending on him. Or at least they're being narrated to him.

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melodicstream

melodicstream #1 · Jan 28th, 2014 · · ·

Nice writing, but it looks like it has no point. Maybe you should try and switch the focus to Thunderlane for explaining how much he misses Rumble. Or maybe you should switch the focus to Rumble when he was receiving his grades. Otherwise the story gets really shallow, like "oh, Rumble got bad grades. Here's what happened next."

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