I like this. Please continue.

Not the best dialog I've ever seen, but I love the concept and just how this is turning out overall.
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lel, R69 King Sombra

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Good things do not last forever comrade

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OH NO YOU DIDN`T!!!

The ending was a bit rushed so it may not have been as sad as you were aiming for. YES make a sequel! This story has great potential and I would love to read it!

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I plan to add some Nazi Zombies to a part of the sequel.

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*Evil Laughing*

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That pink... thing! XD

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Derp, my fault. You learn from your mistakes

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I acknowledged my damn mistake, why do you fucking keep shoving it into my fucking face?!

3757498 Ill go get the chalk and the crate,You get the BEAR!s and the soda machines

Waiting in anticipation, over here.
Nice, good, human-unstoppable-war-machine-rampage story.

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Because you can hit the edit button and fix it.

Cyka needs to learn to operative his pony words internet objekt.

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I did a day ago

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I don't think 'ya hit "save" then.
Unless you managed to jam your FiMFic, in which case you are very much an American.

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Some days I wish I was a Russian

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Aye, at least they can build machinery designed to work anywhere but a lab.

Pic related: Eugene Stoner in his natural habitat.
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I think we found Molestias Brother....

I have no idea if I like this or not.
The concept is great, but it looks like yousa needs da engrish lessons.
Work on grammer and you'll be good.
Real good.

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I have always sucked at grammer

So many weapons next he will just spawn carp with his mind. Love the story.

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As the Sniper says: Nah.

Honestly... MOAR! this is too awesome to go without a threequel *(onting the "stryker saves canterlot" story)

As te zoidberg said "More MORE MORE!

As te zoidberg said "More MORE MORE!

Ah, I was wondering why this never showed up on your profile! Didn't have 'dat Mature enabled. I dig it.

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Fader vår som som är i himmelen helgat varde ditt namn
Tillkomme ditt rike ske din vilja
Såsom i himmelen så ock uppå jorden ge oss bröd ock idag
Och förlåt oss våran skuld

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Oh what to meet a Russian because I'm one don't know Russia but I can be you friend

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The threequel, needs to have a copious amount of Fifth-Generation Fighter Jet aircraft (I.e., the Lockheed-Martin F-22 'Raptor', the Mikoyan LMFS - a.k.a. the Mikoyan Gurevich MiG-1.27, the Sukhoi PAK-FA, the Chengdu J-20, the Shenyang J-31, the Chengdu Aircraft Industry Group / Pakistan Aeronautical Complex JF-17/FC-1, the Turkish Aerospace Industries TFX, the Korean Aerospace Industries/Indonesian Aerospace KF-X/IF-X, the Mitsubishi ATD-X, the Hindustan Aeronautics AMCA, Northrop YF-23, or the Swedish-developed, Saab JAS Greipen-based Flygsystem 2020) performing in complete and utter BAMF-like situations and roles....

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You did your homework. XD

The tone seemed to be all over the place, but I still liked it. I would like to see a sequel involving Celestia and Luna's reactions/interview with the pilot and even the ponies examining what's left of the choppah.

Also, Shining is actually dead? Did he at least leave Cadance with a future tiny somepony to remember him by?